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Summary:

The gentle giantess, Rowena, and her miniature boyfriend return in this fantasy adventure. Together, this mismatched couple plans the strangest wedding in the ancient world.


Categories: Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37 Read Count: 37874
[Report This] Published: September 18 2007 Updated: September 30 2007
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2017 Title: Rowena II: In Love and War

Fantastic ending.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tremendous. This is what I am talking about. The family fights were done just perfectly and your dialogues are exciting, fresh and funny. Absolutely amazing. I liked especially the sudden vicious carelessness that Rowena's sisters displayed. Another thing is the dialogues. I hate it when stories get too heavy on the feelings and devolve into a depression-quest, and your way to have the figures interact with each other prevents that perfectly. It never gets boring. I'm in awe.

“He has good soul,” she stated. “Is keeper, this one.” - I literally fell off the chair at that one. 10/10

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2018 Title: None

This story is really good. Why? The grammar is crap for the most part, which somewhat sabotages the style. But the main character's reactions are SO BLOODY NATURAL, its a joy to read. It all makes sense from her persepctive, while the necessary explanations mostly do not turn out tedious.

Well done.

Summary:

Ranavalona and her older sister Marinne define their relationship.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8015 Read Count: 24032
[Report This] Published: September 03 2013 Updated: September 03 2013
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed
Date: March 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For the love of god, continue this please.

Home Invasion by carnaj2 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
[Report This] Published: October 18 2013 Updated: October 28 2013
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 28 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Discovered

I was hoping for Jennifer going full scale revenge on the tiny people who tortured her but that's OK since she's really the 'sub' kind of person.

 

It's a shame though since that would have been material for at least 5 more chapters. Ah, well. Ending this story hopefully means you'll write a new one soon? Please do. I love your style of writing.

 

Ending a story in time is propably a better way than to drag it out without any real end sight as where I am stuck at the moment...

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed
Date: December 10 2014 Title: None

Incredibly good writing, patiently developing and interessting story line, realistic characters and frequent updates.

This would be the best story around right now if the chapters weren't so painfully tiny. I'm hanging onto this, although I am constantly disappointed by this fact.

The slow developement is a good thing, in my mind. It makes the good stuff all the better, once you get to it.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll definately take your feedback into consideration, and beef up the length of each chapter, although that should happen natrually as the plot thickens

Collateral by Nigma Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A young man is caught up in the sibling rivalry of two sisters.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3927 Read Count: 15661
[Report This] Published: January 17 2015 Updated: January 17 2015
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well done. Not what I expected from the description, but a bloody good read nonetheless. 

Summary:

A cruel and vicious giant girl takes a not-so-giant girl out for a date. A vicious, deadly, cruel and cutely romantic date.


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Feet, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Odor, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16686 Read Count: 79736
[Report This] Published: February 14 2015 Updated: July 23 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Arrangements

Fucking hell! Erika is an amazingly strong character. I love her uncompromising behavior and unapologetic nature. She is an inspiration.

I've picked up writing again, precisely because of her.

Thank you and best regards.



Author's Response:

This is exactly the sort of response I wanted to get when I started writing, so the same to you.

Summary:

Naomi's hiding something from her girlfriend, Lorelei. She wants to surprise her, so she's doing something she never does- she's lying to Lorelei. The guilt is eating her up inside, but she hopes that Lorelei will forgive her. She's decided to go with the excuse of wanting a new car for why she's taken on a second job. It's tiring, and most of the time she's been leaving before Lorelei wakes and coming home to Lorelei having fallen asleep, but Naomi is persevering. She thinks it'll all be worth it in the end.

Lorelei is scared and furious. Naomi has a second job now, and she's given a bullshit excuse. Lorelei admits it's an adorable attempt at lying for the ultimate good girl who's never so much as omitted the truth in her life, but it was also a major red flag. So, Lorelei stalked her girlfriend and followed her to work- and she's meeting up with that damnable bimbo, Sammi, an ex-girlfriend of Naomi's that still flirts with her constantly. Problem for her is that Naomi is now dating LORELEI, and she's not keen on sharing.


Categories: Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Silent Dance
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29155 Read Count: 78446
[Report This] Published: August 07 2015 Updated: August 13 2015
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Trust Your Instincts- Naomi

God mother of this fabulous story,

I bow down to kneal before thee. 

I shake and tremble in thy sight.

 

Marvellously done. I would communicate constructive criticism if I had any. I wish I could write like that. Continue this please!



Author's Response:

Heh, thanks. We do what we can. Having a skilled partner to write with is an excellent motivator, so the story will indeed continue.

Thanks for the review!

Summary:

A story I have wanted to write for a while.

An on going story revolving around two young women, their size changing machine and the unfortunate, shrunken people they prey upon.

I am hoping to finish this with some real cruelty, be warned.

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42466 Read Count: 127827
[Report This] Published: September 05 2015 Updated: November 01 2021
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Reflection

Came here for inspiration. Left with trauma. 

Your writing is truly outstanding. Thank you so very much for writing this. 

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Reflection

You are a god.

Summary:

Having been transferred in from several different high security prisons, nine extremely dangerous and notorius felons find themselves incarcerated in a privatized institution unaware they are the subject of a pilot project. 


Categories: Watersports, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24239 Read Count: 143345
[Report This] Published: December 10 2015 Updated: March 05 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed
Date: March 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fucking Hell!

 

I love this story. Please continue!



Author's Response:

At least until I run out of guys

Summary:

How hard is it to get a job when you've shrunken? Very.

 

Set in Tiny-Mk's Altered Reality universe.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4082 Read Count: 18730
[Report This] Published: February 12 2016 Updated: February 12 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marvellous!

 

Is there more to come?

 

 

...please?

Men Deserve It by fuccboi Rated: R starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

In the future, modern feminism surely has left it's footprint in the face of men.


Categories: Unaware, Crush, Footwear, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1764 Read Count: 25294
[Report This] Published: April 21 2016 Updated: April 21 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starhalf-star
Date: April 23 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Beginning of the End

Great concept, terrible implementation.

 

Use past tense all the time, not just some of the time. And add details. This story hurries along like a robot in car plant. Take your time.

Shoebox by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary:

A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed

 


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67654 Read Count: 535924
[Report This] Published: April 23 2016 Updated: November 25 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

Great story, though I wish the chapters were longer.

You have built great characters that stay true to their personality, which is hard to do. This way, it gets quite personal with all of them and that is simply an amazing achievement. I really like the way Julian acts, his boldness, practicality and cynicism never fail to make the corners of my mouth turn upward. I yearn to be able to write a character like him, kudos!

What you did with mother May was just perfect. Here you are, little slave, but instead of falling into depression or trying to save yourself, I'll just make you yearn for another giant captor instead of the one or two you already have. Brilliant!

You get around telling lot's of backstory like a pro. It never feels like it's needed at all, and that keeps the story the way it's supposed to be. You're just a really great author.

There's one think I hope for in the future though, and that is more Julie. Her insane, over-the-top cruelty is exciting. Perhaps you'll let us sneak a peak into her mind at some point? 

Consider me on the edge of my seat, begging for more.

Best regards.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts. There have been a few reviews extolling Julian and he is super fun to write for. Funny you should mention julie because there is more of her in the next chapter or two. Again thanks for such praise I hope I am worthy of it as this tale moves along. Please enjoy!

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You're welcome, I'm planning for another full Julie chaprter in the next little bit.

Summary:

This story follows Allie as she enters the Tiny Adult Film industry. Along the way she is forced to make some diffcult moral decisions.

 

 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Giant, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Odor, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14489 Read Count: 116270
[Report This] Published: July 10 2016 Updated: August 02 2018
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2018 Title: Chapter 7: A generous deal

Great stuff! So glad you picked up this story again.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A star is born

Don't you dare not continue this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the kind words! I am very excited to continue, though my busy schedule may mean some delay between chapters.

Summary:

Four young college girls discover shrunken civilizations and people in their new shared student apartment, each of their very different personalities determines how they treat the tiny inhabitants.  

The decisions the girls make through violence, sadism, passion, caring, and friendship affect millions of tiny lives, but their age, lack of maturity, and naivety might make life difficult and terrifying for everyone involved as they are forced to submit to the lives of the four giantess roommates.  

This story takes place from multiple perspectives and different characters both big and small but will focus on the main cast of women.  

 

 

Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.  

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 371271 Read Count: 738316
[Report This] Published: October 16 2016 Updated: December 21 2021
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

This is written really well. I like it.



Author's Response:

It means a lot, I've been reading Saturn Seven since it came out!  Thank you

Summary:

[This is in the same universe as The Parvian Perspective.  Unlike that story, this will be one continuing narrative.  Consider this as something of a "spin off," while still canonical.]

A plane carrying both Magnians and Parvians crashes on a deserted island.  Survivors need to work together in order to stay alive, but they are met with the challenges that come with both size differences and their own prejudices.

 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6288 Read Count: 10205
[Report This] Published: February 02 2017 Updated: February 04 2017
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pixis, I knew you were going to say that. There's nothing wrong with being into all gentle stuff. I am not suggesting to go full "violence and destruction and sinister motivations" either. That would utterly destroy this story, the way it is set up. I would like to see the story just an inch further away from perfect rainbow land. All that takes is like one wrong that isn't immediately rectified.