Reviewer: Rude Zude Signed 



Date: March 14 2022
Title: Chapter 1: A Pleasurable Night For Two
Okay, so, I'm going to gush a little here. I'm probably one of the pickiest authors on this site, but I loved this c:
You have absolutely excellent foundations. You've only put out a few pieces, but you already seem to have a pretty good grasp on general syntax which is wonderful! Most authors take a little while to reach that point. (I certainly did) Also, I noticed you favor emotional writing, which, I live for in any piece of media, but smut especially. Makes it that much hotter <3
The themes are great too, humiliation, dehumanization, all fantastic and stuff that is very much meeee!
But more than anything, I adore the sapphic vibe you have with this story! A good amount of smut tends to end up with a very objectifying tone or gaze, and I end up feeling gross either during or after reading. And you avoid it entirely here.
Totally looking forward to seeing you grow as a writer!