Penname: Ugly one [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 14 2018
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Semi-active, helped OHH on Deviant art with his hieght charts seiries, hope I can start doing work 1/10 as good as he has in the next couple of years.


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Summary:

The Pantheon of Maids follows the stories of 7 new Goddesses as they inherit a universe.

I would like to Thank TitanTheia as a co-author inspired me to write better more engaging characters and pushed this series into existence.

Optional Origin Story is Chapter 37 of "Charlotte's Universe"

This series now has a conclusion.

The story continues in "Privilaged Protest" & "Charlotte Reborn"


Categories: Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Pantheon of Goddesses Universe
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60593 Read Count: 74217
[Report This] Published: February 10 2019 Updated: May 02 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Wish Victoria didn't need to torment those poor folks for her powers.  Hope she meets Theia soon and she grants her the ablity to have her powers without hurting people.  Good Chapter!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Alyassa seems remarkably petty and in her way pathetic.  All that power and she uses it for crude pleasure.

The tourment should be intresting, would like to see some 'non-aligned' players.  Maybe a Paladin or Ranger(Good can serve Neutral dieties) who Sarah finds attrative, and would like to litterally rock his world.  Only to have them sware featly to the goddess of life, and then let her know that with their loyality comes an oath of chasty.  That a 'lesser' being show such loyality without reward shocks her, as much as she wants to 'indulge' with him (and protect him while doing so).  That he denies himself for her makes her couirous and that he encourages he to play (while keeping alive and not torturing) with her tributes, that his love for her is pure and can only be experessed by service to her and to life (he doesn't kill his foes and heals them).

Sarah though touched is increasingly 'physically' furstrated as his every act on her behalf makes her want to act on "him'.  She begins to pleasure herself with his image in her mind, having a 'devine effect' on him.  As she moves closer to his vaules, the more she wants him in all possible ways with her...

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Hi Ugly one, 

I have been able to work some your feedback into the tournament chapter although it maybe worth noting I am primarily writing the more petty selfish power abusing goddesses, Theia is much better at gentle, the tournament arc is mine however and there is a fair amount of petty coming. 

 

Trying to bring the nicer goddesses forward, once Arianna is free of Fiona there should be more with her as a focus. 

 

JFT

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: April 07 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Would like Hannah to start to move Sarah a bit.  Think Hannah, Thiea and Victoria should be a group over time, with Hannah and Victoria working together (Vicky wanting to protect all life a sacred, Hannah thinking mortals are 'cute' pets to start and slowly vauling them more as she is exposed to Vicky, Thiea and Ari).

Jeff should be Sarah's sin-eater (Hannah's as well), being a mere mortal he won't pretend to know more then they do (he can't), but he will always give them his honest prespective and that regardless of what they do to him he loves them with all his heart and soul.  That in his understanding he will always put them first and endure what he must to help his wife and daughter.  Sarah, and at times Hannah may abuse him, torture him, even kill him from time to time, but he endures and not only serves them but works to his best ablity to make sure they are well.  Sarah keeps bringing him back because of this and her goddess mode begins to love him just as much as her 'mortal' form.  Basically Sarah's 'Kenny' morallity pet.

Hannah though like her mother will never be as abusive to her father, and will help him more then hurt him.  She looks in wonder how in some ways a snack size piece of meat can be so noble and driven to put her and her mother first.  That and he brought her into this universe as well.  This and her interactions with other goddesses with empathy toward mortals affects her as she moves toward them faster and with greater effect then her mother does.

Just my two cents. gppd chapter...



Author's Response: Well, to be honest, if we already are spending our personal two cents, I find it surprising how many of PoGU's reviews call for several Goddesses to form a little self-help clique, that use each other and mortal 'morality pets' to establish some Order of Good. Don't get me wrong, there is something nice about growing a character for so long they reach a different alignment, but why does it have to be in this strictly therapeutical way of "good goddess teaches bad goddess how to be good, while mortal love interest (or similar) helps turn them around"? I mean in Sarah's case this was suggested with almost any mortal she interacted with, ranging from Rich to Jeff. Like JFT and I said a couple of times already now, the shift to goodness is coming (with the time dilation event of chapter 14 that was even sped up slightly for Sarah), but I'd like it to be more gradual, naturalistic, and most importantly of their own volition. Still, thank you for sharing your two cents, and I hope you didn't mind me sharing mine.

Summary:

Andrew messed up and was shrunk to 3 inches because he flirted with a witch. Now Vanessa, his best friend, gets to take care of him for a year. Oh boy. Now, over the next year he will encounter new obstacles and maybe learn to be a better person before the witch decides his final fate. Let’s see what the year brings...

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Object, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, M/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36654 Read Count: 55843
[Report This] Published: February 23 2019 Updated: September 02 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: New Day, Same Size

Good story so far, but a hamster wheel? Really?  That would be like Andrew getting her a Iron or a skillet, just not done as a gift.  Venessa did that to a guy she 'likes', I mean if she had a full sized treadmill and shrunk it(you know something he could use 'when' he's restored or even if he isn't), but she basically went to a pet store and put what $5 on it for a Christmas gift after he agreed to let her partice magic on him.

Hopefully next chapter she will make it up to him.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

It was more meant to be a joke for us writers and each chapter goes with a different month each chapter leading up to july for when he can be resized. Also the only Brittney knows the spell to shrink things or people as its considered an advanced spell in this universe we've created. Glad you are enjoying this story and hope you check out our other work.

 

---Tiny

The Intern by Javert Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
[Report This] Published: May 06 2019 Updated: May 23 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: May 24 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The New Girl

More Olivia's playful domanince over Jack!!!

Summary:

After a traitorous murder attempt, Thalia, the princess’ maid, is blessed with power beyond mortal scale. Yet, even with the power balance between her and her princess dramatically reversed, she feels ever more bound to her, for good or ill.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20755 Read Count: 38517
[Report This] Published: June 19 2019 Updated: June 28 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Grim News

Great Story, maybe a part two after the wedding?



Author's Response:

Thanks. No plan for that yet, but if I have a good idea for it, I'd definitely give it a shot.

Summary:

Aftee hearing multiple rumors abour a beautiful maiden who is being held captive by a great and terrible beast, Sir Gabriel attempts to rescue her. Neither the beast nor the maiden are what he is expecting.

 

If you wish to see some rendered images of thess two, you can always follow this link

 

https://www.deviantart.com/renulen57/gallery/69386702/a-maiden-and-her-knight-characters


Categories: Giantess, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58815 Read Count: 58090
[Report This] Published: October 10 2019 Updated: November 21 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01: To Rescue A Maiden

Glad you are conitnuing this Story!  I love it so far!  Thank you!

Summary:

Yet another Halloween, yet another story focused Cassandra and her hijinks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Cassandra the Witch
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10064 Read Count: 8948
[Report This] Published: October 31 2019 Updated: October 31 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstar
Date: October 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Appericaite the work and time you put into this (10k words!), but no where near as good for me as the first two, couldn't get into the 'Harvard' 13th October and the amount of eating and 'poop' stuff didn't really add to the enjoyment.  Maybe a shorter story where she isn't so "mary-sue' and that her mother, brother and friend actually influnce her beyond 'she loved them'.

She seems to me to be a vapid, uncaring tween who gets less intersting the longer the story went.  In the first two she actually seemed to have some depth of character and some challange to her, in this read it seems Cassandra just bottomed out...

Depending on my time I will try to re-read maybe I missed something.  thank you for your time.



Author's Response:

Though I was initially shocked and saddened to see the lowest rating I've ever gotten, I'm happy there is more than surface-level critiques to it.  You raise a fair point of Cassandra seemingly becoming less interesting, but I've always veiwed and written her as an all-powerful 'mary sue'.

I also understand that once a creator has made something and allowed others to experience it, they cannot (and more importantly should not) tell people how they should feel/view their work.  How you interpet my stories isn't something I should influence outside of said story, I should rely on my literary techniques of the story to do that... however, if you'll indulge me, I would like to state my intentions with this entry into Cassandra's tale.

Simply put, she's losing more and more of her humanity the longer she uses her powers.  She'd grown used to killing people by the second story, which was something she did her best to avoid in the first story, and now considers herself separate from humanity.  The morals she tried to hold onto at first, like insisting on Morgan acting like her mother, not a worshipper, she's letting go of slowly.  She can still empathize with people a bit, like Sebastian worrying about his relationship with his sister reminding her of her love for her brother, but she had also gotten to know him a bit by then too.  Basically, it's becoming harder for her to naturally act 'human' and more does as she wants when she has the power to.  In a sense she has regressed menatly to be more childish.

Since I only plan on releasing chapters for Cassandra on Halloween, I know I can't just say "Wait until next year to see how I build from this", each story shouldn't have to rely on a new entry to validate it, and for failing to acheive that I apologize.  I will try to grow from this and do better, thank you for bringing this to my attention.