[Report This]Date: March 20 2021 10:41 AM Title: Swallowed By a Sick Thief
Many thanks for this fascinating fiction.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2018 5:40 AM Title: Swallowed By a Sick Thief
Ah nice one. Missed the exquisite description of the process of the subject churning and digesting inside Amber's unyielding stomach though. :)
Author's Response:
I highly appreciate every single one of your comments. They mean a lot to me and I truly hope your time in the hospital is short and healing. Thank you for the extremely kind words.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2017 2:24 PM Title: Swallowed By a Sick Thief
Great story! Very unique from what I've read before, so it was definitely an enjoyable read! It was interesting to see her use her snot filled saliva as a means to try and swallow the woman, which even though I'm not a snot person, I found myself enjoying the bit anyways!
The only critisicm I have, is that you mentioned the car was shrunk down to a few inches (which would mean around 2-3 inches typically). So in my mind, the woman should been less than two inches tall if she's gonna fit in such a vehicle. I look at my ruler, and I just get the feeling it wouldn't have been as hard to swallow something that size as much was described in the story, but then again that's just the perspective I took from it.
Great story, certainly glad that I decided to read it, and I wish other one chapter stories were as detailed as this one!
10/10
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind praise! And with that, I just figure that some people have trouble swallowing even tiny pills, their throats close instinctively, so if this tiny woman was even slightly larger than a normal pill a more sensitive person would have a lot of trouble! Thank you for reading closely!!