Penname: Max333 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: December 09 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hey there! 
I'm Max333, glad to see you here.
I've started writing stories recently, and I do hope you are enjoying them! If not, well, I'm sorry I didn't match your tastes.


If you'd like to talk, please, do not hesitate. I love meeting new people, so don't mind and send me a message! :) 


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Une pluie by 8cm50 Rated: X [Reviews - 5]
Summary: un homme se prend à regretter d'avoir fait confiance à une jeune inconnue. N'avait il que de bonnes intentions ? Celles de la jeune fille deviennent de plus en plus claires au fur et à mesure de leurs relations...
Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15431 Read Count: 16883
[Report This] Published: December 02 2008 Updated: December 02 2008
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: March 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey ! 

Juste pour te dire que tes histoires sont géniales, même parmis toutes celles lues par mes soins en anglais, je n'ai rien trouvé qui atteigne ton niveau d'écriture.

Celle-ci ne fait évidemment pas exception...

J'espère que tu en écriras bientôt de nouvelles : je passe régulièrement sur ton blog et je ne vois rien... :(

Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 350490
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: February 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

Great to see you back !

I agree, with the other, make him a little more reluctent ! :D

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: February 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

Great to see you back !

I agree, with the other, make him a little more reluctant ! :D

Reviewer: Max333 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast

I can't wait for the third chapter... 

You're awesome. 

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: December 13 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

Still amazing.

Make him become his sisters panty-slave !

Reviewer: Max333 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

I love it.

That was really great, keep going, please.

 

Summary:

Drew Kozlawski finally has a chance to do something he's always wanted to do.  As an added bonus, he'll be able to get a little revenge on some former classmates.  Or at least that was the plan...


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23980 Read Count: 253688
[Report This] Published: July 03 2013 Updated: July 30 2013
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: July 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I love it !

Summary:

The story of how I become my friend's plaything and foot toy

Read and Review as you see fit 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9100 Read Count: 56500
[Report This] Published: July 16 2013 Updated: October 12 2015
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: October 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: From person to doll

Glad to see you back, your story was so well written, I sure did miss it.
Can't wait to see what will happen now that he's normal again. I'm pretty sure she's the one who controls his height, and she doesn't want him to go, so she'll shrink him again, against his will, this time. Then things will get interesting :D
Or maybe I'm wrong. But hey, time will tell ! 

Summary:

Alex vivait une vie normale, d'adolescent moyen jusqu'à ce qu'il rétrécisse . Cette histoire se concentre fondamentalement sur l'évolution des personnages et leurs interactions avec le protagoniste qui perd toute puissance. Pourquoi cela est ce arrivé ? Que va t'il devenir ? Et surtout Comment va réagir son entourage ?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27420 Read Count: 47463
[Report This] Published: April 13 2014 Updated: August 07 2014
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Compétition et fête

Salut !
Sincèrement, c'est très bon. Des fautes de grammaire de ci de là, mais c'est pas l'essentiel. Le texte est bon, et c'est génial. Continue ! 



Author's Response:

Merci , je sais que je fais des fautes . Aussi il faut dire parfois c'est un peu par fatigue, n'hésite pas à me signaler ou il y en a que je puisse y remedier, merci . 
Je vais essayer de relire un peu pour y remedier quand même . 
Bonne lecture et merci de ton soutien !

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: April 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Compétition et fête

Sincèrement, rien à redire, de très bons chapitres, et j'aime vraiment les thèmes que tu traites. Continue comme ça, c'est génial !



Author's Response:

Merci Max ! Je suis content de voir que mon histoire plaise autant, je lacontinuerai tant que je vois qu'elle relève de l'interet ne t'inquiète pas. Si tu aimerais voir des choses en particulier ou des personnages n'hésite pas à me donner des conseils, j'apprécie toutes idées données !

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Compétition et fête

Et c'est re moi !

De mon côté, j'aime toujours autant. Surtout le fait que sa soeur manipule les gens pour faire en sorte qu'ils le maltraitent aussi. 

Tu as beaucoup de talent et d'imagination, mais c'est vrai que le public français n'est pas très présent, c'est la limite du langage :/

Si jamais tu t'arrêtes, bonne chance tout de même pour la suite ! J'attendrais de pouvoir te lire à nouveau avec impatience !



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup de ton soutient Max, oui effectivement elle arrive bien à manipuler les gens autour d'elle, entre sa mère d'abord mais aussi Rebecca, à qui elle a renvoyée une mauvaise image de son frère sachant trés bien qu'elle le detestait déja. 
Que penses tu de l'aspect fier du personnage ? est il trop prononcé ? Mais aussi , j'aimerai bien savoir ce que tu préfères voir dans l'histoire ?

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Compétition et fête

Que penses tu de l'aspect fier du personnage ? est il trop prononcé ? Mais aussi , j'aimerai bien savoir ce que tu préfères voir dans l'histoire ?

Non, il n'est pas trop prononcé, il est tout ce qu'il faut ! S'il n'était pas un minimum fier, un minimum rebelle à ce qui lui arrive, ce serait moins intéressant je trouve :)

Ce que je préfère voir, c'est tout ce que tu as fais jusqu'à maintenant, haha. Le fait que sa soeur le torture autant avec ses pieds, en le faisant dormir dans ses chaussettes sales, etc. Sincèrement, tout était super. Je suis un peu moins intéressé par le vore, mais il en faut pour tous les goûts, et je trouve ça très sympathique de ta part d'essayer de te diversifier autant ! Tu mériterais bien plus d'audience, mais encore une fois, les français ne sont pas majoritaires sur ce site.

Et c'est dommage, c'est vraiment rafraîchissant de pouvoir lire dans sa langue maternelle :)



Author's Response:

Ok c'est noté, je pense que si je publie le prochain chapitre j'y placerais une interraction avec les pieds de la belle Rebecca dans ce cas ;). A la prochaine Max !

Nitsuita by Flowenol Cinur Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

One day, a male who looks like a female was found shrunk by his twin sister. This situation alone is not a life or death situation. It's moreover along the lines of currently residing next to the most random assortment of characters one could encounter. In this adventure that happens in a single building (in Japan) the absurd will be rife.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Destruction, Futanari, Gentle, Giant, Incest, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86988 Read Count: 92407
[Report This] Published: June 01 2014 Updated: February 06 2016
Reviewer: Max333 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14: Another World

Hey there ! 
First time I've ever seen your story. Although it's not really what turns me on, here I am reading you.

Your writing is amazing for writing fictions. No kidding, I love the way you write. The only reason you are not getting a lot of reviews is because I don't think you are making it "sexy" enough for the audience you have here. And maybe the universe the characters are set in doesn't meet what one would expect from a giantess story here. 

That sure doesn't mean that it's bad. Again, you're really good. The story just doesn't fit with what we are used to here, and therefore readers can't get into the story. Maybe you should try posting it somewhere else ? I don't know. All this work deserves to be read though.

Anyway, I see that you're writing a book. Great. From what I've read, you sure do have the potential. 

Cheers ! 



 



Author's Response:

Thanks mate. The part about the "sexy" not being appealing enough is something that I'm still improving upon. Otherwise, thank you for inputing your criticism and it explains quite a few things about my story which I appreciate greately.


Good day to you.

Family time. by Jamilton Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: After shrinking in my room I must live amongst my giant female family, friends and neighbours. Whether they are cruel, kind, or can't even see me right underneath them.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21199 Read Count: 175387
[Report This] Published: July 24 2014 Updated: October 09 2014
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: September 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home

Hey ! :D

Just wanted to review to say that you're great. Really. I love the themes you used in this story. 

Yet... Let me tell you that I never read this story or any of yours before today for one reason : you do not write the tags down ! Therefore, we can't know what's the story is about without actually starting reading it. And I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one that doesn't usually read the stories without tags. 

I really think you would get a lot more views and comments by tagging those stories of yours :D

Anyway, really great work, keep it up, can't wait to see what's next !



Author's Response: I'm glad to hear this story is getting better in the ratings. I know that I've improved since my first 6 story's and I plan to rewrite those ones.

Summary: ,,,,
Categories: Giantess, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1 Read Count: 32728
[Report This] Published: July 29 2014 Updated: August 10 2014
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 10 2014 Title: My giantess sister

This is great ! Keep going please :D

Summary:

Kai is one of the thousands worldwide who have shrunk. Kai and Tris must do their best to keep a hold of their normal life, no matter what gets in the way...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58135 Read Count: 143294
[Report This] Published: August 03 2014 Updated: August 10 2014
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

Really great story, and it keeps getting better. Poor Kai. But I actually hope that the girls will use him for their own pleasure more and more :D



Author's Response: Thank you :) You will definitely see more of that ;)

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 08 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

Wow. You're really an amazing author. It keeps getting better. And you're updating the story so fast, that's incredible. Please, keep it up, you're doing great !



Author's Response: Thanks! It's reviews like these which keep me updating the story :)

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

Good chapter ! Nicely written, as well as the whole story so far. Waiting for what's next !



Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Summary:

Christina has to find a way to pass her exam and her friend offers her a unique solution.


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6409 Read Count: 47617
[Report This] Published: September 11 2014 Updated: September 17 2014
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: September 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a really great start ! Keep going :)

Summary:

Alex vivait une vie normale, d'adolescent moyen jusqu'à ce qu'il rétrécisse . Cette histoire se concentre fondamentalement sur l'évolution des personnages et leurs interactions avec le protagoniste qui perd toute puissance. Pourquoi cela est ce arrivé ? Que va t'il devenir ? Et surtout Comment va réagir son entourage ?

 

Si vous voulez lire/participer à mon histoire interractive elle se situe ici : https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1947422-Girl-domination-stories-feet

C'est en anglais, allez y jeter un coup d'oeil ça peut vous plaire :) 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20593 Read Count: 30770
[Report This] Published: November 17 2014 Updated: August 20 2016
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: June 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapitre 1: Le premier rétrécissement

C'est toujours aussi bon, la petite soeur est géniale...

Continue !