A shipwreck with hundreds of survivors on a deserted island. Three of the survivors find themselves much bigger than everyone else. How will it play out? Gilligan's Island or Lord of the Flies? Read on and see.
Been a long-time fan of your work and I think this story might be my favorite. My only complaint is that there aren't 40 chapters of it yet. Please keep going!
Sandy is a seasoned maintenance worker of Giga Corp., a company that designs and manufactures gigantic female robots, or "Units."
These Units are designed to satisfy the every whim of their clients but in their off hours, require thorough servicing inside and out.
Here we find Sandy tasked with handling three unique Units, each with their own quirks.
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They say strike when the iron is hot, so here is another story! Hope you all enjoy and feel free to comment! Thank you. (Further tags shall be added as the story progresses.)
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Interesting setting and premise. I also thought the giant slutty robot was fun. Looking forward to future chapters!
This story follows Will Thompson, a married man and new intern at Poole Inc., a prestigious software consulting firm. During his initial steps in the company, he is introduced to Brooke Davis, the Marketing Director, who is an imposing figure both physically and professionally. As the story progresses, Will finds himself drawn to Brooke despite his marital status and the professional boundaries. Brooke, on the other hand, seems to enjoy the power dynamic and the effect she has on Will. Their encounters become increasingly intimate, leaving Will torn between his loyalty to his wife and family, and his desire for Brooke. The story explores themes of power, temptation, and the moral dilemmas faced in the workplace.
Love this so far. The premise and setting are used well. I enjoy your prose. They're detailed and interesting. Good pacing as well, it's no chore to read. And perhaps most important of all, a good ratio of erotica to the mundane. I also dig how the chapters have a kind of cadence.
Some small criticisms. I have a good sense of Brooke and Will, but not so much with the other characters. You may want to develop them a little more in the off-Brooke chapters. Also, I think it could use another editing pass. For example, a whimper escapes Will's lips twice towards the end of chapter 4, which didn't seem intentional.
I'll be eagerly looking forward to your next chapters!