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The Jewelry Case by BillMann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.

 

Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.

Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Odor, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20967 Read Count: 176174
[Report This] Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 28 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

Absolutely perfect! My absolute favourite wnglish-language story. You have my unending gratitude, and I eagerly await future works. Fingers crossed for more cute, sweaty and perver schoolgirls and tiny insignificant toys.

The Virus by Prodi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A young nurse arrives at her working place at the hospital to find everyone has disappeared. The police is completely in the dark and this is only the beginning...


Categories: BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Legwear, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93602 Read Count: 121042
[Report This] Published: October 16 2014 Updated: November 12 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Ground Zero

Superb!

Love what you've got so far. I'm not sure how you're going to continue, since the police coming and whatnot probably means the end of the fun, but I'll trust you on this, haha.

 

Loved the unaware fates of the shrunk characters so far. I kinda wish the first girl's struggling in the tissue and gum could have been continued, but im a sucker for bodily fluids stuff. Similarly it wouldve been nice for me for the brother to have remained attached to his unaware sister a little longer.

 

Loojing forward to the next part - keep up the amazing work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.

The Elite 50 by Haloichigo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

In the near future, the United States goes into social and economical collapse, but a group of 50 wealthy families and individuals decide to leave and live on 50 manmade planets while taking from the earth to support themselves, but it turns out these planets are nothing more than tiny spheres in a bunker and things become grim when they are discovered by a teenage girl who has devilish and sexy ideas for the tiny planets. Living in the boring slums, she now finds a way to have fun and enact her revenge by subjecting billions to her whims and to make things worst she is not opposed to having friends and family join in on the fun. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, BBW, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42619 Read Count: 168548
[Report This] Published: January 16 2015 Updated: May 20 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Absolutely superb! If we could get move of these kinds of creative methods for ending the planets, I'll be overjoyed. Unaware would be amazing too. Maybe some butt action?



Author's Response:

thanks! There will be some more unaware and butt action soon.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Another superb update. Looking forward to the next one!

I'd personally like to see more planets and inhabitants survive longer - I love the idea in this chapter of thousands of people surviving amongsr the damo fibres of a girl's sock or between her toes, and previously entirr landmasses adhering to the snot and hairs in a girls's nose as she goes about her day to day life. Maybe a couple planets could be strategically placed, then shrunk to being to small to see and even forgotten about?

 

Also would love some butt stuff. The idea of a planet fitting neatly into a girl's anus before being snapped by it's contraction is amazing. Could even have the tiny germs live on in the wrinkles around the hole, and perhaps on the walls inside...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I would allow some of the planets and inhabitants to survive, but I can't for story purposes, since the girls fear the Elite 50 making contact with any normal sized people who could help them, so they want to get rid of them all with no survivors. Yet I do like the living on the wrinkles idea, it might be something I include during my next story.

I hope the next chapter will be up to your liking and that you continue to give it your support, once again thanks for the comment. I love to hear what the readers think of the chapter and what they think I should include to make the story better. Some ideas will be included in this current story while other ideas will be a driving force in my future stories.

Saving Nancy by Luidgi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Nancy studies at St-Lawrence's private school for girls and right at the beginning of the school year, she managed to become the whole school's footslave, and she likes it. As a therapy, the school's principal decided that shrinking Nancy would change the game and save her from those weird and uncommon desires. 

Enough said.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3397 Read Count: 77973
[Report This] Published: May 19 2015 Updated: June 13 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: How it is going to be solved.

Great story. I really want to see more at the really small end. 1/8th in. sounds a lot of fun, she could be trapped between toes and under nails and be mistaken for lint, and even be forgotten in there.



Author's Response:

haha, your imagination is on the same wavelength as mine, tho I am not planning to write more of this story now, I think it's finished, but with the door opened for a sequel if I ever feel like writing one down. 

 

thanks for reading!

Fleck by STC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

I wrote something for someone who touched me in a very special way.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1432 Read Count: 7946
[Report This] Published: July 09 2015 Updated: July 09 2015
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely superb. I'd love to read more like this.

Truth or Shrink by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 137]
Summary:

A day in the life of a compulsive liar who just happens to exist in a world where failing to tell the truth results in shrinking, leaving him at the mercy of his family, friends, and teachers.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Truth or Shrink
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27818 Read Count: 314216
[Report This] Published: August 27 2015 Updated: December 22 2015
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Man, the offhand recollections of suffering under sweaty gym clothes etc would make a fine chapter itself. Would love to see more of that,maybe even at a tinier size. The mention of in-shoe is also exciting :)



Author's Response:

Hehe. We might see those offhand recollections, though part of what makes them interesting to me is that such events make up those casual conversations. But there will be more unpleasant situations to come, either way.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: October 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

That aside about being crumb sized and trapped in saliva-laden gum under an unaware girl's shoe was phenomenal! Would love to get more of that!



Author's Response:

Hehe. Maybe in a future story.

A Moment of Weakness by tokubetsu Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A young man decides to indulce himself in a simple perversion one morning, only to suffer a rather bizarre and unfortunate fate.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Incest, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2377 Read Count: 79741
[Report This] Published: September 17 2015 Updated: September 17 2015
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: September 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I made the decision to revise the grammar of the story and make it all nice uniform past tense. The "ongoing situation" style was something I'd wanted to try, but led to some wierd mismatches and made it awkward. Also fixed some typos I didnt catch the first time around.

Ice cream adventure! by TwoTailedMoon Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Two teenage best friends finally get to live out the fantasy of sledding down a mountain of ice cream; however, things don't go quite as planned. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: M/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4232 Read Count: 13729
[Report This] Published: November 28 2015 Updated: November 28 2015
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good! Would love to see more like this. Unaware siblings are my jive



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I've actually written bunch of other stories with unaware sibling interaction like this one. 

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Thank all you guys for the warm welcome! ^ - ^ 

Learning LeShae by 87Thirty2 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Erin never liked LeShae. But are the feelings mutual?


Categories: Vore, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26489 Read Count: 98797
[Report This] Published: January 20 2016 Updated: August 18 2022
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: December 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: LeShae's Boots

there's a real lack of good micro nose content, so I'm so glad you took the time to write this. I'd be interested to see chapters on: navel, toenails, anus.

Weekend At Home by Oblivious Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

When Mike's plan for the weekend with his friend get canceled, he figured he would just have to spend the weekend at home with his mom and three sisters. He wasn't entirely wrong about that...


Categories: Giantess, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45035 Read Count: 281683
[Report This] Published: February 05 2016 Updated: June 29 2017
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Canceled

In my opinion this last chapter was one of the best I've read. Thank you for your superb work!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I aprreciate it!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: October 15 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Canceled

The stuck in teeth part was marvellous. I hope he ends up stuck in otherunusual and humiliating parts of his sisters' bodies.



Author's Response:

Thanks! He's gonna get stuck somewhere soon, but it's not what your expecting!!

Experimentation by Bananaman1 Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A young woman is subjected to experimentation involving giants and shrinking in a strange, twisted and unknown environment.

Basically each chapter will be a different scenario the main character has to make it out of. They could be any topic really but will tie into one larger story.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7322 Read Count: 33799
[Report This] Published: May 19 2016 Updated: June 01 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: June 02 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really enjoying the micro/nano aspects here, and can't wait for more.

Might I request/suggest that at her new tiny hight that she be tasked with cleaning/servicing some tiny crevices? Under some toenails comes to mind - a tiny little slave working imperceptibly in the tiny space beneath.

Friends Like These by Survivor Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

In a world where a small percentage of the population falls victim to a shrinking disorder, one teenager gives in to her darker desires.

And then convinces her friend to do so as well. 


Categories: Humiliation, Butt, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Unaware, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14275 Read Count: 30901
[Report This] Published: May 20 2016 Updated: May 20 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Whole Damn Thing

Absolutely Amazing. I'm unfortunately not big on vore, but the foot stuff was perfect to me. The between toes/toe jam stuff especially. I'd love to see more of that, more butt stuff too. Would be great to get a character to have her friend unknowingly torture tinies with her feet, maybe hide them in her skin cream or tight or such.

Like Mother, Like Daughter 2: In Her Shoes by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

After becoming accidentally trapped in his sister Becky’s shoe, Mark has an unusual lesson to learn on shrunken safety, courtesy of his mother and sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9762 Read Count: 99054
[Report This] Published: May 21 2016 Updated: June 16 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: June 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really enjoying this. I'd be interested to know how small he can be made.



Author's Response:

Thanks! He can go down to one inch.

Far From The Tree by Survivor Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Anna is a single mother who is barely capable of keeping up with her young, strong-willed daughter, Alice, who seems to take more after Anna's independent and seemingly-perfect older sister, Shirley.

It's all a little more than she can bear. Suffice it to say, the LAST thing she needs is to come down with the shrinking disease, and be stuck at the size of an ant, at the mercy of her sister, daughter, and daughter's friends. 


Categories: Vore, Butt, Breasts, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Lesbians, Odor, Nose, Unaware, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17408 Read Count: 76862
[Report This] Published: June 18 2016 Updated: July 07 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Any news on the next chapter?

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: July 07 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope the next one comes soon, this one was great!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The underfoot/sock unaware part was amazing, then it got even better with the toe jam stuff. I'm a huge sucker for that. I hope there'll be more.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: June 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to part 3!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.