Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 17 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Oversight
Hello,man!
I must say i have been following your writing since you started and i really liked the detention and curse story.Please keep writing.I know you might not like this but i gotta say you're one of the most creative story tellers that have advanced in such a short time judging by the time you started.You,gtswburg and other feet-oriented novel/story/ writers are why i started writing my own story even tho it sucks.I just have 1 request from you.Could you write a non-unaware story that's about stinky feet,socks,sneakers,nasty girls,sweat torture,toejam,cheesy feet and what now?! (I know i got a bit carried away but i really like to request stuff to writers that have inspired me to start my own writing.
Thanks for stopping by and reading my review and sorry for my try-hard english (LEL)
I give maxium starts to this.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind words! It's hard to write that kind of stuff in a practical setting. I try to write things that are within the realm of, or at least sound like they could be within the realm of possibility, if the reader is willing to be a little imaginative. However, it's hard for me to write something where the girls are inherently evil, because in reality, a girl's first instinct upon meeting with a shrunken human probably will not be make them eat her toejam, unless the story is intetionally given a setting where this becomes possible. Such as a pyschotic girl (ex. Rosie) or an unaware story, where the girl had no conscious part of it. The hard part is coming up with the setting where this becomes a possiblity, for the sake of realness.