I have to admit I almost took a pass on this story.  Transformation isn't always my cup of tea, but occasionally you find a gem.  This story was getting good even before this chapter.  Then he shrunk and the emotions are running high.  I'd give it a chapter or 2 before he accepts her love.  But this brings an interesting thought, what if the ex-girlfriend re-enters the picture?  Good story, keep it up!

Somehow I'm not surprised how the Sword ladies acted.  I played the game and the Society is EVIL.  So this behavior is more typical of the giantesses in the game.  Giantesses like is Isabella is not typical and she probably doesn't know the truth about the Society.  I'm a bit curious about Lutice.  A few years ago she seemed benevolent and kind.  Now she seems like a mean bitch.  However, her old self seems to still be there beneath the surface of her meaness.  I'm still waiting for that sexual action you mentioned in the first chapter.  I was expecting it might have been between Sanders and Flonne (since she's not too big).  The Society giantesses are just too big for it to be pleasant for both parties (though I'm sure mega gts fans would disagree).

A damn good cliffhanger ending!  I'm still saddened about Isabella and confused about Aviel.  She might be helping Sanders, then again she might be truly evil now.  I've known the true nature of this organization since before the first chapter, but was heartened to see some good people in the Society.  Unless it has help from the inside, I don't see the Resistance being able to do much to change things.  So I don't have much hope for Sanders' life getting any better anytime soon.  But what this means now for the reader is that in this act, that giantesses wasn't necessarily evil.  I'm assuming in the 2nd act, every giantess we encounter is going to be evil, from Sanders' pov.  I hope the wait isn't too long.

I think you fooled a lot of us.  I had guessed that it was a form of "therapy" from the first couple of chapters, but you cleverly diverted our attention and got us guessing as to Susan's motives.  A well written story.  Hope you write more good stories in the future.

A good piece of writing so far.  I'm a bit confused over some of the reasons you wrote about why she did this to him.  How could his confidence in talking to women make the other office workers disrespectful of Mandy?  If she was so unhappy with him, why didn't she tell him?  I assume that he got evaluated every so often, or just fire him?  I'm looking for a more solid reason why she would go this far.  A more solid reason could be that's she's attracted to him and he rebuffed her advances, but was flirting with other female co-workers.  I'm just not a fan of the old "I shrunk him, because I felt like it."  But otherwise the story has grabbed my attention and I'm interested to see what her plans are for him.

I was wondering when you'd do this.  I reasoned a long time ago that if there was one Greek god, then where are the others?  And how long before they intervened?  I have to admit that last game really had me worried.  I guess it distresses me when a parent could do something like that to their child.  On another note, I'm still waiting for the one girl that WILL remember after the conclusion of a game.  Hoping it will be one of the gentle giantesses that remembers.

I didn't see that coming!  I was hoping the shrinking would have rekindled their relationship, but that doesn't appear to be the case.  Because of the title of this story, I think she's going to keep him around, but not in the way he was probably hoping.  I wonder if she's going to have his doctor take care of him.  Considering that doctor is her sister who doesn't like him, might make for some interesting chapters.  I wonder if there's anyone who get take care of him?

Good story!  I can't wait for more!

I think Penny is going to be his only hope really for any relations with a woman.  Based on the way the author set the story up, its government mandated that all girls receive the hormone.  Even with some probably slipping through the cracks, he and any other Beta guy will be hard pressed to find a Beta girl close to home. They will have to settle for a life of lonliness, garnering the attention of a sympathetic Alpha girl, or leave the country to find a woman in an underdeveloped country. 

This is a good story so far.  As you can assume from the last paragraph, I'd like to see things work out for Jack somehow.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Doing a great job!  If I was in his shoes I'd be falling for Kim too.  Very rare for a heroine in a GTS story to be so loving and supportive, and not go on a power trip.  Looking forward to more!

I hope it ends well too!  A thought occured to me.  He's going to be training at approx 3 feet tall with powerful experienced warriors.  That could only help him I think.  Keep up the good work!