Penname: pseudoaddiction7 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 10 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Born in 1991. I've been using my creativity through writing and imaginative works for as long as I can remember; my earliest project was a comic book I wrote and illustrated when I was in first grade. I began poetry and short story writing when I was fifteen (but ended up destroying all my creative works three years later).


In general, I like writing about instances of good communication between people. Sometimes, I will draw from my own experience for more awkward moments.


I care about creating quality work, so send me an e-mail sometime or write me a review with your comments.


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Reviews by pseudoaddiction7
Summary: Aaron undergoes unexpected sexual abuse at the feet of two sisters. (crush)
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9330 Read Count: 50522
[Report This] Published: November 04 2007 Updated: November 04 2007
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: April 04 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lydia is so evil! i love it! ^^

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Now and Then by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: In 2009, high school junior Aaron Ledbetter is diagnosed with adult-onset minutism, a condition that will cause him to gradually shrink over the next year or so.

In 2010, high school senior Aaron Ledbetter is still adjusting to his tiny size when he finds himself a prisoner and totally at the mercy of an unbalanced ex-girlfriend.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8912 Read Count: 22082
[Report This] Published: July 29 2010 Updated: July 29 2010
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: July 30 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hey didnt think id see u back here

gotta be honest bud, this is story number three, but already it feels a little stale, and it shows in your descriptions of things. i think a major improvement would be a cap on the word 'playful' or 'playfully'; only so many times i can see that in a passage that it loses meaning altogether. could also be that i dont like arbitrary descriptions, but i still think that you need to add some more words to your regular vocabulary ('foregone conclusion' was a nice touch)

btw, you write a lot. i mean a lot. is the whole story already finished? drop me a line son



Author's Response: The GTS stuff I write is just to blow off steam when I'm working on something mainstream. I usually give it a cursory glance for editing, but don't usually do any heavy revisions or rewrites. So I sometimes end up a little repetitive, or (as you pointed out) overusing the occasional word. I also have a few tropes that I absolutely love, and tend to revisit over and over again. Sorry if you think it's stale, or if you find my regular vocabulary lacking. Definitely haven't finished the story yet. Not even 100% sure what's going to happen next, as I didn't plot this story out like I did my last two. Thanks for reading, and I hope you find the future chapters a little more to your liking.

Summary:

A depressed young woman finds solace from an unlikely source: She discovers a tiny man in her bedroom.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5064 Read Count: 45685
[Report This] Published: October 16 2010 Updated: March 02 2014
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: October 17 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is a good read for me so far. We must be on the same wavelength somehow. :)

I can't put my finger on it. I like the story and I will continue to read it as it comes out. I don't have any constructive criticism; I don't feel like criticizing you for some reason. I won't offer any suggestions either; you do your own thing.

Making friends by dr_joe Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Meeting someone in a club and taking them home is a usual setting. Something about those flashing lights and bopping beats makes people do weird things.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Lesbians, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19690 Read Count: 86507
[Report This] Published: October 24 2010 Updated: October 17 2012
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: November 05 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry, but I'm just not used to your method of presenting dialogue. I'm more used to quotation marks so I can tell when the dialogue part ends and the exposition part resumes. It's too tedious to have to separate it out myself.

Author's Response: I've been meaning to fix that for ages, but old habits die hard. Thank you for pointing it out and I'll see if I can get myself together =^_^=

The Bard by Silhouette Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A poor man tries to turn his life around


Categories: Entrapment, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1373 Read Count: 4935
[Report This] Published: October 29 2010 Updated: October 29 2010
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: November 01 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sucks to be that guy.

Summary:

My girlfriend suspects me of "e-cheating" and decides to punish me!


Categories: Feet, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 715 Read Count: 14920
[Report This] Published: December 04 2010 Updated: December 04 2010
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: December 06 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Grindhouse

Constructive criticism: I think that Tonya's boredom, as you establish in your opening paragraph, doesn't remain consistent during the story. Does Bobby's begging make her more interested in torturing him?

I also think it's weird that you would still describe Tonya as beautiful even though she's clearly gone a little crazy here.

Like 'She kept looking at me with her beautiful brown eyes'. What about 'with a crazed look in her eye'? She seems very resolved and not interested enough in what she's doing. Just saying.

Coming Clean by littlemac Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: A man’s sexual secret is damaging his relationship with his girlfriend when an accident at work gives him the opportunity to come clean. But the man’s ex also has something to say.
Categories: Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27819 Read Count: 284690
[Report This] Published: January 19 2011 Updated: January 25 2011
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: January 21 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is pretty good so far.

Author's Response: Sweet! I've been working pretty hard on it lately.

Summary:

A guy develops a walkman that reads his mind and transforms him into whatever he desires.  How could that possibly end badly?


Categories: Unaware, Transformation, Object, Body Part, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10777 Read Count: 54091
[Report This] Published: March 05 2011 Updated: March 05 2011
Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed
Date: March 06 2011 Title: Chapter 1: An Object of Affection

A fun story filled with scenes of orgiastic pleasure (a la girl-on-girl action).

Great opening: that's the perfect setup for a guy who spends almost the entire story getting sweated and cummed on after transforming into a pair of panties.

The only thing I was disappointed by was that you didn't do that much with Richard's old girlfriend; the part when she catches him was pretty exciting. I was thinking that there could've been a more thorough setup for her to add that extra oomph to the excitement. Then, at the moment of truth, his Walkman device would fail, leaving him trapped with the last person on earth he'd want to be with while 1/2 an inch tall. So, I thought he got away a little too easily.

Overall, this was a good effort.