A lonely man finds himself at the mercy of an unaware woman with a head-cold.
Brilliant stuff! I love the attention to detail.
Without detail, this sort of story is relatively pointless, I think, so thanks for noticing!
Liam had always wanted to meet the super-sized heroine Enormica in person, but a chance encounter introduces him to a world he never could have dreamed of...
Well, thats a hell of a cliffhanger. I eagerly await the next installment.
it was a peaceful day for the occupants at the local pool until a strange phenomenon shrinks all the people down to les than 1/4 an inch. problems really start to get serious when a family of young girls arrive for some swimming.
yes, the characters are practically the same from "tales of a shrinking sister".
Pity that you seem to have stalled out with this one. I was hoping to find out what happened to Ear Guy someday. . . .
Two 15 year old guys buy a lamp for 5 dollars. If only they knew what would happen after.
“How can I turn down a no risk adventure as a man. I would be a fag if I did so here I go.”
Come on, really? Dont be so fucking stupid.
To help with farm work, Kenji purchases a Fyth, a giantess slave.
This is some really solid and well written stuff with actual emotion and real human characters. This is heads and shoulders above and beyond your usual story around here.
Well done, sir!
Thanks, desslok!
A young woman is forced to make a horrible decision after a strange incident causes her to grow to incredible heights.
How good is this story by this site's standards? Really goddamed brilliant. You really expressed the emotion and trauma going on in her head, a side of the genre not often seen.
Plus there's all kinds of directions this story could go. A slow loss of humanity (and a recovery from the brink), accidental bonding with a 'victim', something from the victim's point of view, coming to terms with her basic needs. Hell, even just day to day existance beyond the need to eat would be awesome.
Excent work as always - my only criticisim? The continuity problem, where he is trapped between her toes, she lifts her feet into the air and then he comforts her by touching her lips. Thats one hell of a contortion for her to reach (or he has a super long pinky! :) )
She starts crying and brings him down before that, balling around him like when they slept in 'Awakening'
Ellie and Aaron have an unusual arrangement with a shrink ray that allows them to live out secret desires and, ultimately, brings them closer in ways neither could’ve anticipated.
The first chapter had great detail - a very vivid picture. The second chapter had great emotion. Cant wait to see future chapters unfold - well done!
Thanks!
A woman becomes engaged to her three-inch-tall beloved, but her staunchly conservative family may be prepared to go to extreme measures to prevent this union.
Wow - this is actually kind of painful to read. Replace "Tiny" with "Gay" and this exact same conversation could unfold all over the world. Lines like "No, I'm the normal one" are probably all too true.
That's definitely a thought I had when writing. Not that the story is supposed to be taking a social stance, but I knew the scenario wasn't that far removed from real life.
Okay, the multiple endings idea was kind of cool. Well done.
Anya gets the shrinking disease, but her case is more serious than any case every exciting before! Being only the size of an ant, Anya is facing the challenges of life, school and most of all, her sister Annouska's feet!
Honestly I think the first chapter, the world building, the reaction to the news, the girl hitting - and then surpassing - the "limit" should be expanded upon. It's way more intereting stuff than your bog standard "Hey, here's some [FETISH] for you."
Not bad, but could be so much more.
I get what you mean but that's why I'm here. Writing fetish. I am not here to write literature :p
I wrote something for someone who touched me in a very special way.
Brilliant stuff! Now, the next obivous move? A second chapter recaping the events of chapter 1 but written from Flek's point of view.
The following story depicts the deaths of hundreds and thousands of nanoscopically sized college students, all of whom were mysteriously and instantly teleported into the house of a careless woman.
Follow the adventures of these poor souls, as they feel the deadliness and softness of their giantess' soles, as they try to do whatever it takes to miraculously save their puny lives, no matter how high the risk is.
What you WILL see in this story: Micro/Nano, Unaware, Feet, Death, Gore, Crushing, Masturbation, Sweat (small amounts.)
What you WON'T see in this story: Musk, Gas, Wastersports, Scat.
Despite being marked as 'Complete', it is possible that future content may be added: I am also looking for any suggestions regarding scenarios or locations, within reason.
So, we totally need chapter two, where they're on her/our head!
Katie is the head of Phi Zeta Mu, the best-damned sorority in the world! She guarentees a great time for anyone who stops by the Phi Zeta house. So when one of her sorority sisters ruins the plans for the big end of the year pool party, Katie is going to have to take matters into her own hands...and feet, and...other parts...
Well done! For a first story, you nailed it. Lots of detail, well written and a solid read.
The obvious sequel? A story told from the tiny people surviving in their new landscape. Perhaps Ruby and the couple meet up somehow?
Thanks for reading it! I am pondering a similar idea. I do want to return and visit Katie in the future though.
As to the 'how would the reader know they were aliens', I might have left it up to 'who the hell knows where they came from?'and not defined it at all.
Is it an experment? An accident? Are they aliens? Are they from another dimension? The author himself probably doesnt know - the aliens just might be a guess on his part.
But it's a well done story so far - a Mad Max/Walking Dead with massive feet. Interesting.
Never EVER appologize for content and character development over smut. The two are not mutually exclusive!
I've always had a gambling problem and it's gotten me into trouble before, but now I am definitely in over my head. I made one last bet with a friend, if I lose, I live on her as a parasite for a month to "learn a lesson." What will I do once her girlfriend and my sister get involved too? Can my mite sized body survive a month at the hands and bodies of three playful and taunting women?
A very well done, well written story. I love the feeling you are able to project with the discriptions and setting. Good job!
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it!
A young man gets far more up close and personal with his co-worker than he ever imagined, and experiences more of the human mouth than he ever wanted to.
Damn, now I want a paraell universe Chapter 18 where he says "Oh screw this - I'm taking her out!" and chokes her to death.
Perhaps a special edition after you wrap up?
