Great story, and nice, depressing ending. After playing Mother 3, I've grown to appreciate the more downer endings in fiction. :)

Author's Response: Most stories on this site have bad endings (everyone being crushed) but since the hot, evil giantess wins in the end, its not considered by many a bad ending. I, however make it a point in my writting to have the evil giantess, no matter how pretty she may be, lose in some way, shape or form.

Uh-oh! Looks like the nurse has decided to take him for herself! I wonder how Allen will make it to Liz...

I'm really liking the interaction between Lisa and the protagonist. Also liking how she read him like a book and is willing to play out his fantasies. Looking forward to see where you take this. :)

Author's Response:

That was what I was shooting for - she figuring out what it is he wants, instead of him having to be a huge slut about it all and coming right out and asking her for it.  When you think about it, most men won't even come close to coming right out and telling a woman what he wants.  He'll fantasiz about it, endlessly, and maybe down the road in the relationship there'll be enough comfort between them for him to to be able to reveal some of his secrets, but it is very seldom something that a man has the courage to reveal right away.

My belief in a lot of scenarios in many of the stories I've read in our genre are sort of dashed because the man outs himself right up front with his giantess.  It just isn't very realistic.  So, in my story, I wanted to have this realistic element in it.  He is giving off signals, she is a psychology majo, and the rest is just simple math.  I thought it worked pretty well, at any rate!

Thanks, Solar!  I've long been a fan of many of your stories, so the compliments coming from you are a real treat! :)

Well, I must say that this was a pretty interesting story. Quite cruel, but I have no doubt that if shrunken people were actually real, there would no doubt be people like the young man in this story who would use, abuse, and kill the tinies just for their own amusement.

Well, this was a pretty interesting and exciting read. I suppose I could call it karma that Friarre's hard work got undone so easily, and there was [almost] nothing she could do about it. Though I was kind of expecting a mutual death at the end, I guess that that wouldn't have been as satisfying as the giant winning in the end.

Now, we just have to hope that someone else doesn't hire him to attack the race that hired him in this story. ;)

Great story!

Well, I'm sure he'll have all the time in the world to reflect on his misdeed in the afterlife! XD

Wow! Such a cruel mistress, with no mercy to give at all!

Though I do like how he unwittingly stood up to the woman that took so much away from him. Too bad it didn't end well for him, but I guess that's to be expected. ;)

I really enjoyed this story, and I loved what a playfully-mischievous giant Maxim is. I would have liked to see him crush Celeste some more, but that's just me. Great story! :)

I've been meaning to read this story for a while now, but I finally got around to it and enjoyed it greatly. I also saw some ideas I've had for my own stories put into practice here, so that's a plus.

Nice work! :)