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Time-Out 6: Power Play by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 244]
Summary:

Scott Stevens, shrunken and incarcerated in his own home, faces dire consequences for his crimes in the hands (and shoes) of his giant family and acquaintances.  All the while, his mother Judy is hard at work on her senatorial campaign, and as usual has some conniving tricks in store.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70647 Read Count: 347719
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: February 15 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 19 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: One Small Step for Man, One Small Bite for Maggie

Pinnacle of Maggie's cruelty? I'm really really glad to hear it!

I was thinking he should ask his brother to call Ella and tell her about the no-phone rule, but I guess it's a bit too late for that.

It's a bit weird that he lost a golden chance to delay his part of the deal: I was expecting something like "still scared from being in mommy's mouth, I may involuntarily stutter or something, give me 24h to recover" could have worked - it makes sense, increases the % of the deal being respected without accidents, and I guess Maggie would love to keep him thinking about it for hours and basically make him regret having the idea... but I guess when she wants something she just can't wait!

Author's Response:

That's not a bad idea about Kyle, since he knows Maggie can be so vindictive, but Scott's probably a little too nervous after his last encounter with his brother.

You're right that Maggie wasn't in the mood to wait; she makes him stew in anxiety often enough that this time she just went for it.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 15 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Ok, I've been a bit busy in the last weeks, but still I can't believe that while I'm reading the shrink act files you've already finished that and even started two new stories...

Happy next-few-days to me!



Author's Response: Happy days indeed. You better catch up quickly! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: August 24 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman

What struck me in these chapters with Maggie is that he doesn't ask for water.

If he's not thirsty, I don't want to know it.

If he's afraid of asking - idem.



Author's Response:

Interesting thought.  He probably is thirsty, but figures he's better off not trying to ask for anything, so Maggie doesn't get more ammo to tease him with.

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Date: August 24 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Judy to the Rescue

Looks like we are split in two - I'mwith (at least) tylby, aaron, MaximusMarauder: Judy is the best!

I have no idea what she has in mind, or exactly how she's going to make sure it never happens again; for all I know, she may have been planning his future years at the computer while he was with her ("you have no idea" :)



Author's Response:

Hehe.  Well, Judy is definitely up to something, so who knows what was going on with that computer?  There's still plenty of Judy to come in the story.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 11 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Cleanliness is Next to Godliness

@Luidgi "meet this Nancy"? Either she's not so popular or you didn't read some of the previous episodes... in which case I sort of envy you XD

 

 



Author's Response:

Hehe.  No matter where people meet her character, she's probably not going to leave a nice first impression.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 23 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions

"Mommy loves you" now sounds even scarier than before; since she always has an ostensibly fine reason for everything, I really don't want to think how she will justify these kind of things.

Unless she's training him to face Nancy (yeah, sure...)

 

Btw, just out of curiosity, looking for "hubby", "husband", "dad", "widow", "father" etc didn't bring up anything - what happened to mr Stevens? Is it (will it be) important, or can we just assume he's out of their lives for whatever reason?

PS

In the 1st story: "As if sending a warning bell to her tiny sun" ;p



Author's Response:

Yes, Judy's actions in this chapter (and later ones) will indeed look much harder to justify.  But Judy being Judy will have a reason for everything, even if it's twisted as hell.

Funny you mention Mr. Stevens; he'll actually be addressed later on in this story. So the answer is, yes he is important! And good catch on that typo.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 05 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal

I'm not sure what to think... I'd write he's **** up more than ever if I didn't know you, but even that seems unlikely :)

Yet for some reason I'm still thinking of Judy: either she doesn't care, or she lets her guard down with her friends (yeah, sure), or she wants him to be looking for mommy - any other idea?

 

PS

Ella! Doesn't she realize how much not answering sounds like the worst possible answer?

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Exceptions to the Rules

“I know, I get it Mom. It’s fine. Do you have Scott?” the teen asked innocently, suddenly shifting her tone again. “I need him.”

“You need him?”

“Yeah. He’s all gross. I had him in my sock for the very end of the game, so I was gonna give him a bath.”
XD

That being said, you have no idea how much Maggie surprised me - twice, I expected her to let him thank sis before going on; yep, I briefly forgot who she is :)

Now, if I were him, I'd probably be looking for a way to ask Judy permission to talk to Ella - she was looking for him after all, he could ask mommy to call her for him, but he would have to think carefully about it.


PS
I had finally started to read your Omega story (looks great atm), this chapter is one more distraction from it; I hate you guy so very very much... ;p

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Glad Maggie can still surprise readers at this point in the series. Not a bad thought about asking Judy to call Ella, though I'll note that there's definitely something a bit more sinister going on with Scott's mother that might complicate that chance. I hope you enjoy the Omega story.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 22 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face

Oh, so iiuc there will be a new jailmate... your had me worried, I feared there would be too many giant men! The most obvious idea would be that Judy takes him and leaves Scott to Maggie most of the time, but something tells me they won't have it so easy (and so easily KNOWN: not knowing is a big part of being shrunken in this house)


I'm trying to think what kind of task could possibly require him to wear different clothes, but no luck yet (still thinking - not a scuba suit I hope ;)

A small note: being small reasonably means that he will notice every movement, frown, anything a normal sized person does - Mrs Stevens should remember that the smaller he gets, the more difficult it becomes to hide any feeling she doesn't have under her full control.

Author's Response:

I won't yet comment on the person on TV; all I'll say is Kyle will continue to be the only male figure in the house at a normal height.  ;)

Scuba suit is not a bad guess...

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Mommy's Maw

Toothache... I'm used to being surprised by her actions, but I swear this one was surprising even by her standards (and even knowing she always has a reasonable official explanation for what she does).

Oh - "he could tell Judy had made any attempt", shouldn't it be "hadn't"? (or "an")



Author's Response:

Good catch on that typo.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 05 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge

(resisting the temptation to read the other comments) I don't care if the cream is real, she's faking it. And if not, well, it doesn't matter, she was going to do it anyway, just because it's her... Seriously, these two chapters are GREAT!

[OT] I had to look up "cute as a button"; https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/171282/cute-as-a-button is funny (for some definition of fun)



Author's Response:

You may be onto something with Judy's "tooth ache."  ;)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 05 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge

30 chapters! See, it's worth to read comments ^^

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Date: November 07 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Callback

Only every 24 hours! Finally some good news!

 

I thought he should be asking his mom to call Ella, and I was goingto write he should ask her to just explain to Ella the "no phone rule" - ehm, maybe somehow insist she doesn't let anyone else do it - and then it turns out she's actually sympathetic...

I always assumed he couldn't bring himself to discuss those things with her, especially after MT1, but now it's muchmore likely she suspects that Maggie isn't lettimg him talk - that's some good news, for real this time!

 

PS

I'm not sure what's so terribly wrong with my brain, but whenever I read this sort of things I can't help but think that Maggie is worse than Julia - that girl was 99% sincere & only followed her rules, the rules were for the tinies' great good, and anytime she had to hurt them it was their fault...

PS-2

This time seriously: if she ever gets the chance, Ella should play with his tiny boyfriend like in the first installment of the series; most of the things he had to face could be redone consensually & in a playful tone by a loving girlfriend - what better way to get over, say, sufferinginMaggie's socks than to (eg) make it some sort of lover's game/laugh about it? (stupid example: try to tickle her, make her laugh within 5 minutes, she'll do X for you; fail, you'll take her to a romantic movie)



Author's Response:

Interesting what you say about Maggie and Julia. One thing to consider though is that as damaged as they both are, Maggie doesn't stick to her own rules mostly because she has to keep convincing herself that she should be able to do whatever she wants; somewhere underneath, she's a little more human. Julia, meanwhile, is so deep in her mania that she can follow her code and feel totally confident.

Ella is going to appear a bit differently than she did in the first story, partly because there was sort of a do-over after that first one for the characters. There will still be fun to be had though.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 10 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag

Well, everything Judy&Maggie do is supposed to be for his sake - to help him make amends without going to jail at least; so, yeah, why should he not trust her? (...)

Author's Response:

Hehe. Jail's starting to look awfully friendly next to this.

Lollipop by Trawis Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

A young woman toys with her little pet man. 


Categories: Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9177 Read Count: 44583
[Report This] Published: September 20 2014 Updated: August 13 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Lollipop

This is one of the best short stories __ever__!
Not the absolute best first story because I didn't check them all before writing this comment, but it's probably close :)

The Empty Coffin by Nigma Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A young woman takes a little break at a funeral. 

 


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2331 Read Count: 10052
[Report This] Published: October 04 2014 Updated: October 04 2014
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kerry is one of the most insanely hot giantesses on the site, seriously.

And she loves him!

Lucky bastard ;p



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feed back, high praise indeed!

Glad you enjoyed it.

N

Renee's Missing Roomie by Rythmear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A commission I wrote for a fine gentleman about two of our roleplay characters, Renee and Cora. They're ordinary housemates in every way, except that Cora is three inches tall... and after a night of heavy drinking, Renee can't find her friend.


Categories: Vore, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Young Adult 20-29, Footwear, Feet, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4082 Read Count: 9499
[Report This] Published: October 23 2014 Updated: October 23 2014
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Somehow after saving a copy I forgot to comment on how awesome this story is.
Or add it to my favorites.
Or something.

Great job!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed mate :D

Renee's Brand of Punishment by Rythmear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Another commission about Renee and Cora, in which Cora manages to earn her housemate's ire, and discovers what it's like living with an irritated giantess.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Lesbians, Legwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2223 Read Count: 9013
[Report This] Published: November 06 2014 Updated: November 06 2014
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Luckily I'm not the only one who missed this series then :)

(Note to self: someday I must commission a video/picstory out of this)

Author's Response:

:P It's a fun one; though if you're going to use the actual characters, you'd best acquire the permission of the original commissioner. Cora is his character just as Renee is mine. But I'd be happy to write something for you if you'd like to commission me :3

Small Emily by Luidgi Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Emily is troubled and discovering strange needs. 

Focused on girl footwear / feet and shrinking. 

Enough said.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1697 Read Count: 119074
[Report This] Published: November 25 2014 Updated: January 15 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29 2014 Title: Small Emily

“Huh? Is someone there?” said Sophie suddenly waking up in her sock prison.
--
Seriously, I love this story, first for their twisted relationship (they're doing it for her, and she's so big she's uncomfortable, and she wants to get her life back except she doesn't...), and second because I've been busy last month, so I'm getting to see a lot of chapters at once ^^
(now it will take me forever to catch up all the other stories)

Author's Response:

Hi, Thanks for noticing the small mistake in that chapter, I corrected it. 

I am glad you like the story. 

:)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: December 03 2014 Title: Small Emily

Your best story so far :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Updating soon!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.