Penname: Lolwat111 [Contact] Real name: Lolwat111
Member Since: March 13 2012
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Summary:

17 year old Derrick gets more than he bargained for when he discovers a way to make his wildest dreams come true.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10393 Read Count: 76086
[Report This] Published: March 12 2012 Updated: July 21 2017
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Flip Flops

Ah ok i was wondering what size he was gonna be.By the way what size he is realy going to be ?:D And when are you planing to writr next chapter ? İt is realy epic

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Flip Flops

Thank you a lot for adding the next chapter today.Gonna checj and comment just after :)

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 14 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Lint

Alright,i understood something.Her feet will be miles tall when he will shrink right ? İf her feet is several miles tall than that is mountain everest right ?
Still couldnt understand his shrinking size though.İ am wondering he will be speck sized or smaller...Right ?

Author's Response:

Given that the inch between her big toe print and the thong of her sandal is approximately 100 yards from his perspective, he is about a 1/50th of an inch tall or essentially a speck in this sequence.  You'll have to wait to see how small he actually gets. :)

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Flip Flops

İ am just wondering the guy size because i am interested at shrunken man being a speck..Actualy i like smaller.İ just dont understand 1 inch stories or grain of sand.And from the keys the writer gave to us made me think he is goinv to be speck sized.That is why i asked dood,chill please.

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 17 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Nylons

Great ! Cant wait for upcoming chapter

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Flip Flops

Epic so far...Just got worried about something. Will he shrink ? if he will will he be ant sized ?
İ am worried about this,i want him to be smaller than a speck please :D

Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will shrink.  And he is going to be plenty tiny.

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: August 22 2012 Title: None

Wow dude goddam...You seriously got the touch of footplay....I,now highly suggest what i said in my first review..Please do ;)

Author's Response: I know what I like, and that's what I write about. ;)

Thanks for the feedback!

Wipe off by dark_007 Rated: R [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This is a fairly violent fantasy story involving a powerful alien woman in a mission.  She shrinks her opponents to meet her mission objectives.  It involves gore, blood and crushing underfoot.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change, Muscle, BBW
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10866 Read Count: 59079
[Report This] Published: May 09 2012 Updated: May 15 2012
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: May 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Getting ready

Wow..Suprised the way you managed to write 8 chapters in a day.Just a question,did you write the chapters before you post them ?Oh and nice job.

Not a fan of the story but i must say you are realy good.Do you have interest in micro/footplay rather than 1 inch and crushing ?

Summary:

A quick foot-crush story featuring Hayley Williams of Paramore and a very, very secret admirer.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 891 Read Count: 10037
[Report This] Published: May 10 2012 Updated: May 10 2012
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: May 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice...

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: May 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh and it is kinda good for 20 minutes of writing ...good job

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: August 25 2012 Title: None

Great chapter ^_^
So,I suppose micro contect is coming along with next chapter or so ?

Author's Response: Don't worry, it's coming. That's not what the next chapter is about though.

Summary:

My Ex Girlfriend shrinks me down and turns me into her helpless slave to serve her stinky, grimy feet.  Lot of off foot action, humiliation, slavery, domination, dirty feet, stinky feet, toejam. Can be very cruel at times.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 32091
[Report This] Published: December 18 2012 Updated: December 18 2012
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (My New Life)

Hey thank you for posting this story.hope you update it alot.Feels good to see a micro foot story in this board,thank you again.
İ would like to give suggestions if you dont mind.
1)Please make him smaller.Smaller than a speck if possible.İt will make the story way hotter in that way
2)Be more describtive.İm not telling you suck which i cant lol.Just use more describitive words and you will see the difrence.
3)Add more gts friends,possibly cruel ones.Make the main gts more evil.İt will give a fresh air to the story.
4)Add how he feels and how much hes scared.Tell us what he feels when he sees a microscopic toejam piece and tell how he reacts and feels.
And last 5)Please include lots of between toes scene combined with these other suggestions written above.
İ really liked this story.The toejam is a great factor.
Rated 10/10!

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (My New Life)

İ know giving advice more than once is annoying.But i must say i really liked this story and amazed by the fact you have written this by just siting and typing randomly.Dude i beg you,please include what i have suggested in my first review and i will support your story more than i do now.

Summary:

A high school senior with no future is shrunken will he find an opportunity for a new life or a quick route to death.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26708 Read Count: 104426
[Report This] Published: March 01 2013 Updated: July 11 2013
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: March 03 2013 Title: Chapter 2: One Last Time

Wow dude this is so awesome.
I would like to say that its nice to have another author who works on details a lot...Do you take requests? If so...Can you like shrink the guy to very small like smaller than a speck and keep it either at feet,insertion,mouthplay etc.And also add more nasty things like toejam,smelly sock lints,saliva,sweat,bits of dirts etc.Ijust gave some tips and requested some stuff.I hope you consider it.Would be so glad,wAiting for next chapter.
Side note:Micro can be really enjoyable if you keep high quality details,emotions of the shrunken person,helpless movements,humilation of the giant girl and the enjoyment shes having while torturing the shrunken person.

Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting Lolwat I'm glad that my attention to detail was able to please. and upon reading again I think your right that this story does need more emotional imput from the character and more gritty details lol.

as for the size changing idea im sure you'll be happy to know that i'm currently planning another story in which the main characters will be speck sized.

Mimi by wildcatman Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A Shrinking story.  Your suggestions will be used in the next chapter.  Just review what you'd like to see happen to tiny Dan,  but, nothing too crazy.....


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12232 Read Count: 40873
[Report This] Published: March 24 2013 Updated: September 22 2013
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: April 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Honestiy,you are the best writer ever.Its bad that i have discoverrd ur stories to late.You write just......awesome.
My only suggestion is you keep using teenage giant girls.PLEASE try to use micro.

Trust me your details are just beyond awesome and u would be the best if u do that.
I hope you take my advice and keep doing micro/feet,pussy slave,these kind of stuff.

I will always support you! Gluck pro writer!

Author's Response:

Thanks 4 the support Lolwat111 !,  I'll try an shrink 'em down a little more,  just for you.   I normally like to image them at around 6 inches tall, (my own preferance)  but I wanted to try and do this story solely based on reviewers suggestions.  So 'You' asked for it, and I'll make it happen.  The micro-sized man is a little fragile, and can become, very easily 'Lost' by the giantess.   A much different experance, then I'm used to writing, but I'll give it a shot....

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 545892
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: August 20 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi!
This story was great from its beginning and shaping or already shaped to something very great.I have 2 requests.
I see that you do every genre really well.For the continution of the story,i would like to have skylar shrink jake to quite a small size.Like smaller than 1/50 if possible then shows jake to her friends in school.Her giant friend really likes jakes size and asks skylar to buy her.Skylar says yes and jake becomes the slave of another giant girl.Then the giant girl invites every pretty girl from school to her party.She introduces poor tiny jake to them and jake passes from many micro torture.Like they use their tongues and play with the ultra micro jake.Then jake tries to fight their tongues only to see they are hundrends of miles tall and mountain sized salivia and othet dirty things like spit starts to fall over the micro jake.Im not done yet.I Have lotts of ideas to share dear pro writer.
Another way they torture him can be they use their teeth and tongues and make fun of his size.They make him their mouth slave and forced to clean their tongue.They threaten to eat him and scare him with their miles tall tongues.Second genre could be insertion or ass or feet.As for the insertion one,Teenage lesbian action could be great for jake to suffer They flrst lick and tease and use their splits over jake and then threat him to eat him.Then forced to stay on their pussies during lesbian sex.Ass one could be lesbian action once again.Two girls having sex and jake is between their hairy miles tall anuses and forced to watch the scene and disgusting things starts to fall over poor jake.Hell they could even use their anuses and threaten to anal vore him too.Feet one could stary first as girls lick and stick him between their miles tall toes.Then jake is forced to pass through the torture.Or you could add all these ideas to the next story you will be starting.Just have skylar at same age and use the schooll scenario i have mentioned.Please,hollow,consider all these ideaz i have written.Thank you.
Best of luck!

Summary:

A man living in the future uses a computer to recreate a virtual school to release his built up job stress. 


Categories: Feet, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Vore, Violent, Mouth Play, Giant, Crush, Couples , Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5447 Read Count: 47574
[Report This] Published: August 15 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: August 19 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The way you write the shrunken teens's feelings is great.My only suggestion is try to make the teens micro sized like smaller than 1/16 or 1/8 if possible.Also rather than couples or m/f,could you please write a story thats f/m,ff/m or fff/m.Giant teenage girls torturing shrunken boys is so hot.I hope you consider my review
Best of luck!

Author's Response: Actually that's the going to be in the sequel! Look for it!

Regret by Kouichi Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A man becomes the toy of a saditic Asian teenager after making one simple mistake. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 975 Read Count: 8537
[Report This] Published: August 20 2013 Updated: August 20 2013
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: August 20 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice job!
Please try to make the guy smaller and if possible let it be smaller than a specl.In other words let him be speck of dirt.ill be following your story.
Thank u!

Life of tyson by Lolwat111 Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A boy is subjected to torture in a all girl school while alone and three popular girls of the high school decided to increase the torture of poor teenager by very high.

Character names-

Tyson,shrunken and enslaved teenager,main victim of the story basically.

Jessica=Main antagonist in the story.

Jennie=Friend of jessica,later in the story dies from a unexpected reason.

Jennifer=Buddie of jessica.They are best friends compared to jennie.

 

This story focuses highly on emotions and thought of the shrunken boy called tyson.

It also focuses on humiliation of the shrunken boy and cruelty of the giant girls.

It also focuses on feet mainly,100% feet.

I dont really expect reviews anymore,it would be cool to get them though,to see what kind of shape the story is in.

I write this story for my enjoyment mainly

That's it,have a good day now.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11803 Read Count: 66523
[Report This] Published: June 08 2014 Updated: April 09 2016
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed
Date: June 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I dont know what to say.I was hopeless and thinking that this story will be leftalone in the darkness...Thank you so much!

Means a lot to me.I'll try my best and write 5k+words per day.

Please keep following!

I love speck sizes as well

Thank you again!

 

Summary:

In a not too distant future,a detective is forced by his superior into an assignment to bust a business that cators to abusers of a new shrinking drug.

 

An old story I wrote that's a bit rough around the edges.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Adult 30-39, Feet, Footwear, Lesbians, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3178 Read Count: 13207
[Report This] Published: September 03 2014 Updated: September 03 2014
Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Good story keep it up!