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Luffy's Big Adventure by Cheezo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

After Luffy mysteriously shrinks his crew must find a way to reverse the spell and save him.

I do not own the characters or anything in this story. The only part that is me is the plot. The rest belongs to Toei Animation and Funimation.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16574 Read Count: 195729
[Report This] Published: October 12 2011 Updated: January 30 2012
Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: October 14 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The culprit is revealed!

ok, first, good story, seriously i liked it, im not native english and im not a good writer even in my own language, but i'll tell you my feelings,

to be honest, the story felt boring at the beginning, im not sure way, but it gave me this feeling, however, on the last chapter, the story sucked me in! and i was disappointed to see there was no new more chapters XD

I think its because of the change in events!

anyway, if you haven't planned what to write in the next chapters, I personally love to see " Nami, Boa, Vivi and Kaya doing Butt play, Anal insertion, Vagina insertion and S&M, to shrunken people"

good luck with the story, and keep it up, XD one piece is my FAV show!! so please do'nt give up on writing XDD

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I can see what you mean about the first few chapters. To be honest I'm disappointed in them myself. I plan to rewrite them when I finish the story. I have some idea where the story is going at the moment but it's not written in stone. As for the butt insertion and everything you mentioned, I'm not sure if I should do that because I think it would be too out of character for them. However, I might consider them doing it to other shrunken men, not Luffy. I'm also thinking of having the rest of the strawhat boys shrink. Thoughts?

Brother and Sister by Ben Kibler Rated: R Round robin starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

So this is a story about how a sister shrinks her big brother.

 


Categories: Slave, Giantess, Butt, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2036 Read Count: 93578
[Report This] Published: February 07 2012 Updated: February 09 2012
Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Beginning

thats actually good. Im a fan of butt, too. so i would like to see more! XD

and I like that his mistress is his sister, i would LOVE to see her traping her brother up her ass whenever she don't want to play with him, like his new home! XD

 

keep it going i loved  your story so i'll be checking on you from no and on XDD



Author's Response:

Thats coming up next! And thank you, you gave me some ideas! I am writing the next chapter right now, should be on near the end of the day or tomarrow! ;)

Toy for the holiday by Yougts Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 409197
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016
Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast

OK, This story is driving me CRAZY!! Awesome job!!! I can't wait to read te next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

One of the best stories I've read! Good job mate!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

Take as much time as you like! Don't rush I'm always waiting XD

Can I suggest an idea? I would like to see one chapter about Mia domenating Stan with her ass and shove him up her cute anus. Or keeps him up her ass for a day or so.

I hope I wasn't being rude by asking, if so, then I'm sorry!

 

Thank you for the great story! You are a real author!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Time to shrink

This is perfect!! I am really greatful for you Thank you!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Goodbye

This is so great! I love giantess sisters and Butts!! And this story has both!!

You have a natrual talent to be a writer!! Keep it up, you will find yourself somewhere at the top later on XD

A seggestion!? uhmmm, I would like to see Mia would keep Stan as her buttplug when she doesn't need to play with him or use him.

Another seggestion, Is about the ending. I would love to see him stay forever as her sex toy. Also, you could add multible endings if have more than one ending in your mind. It is so rare to see stories like that.

Finally, I hate death. But I don't think you'll make Stan die, so it is OK.

That is it for me. Good luck! I can't wait to see chapter 5!!!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

Wow, 8 chapters so far... I really like the way this story is headitng to... And YES more butts are coming in this story. Best incest story ever!! I'm glad you are exist XD Thank you!

A butt toy for my sister by Jamilton Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Me and my sister are taken into a building for an experiment on us. Turns out the experiment is done to help my sister to stop me annoying her. This involves a little change and a new purpose in my life.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Odor, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: As Giantess butt toy
Challenges: As Giantess butt toy
Challenges: As Giantess butt toy
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4644 Read Count: 228047

[Report This] Published: September 14 2014 Updated: December 11 2014
Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The experiment

I think I'll love what is comming next!!! I hope she jam him right up her ass and let him live there and survive on her shit >:)

He didn't throw up when he ate her shit right? he meant to be in an ass :P

 

Did Erica gave Tilly some shrinking potion other than the potion that makes others forget about the shrinkees? I can imagine the face of her brother when he suddnly see another face pop in through her asshole and jammed right in with him :P

 

I can't wait to see what'll happen next I like where this is going!

The Fairies of Fairy Tail by Franchise Writer Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

When Lucy takes on a job with her team to stop a Dark Guild headed towards Magnolia things take on a turn for the worst when she's hit with some kind of strange magic.

Lucky for her Gemini know's what to do about it!

 

Anime Story - Fairy Tail

If you don't like anime this story is not for you.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 176759 Read Count: 146294
[Report This] Published: December 02 2014 Updated: June 24 2016
Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I just watched Fairy Tail Movie and I couldn't look at Mira and Lucy like how I used to XD

 

It feels like in private they do stuff like how you discribe it XDDD



Author's Response:

XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

 

I Welcome you to my mind, have a plesent stay

 

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Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I can't have enough of this story :P I always come back to it XD



Author's Response:

Glad i can please hehe ^.^

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

This chapter is so awesome! I really loved the way Mavis play her role!! also, when Lucy just get excited and do willingliy crawl up Mavis ass was amazing! 

 

very good job on this chapter too! Great work!! *kisses* *kisses*

 

I'm really excited to see what kind of dark artifacts they are looking for! Hype hype hype!! 



Author's Response:

Well stay tuned, ^.^ i'll try to have my next one up by this weekend, Glad you enjoyed it and reviewed as always Devoool.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

NICE! Some butt stuff! I think Cana is into anal XDD I don't find it surprising for some reason lol

 

Great as always! I really enjoyed this chapter! I like Lucy's willingness to be the sex toy for her girlfriends~ I love it!

 

I gotta say, I enjoyed the sex part with Cana's butt! It was hot! 

 

I love this story XD



Author's Response:

Thanks as always for the review Devoool, its a pleasure to see the story going where you enjoy it ^.^ Any guesses to who the mystery character was? im curious to see if you can get it >:P

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

Just as good as always! You keep surprise me with how well you write the chapters :3 Just like Shall said, you discribed Wendy so well and not out of her chracter XD It is just how I imagined her will be lol

Awesome job! I can't wait for the next part :))) 



Author's Response:

thank you ^,^

I was worried at parts i had her OOC but im happy you guys enjoyed her :)

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25 2014 Title: Chapter 7: How far we go for the one's we Love

Wow! I'm speechless... You really can make it sound realistic! I feel like i'm reading a real fairy tail story... well other than the shrinking stuff... and the fun naughty stuff XD

 

I really love it! It is much better than I expected! I still reread it! It is fun and hot! 

 

I'll reread it again tonight... and try to figure the characters :P I'm really bad at guessing but I'll try hard!! XD

 

Thanks alot for doing my request! You did the best story I ever read so far!

 

it became an inspiration! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, i'm thrilled to know my story lived up to your request and i'm quite happy to know you loved it ^.^

I'm glad it became your inspiration, that really makes my day when my stories can do that for other's.

Good luck getting all 7 i made a few easer then other's but i dare you to guess them all right >:P

 

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

Man you always have the best timing! I just came back from a final exam to find THIS!!! The same thing happened last 2 chapters!

 

Okay I'm nervous! I need to take a deep breath! Thank you very much for making my request! I didn't expected it to be today's chapter! I don't know how to thank you TT_TT

 

Here I go! *start reading*



Author's Response:

No thank's are needed its always a thrill and a pleasure to write for my fans ^.^ i take great joy in my work and seeing your reviews is the best thanks i can possibly ask for.

Marry Christmas and i hope you aced your exams

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

The best thing that happened to me today! I return home to find another chapter from you! XD

 

The switching between POVs confused me a little XD Well my English isn't super good so yea :P

 

I got excited to see there are still girls are joining the fun! I also love F/ffff... thing too! I was happy! But I was thinking how you'll manage maintaining all the 4!? Aaaaand you actually did a great job! XD

 

I think I also agree with voredom and want to see some internal butt stuff too! I think it is the most himulating method is to be trapped in someone's butt for a long time or be someone's butt plug :P

 

You're my favorit writer now! Do you take commissions? I definitly want to commission stories from you after you're done with this one ;)



Author's Response:

I do take commissions but my only rule is they have to be of something, Anime, cartoon, comic, game Ect

And i jump between stories so feel free to ask, i doubt this one will end for awile since its getting the most attention currently.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

All I can say is ''I love it''! I was so happy to come back home and find a new chapter! 

 

This is the best christmas gift I could ever :P



Author's Response:

Well im glad you like it because this gift keeps on giving ^.^ stay tunned i'll have anouther chapter up soon.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I didn't think Mavis would join the fun by herself XD I really love it!

 

When I read you're story... I can imagine and picture the events really easy! And I like that! 

Also, the parts where Lucy is thinking about how she like her situation gives me tinggling sensation!

 

Awesomely done overall! I can't wait for the next chapater :))))



Author's Response:

Thank's a lot :D it makes me happy that people can enjoy my story even if it doesn't just jump straight to something. i tend to build things up slowly usually xD

 

Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I was wondering who'll shrink when Lucy is back to normal... She srunk again XDDDD

I can not have enough of this story! I love the anime and I love this fan story! It has everything I like in this fetish! I also like how Lucy is starting to give in to her desires! This is one of the things I love and hardly ever see!

 

It is even written in a way that makes me itching to draw it!! It is so tempting!

 

I know it is impossible to ask for more right away XD I hope I see more anytime soon!!



Author's Response:

Just stay tuned i'll have anouther chapter out in about a day since my challance was awnsered XD I'm happy my story is to your liking and i hope i can keep you intrested :) If you want to draw it some time i would also love to see it ^,^ i think it would look amazing.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.