WoooooWWW =]

A fantastic story (so far). The best giantess story i have ever read *___* (for my interests^^)

Please keep on it =)

I really like your storys =)

I love storys about shrunken people so small (!!!) controlled by woman with their sexual minds *__*^^

Mabye you also include a part where the small people have to deal with a sexual attention between the girl and a men :P (also for "A puddle in the forest"? :=D)

Again, please keep going =]

Michael :)

Great written =)

Can't wait for the next captures :]

Michael 

@banfield: Well then it just seams this Story isn't for you're "kind". I for example really like a male and a female playing with tiny humans in there sexual interaction... and i don't think that i stand alone.

@multiverZ: Me too :)

@chozo: Don't get to upset about it. You just can't please everybody =) Maybe with the next Story/Chapter you win also his side (don't remove the male) ;D

Michael

"Who knew? Who cares, she concluded."
: P
"She softened her approach slightly, feeling the return of a more gentle her."
: )

"She told him."
but not the readers : / ^^

"But, the again,"
Typo

Really like how these two talk : )

"He laughed."
"He fucking laughed, thought she."
Good bye...

"She just simply couldn’t handle everything that had happened."
: (

"Rose?"
!!!!!

Have fun James ; )

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Awesome Story versusterminus7
Hope we'll see the Virgin again = )

Awesome story so far!

Really like the characters and the way you describe their thoughts and what is happening : )

In this chapter I especially liked the vore scene as well how Sigdaw felt about her death in the end.

Also intrigued by the virgin in the way she reacts to this situation and I wonder what else she will do and if Jawm is able to snap her out of her killing spree.

Nice story. Would be nice to also have a viewpoint from the tinies : )

Took me two weeks of reading almost every day to get to this chapter (Lutice's sexy (and slightly depressing) Sidestory included; There should be more sexy ones like that). I couldn't stop reading!


Where should I begin?

I loved Shrink High so this first drew me to this story (and a recommendation from /d/!)

Character development everywhere! All characters we meet have a life, emotions, dreams and fears! Instead of doing info-dumps you gradually and logically let us get closer to each one. When emotions sky rocket mine do too.

I almost shed manly tears with the anguish Isabella felt of having killed a loved one, her death and the reveal of her past. A Person that had to lose everything to become the good one she was, only to die thanks to it... THE SOCIETY NEEDS TO PAY!

Even though Sanders seems to be the hero in this story, thanks to the other characters being this fleshed out he seems more like one among many!  And he really is a good man, forced through hardship and failure. But the friends, slow victories and closure he's made will give him the strength to at least save one of his past friends and deal a crushing blow to the society!

I'm torn about Aviel. From one side I want her dead for her betrayal and giving into her anger, from the other I understand her after her loss and thus becoming blind to what is really going on around her. I really want her to see the truth, to see how she reacts once everything comes crashing down. Her reaction to Sanders hurting Flonne shows that she at least cares about her. Flonne dying would doom Aviel entirely.

Flonne... Oh Flonne... Innocence turned into an almost unfeeling accelerated grown weapon. I really, reaaaaalllly hope Sanders is at least able to safe and make her see the full truth! Aviel can burn for all I care if Floone dies (plus Flonne would probably be even needed to let Aviel see reason). Then again the amount of pain and suffering almost all the characters went through... for some death really is the only quick way to end their otherwise life long suffering.

Even though Lutice is the visibly cruelest... Like most, at first I raged at her but after seeing the real one... I just want to put a gun to her head to end her suffering. Trapping a person inside their own head... The Society has become so... no is cruel! *The directors manipulating way of talking dances through my head* With Sanders being the only one that can get through to the real Lutice, thanks to her love for him, I can only hope he's able to strengthened her good side enough for her to put and end to the other one.

After Matilda's comment Catherine it seems like she could actually be persuaded once things turn around.

Angela is a psychopath and should be put down as quickly as possible.

I want to dislike Darius but I can't. He may be amoral and needs people who keep him in check but he really is a brilliant tactician! It will be interesting to see if he will really betray them. He can't save and keep his sister from harms way alone, meaning he would need to play the leader long enough for the society to really be no threat anymore.

Phyrra/Jessica... I think this is Sanders greatest Ally Darius's Sister meant. Loved the way she slowly got smarter every day. Even while we get to see her thoughts. And Jessica trying to give Samantha as much closure as she can before Phyrra takes completely over... : ( I actually want Phyrra to survive and Jessica to at least have a somewhat peaceful death.

I could keep on writing about why I like or dislike other characters, but will stop for now.


Twists, Reveals and Foreshadowing.

Only Authors who have a firm grasp of their story are able to do it in such a way that previous actions of characters make perfect sense once it's revealed why. So satisfying!

The Setting and describing the environment

Crushing trees with fingers, moving skyscrapers, the vibrations, being smaller than ones toe, enormous dead and rusted buildings, the reaction during and after the shrink disaster, crushed under ones schoolbag, ...

The way you describe the environment and what is happening allows me greatly to picture what the characters are seeing (including from their POV thanks to the characterization)


No negatives from me for now, though in the first and 2nd Act you kept eating words as well sometimes using the wrong tense for some words. But that's about it


To this chapter:

The Traitors at the top almost always cause the most damage. The people of Rome will never be the same after being betrayed twice.

Rome... the name alone tells me it will probably fall but... if not...


I'm sure I forgot lots more to praise about but that's all that I could think of for now.

Hope I was able to stroke your ego a bit! : )

Thanks for filling my dose of "After Shrink High" for maybe a week :P


Darius  just can't stop himself from giving the "Sanders our Hero" train an upgrade after another^^

"How did they learn his name?" Terence asked half to Dixie and half to himself."
Such a good question^^

"Yes...well you already myself and the Commander so why do-"
Typo? -> Word missing between "already" and "myself"?

"Their not in substantial numbers"
Typo? -> "Their" should be "They're"?

Great that the society is still !actively! working against them and not just waiting for them to come

"The rage that had carried him over seemed to smack right into a wall of cement, leaving Terence unsure what to do."
Hehe... ah Darius : D

"The Phoenixes are right about the traitor. I know... because I was one of them."
Wow... didn't expect him to actually have the SPINE to come out with the truth by HIMSELF!
Also really liked the way the society got to the mayor.

"their anger at Darius forgotten."
... ; D

"OR SELL US INTO SLAVERY TO THIS MONSTERS"
Typo? -> "this" -> "these"?

"P- please. There... there is-"
probably something important...
"Wait, we should hear him out,"
YES!!!

"Let me do SOMETHING to make those..those MURDERERS pay! PLEASE!"
"But it did put more than a few points in the “let him live” category."
: )

"Terence's glare shifted to look at him and the Captain clamped his mouth shut tighter than a oil drum."
: D : D

"The reaction was quick and nasty as all four yelled in almost unison, ..."
Darius just can't stop haha : D

"William had a feeling this plan was going to run into trouble"
as it almost always does : /

William still preparing Samantha : )

"You are your workers are exempt from that order."
Typo? -> Point or Comma missing?

"seemed to hide a smilel"
Typo

"And not all of that war will be fought in the light..."
as it should be ; )

This was an awesome read! Thanks for the translation.