Reviewer: Carweirdo3 Signed
Date: December 18 2020
Title: Chapter 1: Warmth in a Cold Cave
Glad to see you writing another series, a delight as always.
I might be a bit selfish saying this, but I sure do hope Jerik doesn't become a completely submissive character. It'd probably make the story less interesting, and I don't think Charlotte would appreciate it too much either, after all she does seem to enjoy his equal companionship.
Author's Response: Haha thanks for the review, I was thinking about that too. As it stands I also don't really like his current state of mind, and I plan to do a timeskip again soon where he might have time to reflect and get over the shock of the recent events.
I'm not real sure if he'll ever be like "tough" or anything else, perhaps constantly relying on Charlotte's strength to win all encounters.
Oh but I really would like for him to come clean with her, and have her try to rebuild his self confidence so he won't feel like excess baggage, know what I mean?
I think it's fine to leave a comment like you have; these stories aren't usually premeditated and they can be molded depending on feedback I get. However I also promise I'll never incorporate things I don't want to happen.
Perhaps the upcoming years will make him cooler, cause I sure as hell know I'm a lot different now than I was when I was sixteen. *Thumbs up*