Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Giantess World
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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed 
Date: August 09 2012 Title: None
Author's Response: Ten will do just fine. :) I guess I better write some Janet chapters, or the villagers might show up with torches and pitchforks. You should check out my other big story too. You may like it. Honestly, I enjoy writing both of them. I'm having a blast.
Date: August 09 2012 Title: None
Wow. Just finished reading the latest chapter. This is a great story. For months now I've seen this story being updated and never bothered to read it. I almost missed out on something awesome. I look forward to all of the coming chapters and (personally) hope we get more Janet action ;). Would give it 9999/10 if I could but unfortunately 10 is the highest :(
Author's Response: Ten will do just fine. :) I guess I better write some Janet chapters, or the villagers might show up with torches and pitchforks. You should check out my other big story too. You may like it. Honestly, I enjoy writing both of them. I'm having a blast.
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: September 03 2012 Title: None
Date: September 03 2012 Title: None
I think Janet could use a tiny person at some point. How about the stock boy?
Still loving the story, keep going!
Author's Response: You're saying the stock boy should be Janet's little sock toy? 8D
We'll see what happens.
You don't have to worry about this story ending any time soon. It'll keep going and going...
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: August 15 2012 Title: None
Date: August 15 2012 Title: None
All of this "you're gonna love what happens next, and what happens after that" is stressing me out and getting me overexcited! I swear if your next chapter is anything less than 3000 words.... Then you would have made a happy man very old >:I
Author's Response: I don't know about 3,000 words. It's possible. I'm not using a word processor to write my stories, so I don't have easy access to a word counter. But the next chapter will definitely be long. And it only gets better after that. We're about to reach a turning point in the story, wink wink.
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: August 11 2012 Title: None
Author's Response: Leave them wanting more; that's the number one rule. I guess I'm doing something right. Don't worry, there will be plenty more chapters to read.
Date: August 11 2012 Title: None
GAH! I hate catching up to an unfinished story! Now I gotta wait for new chapters :( I think those villagers with torches and pitchforks are gonna show up anyway >:D
Author's Response: Leave them wanting more; that's the number one rule. I guess I'm doing something right. Don't worry, there will be plenty more chapters to read.
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: August 14 2012 Title: None
Date: August 14 2012 Title: None
Two chapters in one day? Score! I'm liking where this story is going :D
Author's Response: It's going to fun places, is where it's going. ;)
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1870 Read Count: 21523
Whlie Working backstage for a school musical a young 7th grader shrinks down and try to get help from the female cast. But they have different ideas of fun in mind.
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1870 Read Count: 21523
[Report This] Published: June 05 2012 Updated: July 11 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: June 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The shrink
Author's Response: No she will be Gentle but she might tease him a bit:)
Date: June 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The shrink
I like how this story is going. I just hope Marissa is a gentle giantess.
Author's Response: No she will be Gentle but she might tease him a bit:)
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: August 11 2012 Title: None
Author's Response: It means I successfully programmed you. :)
Date: August 11 2012 Title: None
What does it say about me if I like Tabatha? :/
LOL anyway great story, great plot and great writing. I've learnt from you're friends with benefits story to expect the unexpected so I really can't wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response: It means I successfully programmed you. :)
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3599 Read Count: 26989
Kimberley is a petite 20 year old who is deeply religious. A long forgotten artifact buried under the family home awakens, affecting various members of her family in bizzare and extreme ways.
Categories: Giantess, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3599 Read Count: 26989
[Report This] Published: July 14 2012 Updated: July 14 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: July 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: July 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Please continue. This is the first good story I've seen in a while so keep it up!
Summary: Anakin Skywalker shrinks an gets discovered by Padmé Amidala, except she isn't his savior.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Vore, Insertion, Toilet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star Wars
Challenges: Star Wars
Challenges: Star Wars
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1035 Read Count: 31737
Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Vore, Insertion, Toilet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star Wars
Challenges: Star Wars
Challenges: Star Wars
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1035 Read Count: 31737
[Report This] Published: July 17 2012 Updated: July 17 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed 
Date: July 17 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Anakins so called "Savior"
Date: July 17 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Anakins so called "Savior"
I disagree with the review below me. This story can go whatever way you want it to go. It's fan fiction after all. My biggest critique would have to be that you're rushing this story. Spend more time describing what's going on. For example, when he was eaten by Padme what was it like? How did it smell? How long was he in the for? What was it like inside her "pussy"? Take your time with the story. It's hard for the reader to get into the story and picture what's going on when the author isn't offering enough description. This story has a lot of potential and I think it could become one of the most read on this site because let's face it, almost everyone knows star wars. I just think maybe you should rewrite the first chapter. Even of you end up having to split it into two chapters I think it would get you more readers and higher ratings.
Summary:
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1560 Read Count: 27864
A Mother gives her son the ultimate oppurtunity, to live his life without having to work or go to school, but there's just one catch...
A shortish story (no pun intended) With mostly feet and semi-vore.
Enjoy :D
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1560 Read Count: 27864
[Report This] Published: September 06 2012 Updated: September 06 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Its a Mother, Son thing.
Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Its a Mother, Son thing.
Well, that escalated quickly XD
Nice story. I really enjoyed it.
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7361 Read Count: 48966
When a giantess and a human wake up in a metallic room with only the knowledge that they are to work together to pass a series of tests, the question of emotion affecting personal values is brought to a greater meaning.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7361 Read Count: 48966
[Report This] Published: September 13 2012 Updated: November 02 2013
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: September 18 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Carbon
Date: September 18 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Carbon
Well, so far the chapter spell out Critic. The only word that comes to mind is critical so I'm guess guessing the next chapter will be Aluminium. But then again, my knowledge on chemistry is limited :P
Really loving this story. Can't wait to see more.
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Carbon
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Carbon
@Stubbornstain. That right there, is exactly why I hated chemistry :P Too many symbols.
Summary: A friendship is put under test when one half shrinks to 3 inches tall. Will Simone be able to keep Matthew safe? Or will his new size cause them to have some unexpected difficulties. Why is it that Matthew is slowly becoming a piece of gum in human form? Follow the adventure here, IT'S FREE
Categories: Giantess, Transformation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1393 Read Count: 7554
Categories: Giantess, Transformation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1393 Read Count: 7554
[Report This] Published: September 29 2012 Updated: September 29 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: September 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: It begins
Date: September 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: It begins
Great start so far. I'm liking the set up and look forward to future chapters.
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57433 Read Count: 177353
See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57433 Read Count: 177353
[Report This] Published: October 01 2012 Updated: December 17 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: October 01 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: BOY'S ON BERRIES
Date: October 01 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: BOY'S ON BERRIES
Wow. Great start! You've really pulled me into this story and I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
More is coming. You'll find this different from the others in a lot of ways, enjoyablly different. Thanks for more kind words.
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: October 07 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: AFTER SCHOOL SPORT
Date: October 07 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: AFTER SCHOOL SPORT
You are an amazing author! I have never been a vore fan but I am absolutely in love with this story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad. Maybe I'll inspire you to work some vore into the story I reviewed this morning.
Your compliments are too kind.
Summary:
Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 32148
My Ex Girlfriend shrinks me down and turns me into her helpless slave to serve her stinky, grimy feet. Lot of off foot action, humiliation, slavery, domination, dirty feet, stinky feet, toejam. Can be very cruel at times.
Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 32148
[Report This] Published: December 18 2012 Updated: December 18 2012
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
I would really like to see this story finished so please continue. A longer story gets more readers and more reviews. I think my one criticism so far is that I noticed that you abbreviated a few words (eg somewhere in the story you said prob instead of probably.) I'd suggest not doing that as it can really ruin the mojo of the story in my opinion.
Summary:
Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Butt, Unaware, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4176 Read Count: 29387
Jon and his sister Alice are neglegent children,they leave their clothes everywhere and cause their mother so much heartache. When the they shrink to near nothingness one morning they must fight for survival.
Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Butt, Unaware, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4176 Read Count: 29387
[Report This] Published: February 26 2013 Updated: March 02 2013
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: February 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lazy Saturday morning
Date: February 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lazy Saturday morning
Brilliant story and very well written! I'm surprised no one has reviewed it yet. I very much look forward to future chapters and hope the wait isn't too long. Keep it up!
Summary:
Categories: Butt, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1581 Read Count: 12237
Laura a thirty nine year old mother of two has an accident that alters her genetic makeup,and her mental makeup as well. The usual mild mannered pretty Laura gains God like abilities and she's not afraid to use them.
Categories: Butt, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1581 Read Count: 12237
[Report This] Published: March 15 2013 Updated: March 15 2013
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: March 16 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: March 16 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great start! I look forward to more. My only criticism is the fact that the names Paula and Laura are too similar. I found myself getting lost several times when reading that chapter.
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5572 Read Count: 75152
A boy named reggie thinks everyday is just the same until he gets a weird awakening one day...
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5572 Read Count: 75152
[Report This] Published: April 11 2013 Updated: June 08 2013
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: April 12 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Just A Normal Day
Date: April 12 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Just A Normal Day
Nice start and a good storyline so far. However, at the moment it seems a bit rushed and you also should proofread your chapters before posting. Halfway through the chapter you changed one of the sisters' name from Amy to Anna
Author's Response:
Thanks, yea i'll make sure that won't happen again, The story kept deleting so I guess I didn't think to check it, thanks for letting me know. I wasn't sure how to start things so I guess it would be a little rushed, sometimes I let the story go to what seems right. Thanks for the support!
Summary:
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5227 Read Count: 63259
Can Lauren choose living out her greatest fantasy over her son?
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5227 Read Count: 63259
[Report This] Published: July 10 2013 Updated: August 19 2013
Reviewer: Cheezo Signed
Date: July 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Conflict of Interests
Author's Response:
Date: July 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Conflict of Interests
I personally think the best way to approach this story would be to have Lauren purposely create situations where she "accidentally" does things to Andrew. For example she could pretend she doesnt see him and then step on him etc. As the story progresses and she becomes more and more comfortable with treating her son as a toy, thats went she becomes more aggressive towards him. The problem you have at the moment is that youve made her too overprotective and to just make her switch to a violent character wouldnt be believable in my opinion. At the moment its a very interesting story though and I will be looking forward to updates.
Author's Response:
Exactly! Someone gets it! That's what I've been trying to communicate! Now you are right in the too overprotective fact, but I've got that _mostly_ worked out to be fixed.
Thanks for an insightful review!