Penname: thegreatrizzo [Contact] Real name: John
Member Since: September 25 2020
Membership status: Member
Bio:

A writer who is trying to create a shared universe with his stories. I like breast enlargement and insertion. I have a writing.com account and you can explore some of my works there


Web Site: https://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/johnh7hump
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Luna's secret plaything by Yougts Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Levi decided to stay home while his family went on holiday. But as he shrinks himself with a forgotten shrinkbox, his sister decides to take him along as her secret plaything. 


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Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109392 Read Count: 235381
[Report This] Published: November 06 2021 Updated: January 02 2024
Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Taking things further

I was thinking that Luna could grow Levi’s dick to be bigger while he remains small. She can fun with his dick which is absurdly large for his body. She could also grow his tongue to lick her.

The other part is that she could use the shrinkbox on herself. She could minimize her breasts and place Levi on her breasts again under her bikini. Luna then returns the breasts back to normal to really have the bikini squeeze him.

Just some ideas. I really like the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll take them in consideration! 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

Great chapter and story. I like how Luna is balancing out how Levi is still her brother and a tiny that is a sextoy, her sextoy. Levi is struggling with the situation as well. He doesn’t want to be here but he is secretly enjoying it.

I do wish that he will be swallowed and live through it. He is pretty tough by the shrinkbox increasing his durability. Maybe one of those stores has a gel to protect the tiny even more, and give them a flavor, like strawberries. If she does swallow him, the question will be how big she wants to eat him. Would she keep him a small crumb or would she grow him to be a couple of inches to feel him go down?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I believe the box will make him invulnerable to it from the start. I like the flavour bit though! Maybe she'll swallow him both ways. 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2022 Title: Chapter 7: In you go!

Excellent chapter. It will be awesome to see what Levi has to face in the future. He has this underlying feeling that is enjoying this and Luna is trying to pull it out. If he embraces it, he would love this intimacy.

Author's Response:

Totally agree, but when will he give in ;) 

A Tiny Perspective by Grumpy_Tiny Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Jack was going about his life as normal, until one day his best friend did something to him that changed everything. His life had just changed forever.
Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33391 Read Count: 53344
[Report This] Published: December 02 2021 Updated: December 21 2022
Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed
Date: December 03 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Caroline.

Great set up. It will be interesting to see if Emma will have a sweet relationship with Jack where they learn to please each other in their new lives. Or will Emma be tempted by the pleasure and have Jack become more of her toy.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it so far, I hope to upload a chapter each week (at minimum) so you should find out how everything unfolds soon.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it so far, I hope to upload a chapter each week (at minimum) so you should find out how everything unfolds soon.

Itty bitty epidemic: The remake by ittybittyman Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Taking the same idea of my previous story Itty Bitty Epidemic and remaking it. I kinda wrote myself into a corner last time, but this time I have a general idea for the long term. 

A virus is spreading that seems to make men shrink and womens breasts grow. 

I will have strawpolls periodically to get reader input. 


Categories: New World Order, Breasts, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Entrapment, Feet, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7650 Read Count: 29842
[Report This] Published: May 21 2022 Updated: June 20 2022
Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very interesting story. I look forward to see where this goes. I hope that Mandy will grow a lot like how Jake shrunk rapidly. I hope he is the “training bra” that he teased her about. Get some sweet karma for that one.

Tim’s Tiny Week by Shrinker82 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

     After Tim mistakenly drinks a mysterious, secret potion his mother brought back from a research trip to the Amazon, he winds up shrinking to a mere 1-inch tall; now, while his mother frantically works to formulate a cure for her tiny son, Tim is stuck at home in the care of his aunt, who starts taking advantage of her nephew’s “little” condition.


1/29/2024 — Based on the feedback I’ve received, I’ve decided to go ahead and write an epilogue to this story. I’m not sure exactly when it will be finished and posted, but I’ll be working on it as well as a few other small projects as I prepare to write my next novel. I just wanted to thank everyone for all their support and honest feedback. This story was just supposed to be practice for my novels, but it’s certainly taken on a life of its own.


Hooray for 175K reads! 🥳


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 151215 Read Count: 190936
[Report This] Published: February 06 2023 Updated: January 23 2024
Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed
Date: June 01 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Friday Morning Pt.2

My vote is Mckenzie. Throw some teen romance in the mix

Author's Response: Well, you have to remember that McKenzie is still 4 years older than Tim (she’s 19 and he’s 15) so the likelihood of any kind of teenage romance between them (even if she does find him in his shrunken state) is pretty slim. However, I do like the idea of a teenage romance budding over the circumstances…🤔

A Reunion of Revenge by Teeny_teeny_tiny Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Graham returns to his college town for the first time in years.  His day takes a drastic turn when he has a chance encounter with an ex-friend with only one thing on her mind.
Categories: Entrapment, Couples, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6705 Read Count: 10938
[Report This] Published: March 22 2023 Updated: March 22 2023
Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Enter Lars

The beginning of the story was very good. It was drawing me in a lot. The pacing was good. The last chapter came out of no where. The teeth and lasers came out of the blue. It made it look like he had been prepared to be shrunk in the last chapter when it looked like he didn't for the rest of them. Very good story though. Liked Carrie seeking revenge with the shrink ray and trying to give him what he wanted without it being exactly how he planned

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed it.

Mixing Sizes by TerryLarka Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Months after a bad breakup, Jess is ready to start seeing someone new. Her coworker, Drew, seems like the perfect choice: hot, friendly, and is into her. The only problem is that's he's two inches tall. In spite of their friends' disapproval, the two try to make their odd relationship work.

This is a romance story set in a world where tinies and humans attempt to coexist after living in separation for centuries. 

Now Complete!


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69620 Read Count: 111226
[Report This] Published: April 09 2023 Updated: August 13 2023
Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Ch. 4: The Morning After

This is a great story. I hope you continue

Author's Response:

Thank you. I will.

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