Penname: shall328 [Contact] Real name: Shawn
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The Fairies of Fairy Tail by Franchise Writer Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

When Lucy takes on a job with her team to stop a Dark Guild headed towards Magnolia things take on a turn for the worst when she's hit with some kind of strange magic.

Lucky for her Gemini know's what to do about it!

 

Anime Story - Fairy Tail

If you don't like anime this story is not for you.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 176759 Read Count: 146287
[Report This] Published: December 02 2014 Updated: June 24 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Drinking's more fun with friend's

Thst was awesome, you did a great job. Thanks for taking my suggestions and making them into this great chapter. You really nailed how Cana would probably act in that situation.



Author's Response:

Thanks i appreciate your review and im glad you liked it ^,^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Some Cat's like water

Another great chapter, good job. I really liked the shower scene, I love when the shrunken person is used to wash the giant person's body. I'm pretty confident that I know the mystery woman, but I don't have a particular request. I'm just enjoying what you're writing. If you'd still like me to guess however, I can. I agree with KentaRyu, I wouldn't mind seeing Mavis eventually. Maybe after some of the others brought up so far, like Erza, Mirajane, Juvia, and Levy.



Author's Response:

by all means try guessing. If there's not anyone you specificly want i can just continue with what i had planned next. Besides im eager to see if you know >:P

Thanks for the review ^.^

 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Do Fairies Have Tails?

I know you said the argument was a pain to bwrite, but I think it was worth it. The whole thing brought a lot of comedy to the story. You also seemed to capture Mavis' love for her guild very well. Add to that some more great butt/foot action, and this was another great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank's i was really worried i made there reactions to OC. i was trying to capture Mavis's emotions but there wasn't a lot o could really go off of. I'm happy you liked it ^,^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I really enjoyed this chapter as well! I know I already said it with Mavis, but you are really nailing the various personalities. You write the characters how I expect they would act, based on the anime. The sex scenes are also great, lol. Also, the twist was very nice. I actually thought it was still Gemini there for a bit. If you wanted to, you could go with three of Lucy. Mirajane is an expert in transformation magic, and at one point in the anime she transforms into Lucy. Just something to think about.

You really went out of your way with this chapter's mystery character. I knew it was familiar, but I couldn't quite place it. It took me awhile to remember the anime and her name. I'll wait till at least this time tomorrow to post my guess, to give everyone else a chance.



Author's Response:

ARE YOU KIDDING ME YOU ALREADY KNOW!!!!! YOUR DOMINATING THESE!!!!!

Well i still have a day so thats still to be determined :P

I'm glad you liked my chapter its always a pleasure to read your review shall.

Also i have hundreds upon hundreds of unique writing ideas i like to think about when ever i make a chapter... your idea didnt even cross my mind ;-;

i feel ashamed its such a fun idea i don't know why i didnt even think about it, 3 Lucy's sounds amzing to me XD

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: December 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

Magi guessed what I was going to guess. Was the girl Shiroyasha?



Author's Response:

Seriously im thinking of some freaking obscure charactors here and people still get them XD do i need to be even less informative???

Anyways good guess shall :3 I'll have my next chapter up soon so stay tuned.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: December 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

Okay. Is it Riza Wildman, from Princess Resurrection? 



Author's Response:

Damn i am genuinly suprised. I'll had no one ever recognize that anime when i told them about it. Congratz on guessing it right ^.^

The Freshman: Alternate Tales by nap25 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

These are alternate timeline stories that will explore what could've happened with the various characters of The Freshman story that I'm working on. They will consist of requests, commissions, or just off the wall ideas I may come up with between chapters.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7177 Read Count: 23275
[Report This] Published: December 19 2014 Updated: March 05 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Trouble on the Cruise part 1

That was great, I really enjoyed reading it. I personally am not into vore, but there is something about this and your other story, that I am cool with it. My favorite part had to be where Gina and Susan were using Linsey in bed. I'd love to see more like that in the future. Again, great job on the story so far, as well as the other story.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part :) I do plan on having situations similar to that in the main story sooner or later.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very nice, I really enjoyed the chapter. Susan is a realy fun character to read about, so i realy dig these alternate tales. Its good to see you back again. Sorry to hear about your computer, the same thing happened to me a few months back. It sucks to lose stuff that you've been working on, so I understand not wanting to resume right away. Again, great job, and I look forward to chapter 11.

More Precious than Gold by Franchise Writer, Devoool Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

After The Straw Hat Pirates land back in the Grand Line after there adventures in Skypia, Nami finds a rather strange treasure from the gold they looted.

 

One Piece story, if you don't like anime, don't read.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Odor, Scat, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79842 Read Count: 36914
[Report This] Published: January 29 2015 Updated: January 29 2017
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: More Precious than Gold

Nice job on the new story, its just as good as your Fairy Tail story. I really enjoyed it. One Piece is another favorites of mine, so its nice to see it used in this way. The description of events and attention to detail are also top notch as always. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed Shall ^,^

The Lords of the Ternakan by Aborigen Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

One drunken evening, Douglas and Loretta discover an invader in their cupboard: a tiny man foraging for food. They engage the little man, Chocan, in a game of sexual thrill-seeking in exchange for his life. It's all fun-and-games initially, but the evening takes a dark turn when the tiny warrior appears able to win the giantess' heart.


Categories: BBW, Butt, Couples , Humiliation, Insertion, Scat, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: A Couple with lil person
Challenges: A Couple with lil person
Challenges: A Couple with lil person
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18759 Read Count: 84759
[Report This] Published: February 02 2015 Updated: February 02 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed the story, you did a great job. There aren't enough stories out there with fat people as the focus, so its always good to see them pop up. The interaction between the giant couple and the tiny man was very well thought out, and interesting. Just a suggestion as far as the tags go, you might add a bbw tag.



Author's Response:

Will do, thanks for pointing that out. Thanks very much for the kind words.

Welcome To Fairy Tail by Franchise Writer, Devoool Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A much different take on what happens when Lucy first joins Fairy Tail with Natsu.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68977 Read Count: 50204
[Report This] Published: February 16 2015 Updated: May 13 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Welcome to Servitude

Wow, that was quite the chapter, it might be my new favorite. I really enjoyed the rough and domineering Erza, very nice. I hope there is more rough stuff later on.  Sorry to hear about the lack of reviews, I'm sure you'll get more. People seemed to really like your other Fairy Tail story, and it got a lot of reviews, so this one is bound to be just as appreciated.



Author's Response:

I hope so :( was worried this one wasn't as pleasing but i guess its to soon to find out. Thanks for the review Shall, it's always a pleasure to read yours ^.^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: May 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Fairy Tail

I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your challenges, it was always fun. No, I never could figure out the castle or the creature. I'm really curious about those though.



Author's Response:

I'll post what they where in the chapter update then, until then i hope your looking foward to Michelle, she's very eager to be a part of Lucy's hare... Family.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Welcome to Galuna Island

Sweet, another finely written chapter. I remember the Galuna Island arc, it was an early one and a favorite at the time. You did a great job of weaving your story into the existing plotline. I also really enjoyed Sherry's treatment of Lucy, and her frustration at Lucy's resilience. I'd say I'm sad to see you stopping here for awhile, but I love Fairies of Fairy Tail, so its all good. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed Shall, and i'll try to bring back some of my old challanges for you in my update :P did you ever figure out what that castle in the lake was btw xD

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Resolution

I'm happy to see you add again so soon. Another great chapter, I really liked it. The description of the magic was even more thorough, the effects were very fun. I loved the tub scene, I always like it when the big woman is rough with Lucy. Was Koichi Shido the person you added, from Highschool of the Dead? Kind of a nod towards your first mystery character, Saeko Busujima.



Author's Response:

I shoudln't be surprised you caught that Shall, you always where the first to find out my little things like that :P

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Welcome to Reality

Long time no read, lol. I was glad to see you added another chapter, I really enjoyed it. The final part, with Lucy, Levy, and Mira, was especially enjoyable. As always, your description of the magic is very well thought out. I can't wait to see more.



Author's Response:

SHALL! So happy you still like my stories lol, happy to read your review :3

Next chapter i'll be going over the spell that affected Lucy, so a much more vivid discription will be there to read ^.^

Looking foward to updating soon >:)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome To Your New Life

Another very nice chapter. I like the system between Erza and Mira, its a great concept and well thought out. I'm interested on how that might play out later on. After reading this, I can't wait to see what Erza has in store for Lucy.



Author's Response:

stay tuned, i promise it will be fun and naughty >:P

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Fairy Tail

Wow, it didn't take long for you come up with something new. Good job to Devoool and yourself, because this seems as great as the other story. I'm very excited to see things unfold in a darker, more rough manner. Also, I have to say, Devoool's art is amazing as well. I saw the cover page, and it was awesome. The rest of the art was great as well. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on his stuff from now on.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed both the beautiful artwork and chapter Shall :)

Renee's Mite-Sized Christmas by Rythmear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

In a parallel version of Renee and Cora's story in which Cora is even tinier than before, Renee is busily preparing a secret Christmas Party for her roomie. Unfortunately, Cora arrives home early - and has no way to let her towering house-mate know.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2646 Read Count: 9448
[Report This] Published: March 26 2015 Updated: March 26 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, I really enjoyed it. I'm usually not into this size in a story, but it was written very well, and I love both of the characters. I am a big fan of the Renee and Cora stories, and I hope we see more in the future.



Author's Response:

Oh rest assured, the commissioner is not done with these two yet, and neither am I - not by a long shot ^.^

Swan #627918 by OneInch Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: In 2015, when the world is dealing with an incredibly rare disease named 'Disease #627918', a young girl takes it upon herself to travel to a friends who she hasn't seen in 3 years to look after her, after she is diagnosed. Did she make the right choice or will she live to regret it.

WARNING: THERE WILL BE SOME GIANT MALE CONTENT IN THIS STORY.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Couples , Feet, Footwear, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18367 Read Count: 109329
[Report This] Published: April 23 2015 Updated: May 25 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Interlude 1

You're doing a great job with the story so far. I am really enjoying every chapter you post. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it from here. Sorry to hear about the negative experience with that guy, some people are just like that. There are a lot of great people here, so I'm sure there will be way more decent people than jerks. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad that people are enjoying my story. I never thought when I started this that so many people would enjoy and leave me so many positive reviews. I'm so glad that people aren't crucifying me for my writing, my first language is Italian so my writing will probably never be perfect. And I've long forgotten about the jerk, so many positive and nice people on this site that I have no need to bother with the bad ones. :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

I meant to comment on your last chapter, but I totally forgot. I really enjoyed the previous two chapters, they were great. I am loving how sinister Chloe is being, and the fact that Amy doesn't think she is doing anything on purpose. I can't wait to see how much Amy has shrunk, and what fun Chloe is going to have.

Also,the video you made was amazing. The women looked great, and all the interaction was well done. The final scene of the woman looking out of the mouth at herself in the mirror was done perfectly. That's the first time I've ever seen that done in a video.



Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I really love how Chloe's character is turning out, I feel she's going to be different to the generic woman with a shrunken man/woman in stories on this site. Not that I'm disrespecting them, I love them. But I feel it's time to bring something different to the table. Also thank you for your support on my video, it means a lot. I will definitely make more videos soon. You won't have to wait long for the next chapter, I promise :)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.