Penname: Fertility goddess loli lilith [Contact] Real name: Lady Goo Shoes
Member Since: December 21 2016
Membership status: Member
Bio:

These stories are extremely cruel and creepy, more bad than good comes of this fetish.


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Reviews by Fertility goddess loli lilith
Summary:

Another story done within 1 hour.

Stars the famous, "Bad Girl" from No More Heroes and is just a short thing about her killing a bunch of leather clad wimps.

Again, constructive criticism is appreciated more than you know.


Categories: Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1341 Read Count: 6212
[Report This] Published: August 01 2010 Updated: August 01 2010
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: January 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fast paced and brutal giantess domination with a good use of items and the location, though it could use a bit more description as to what she looks like.

Summary:

A boy turns himself and his girlfriend into gingerbread people as a Christmas gift. What could possibly go wrong?


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Object, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5214 Read Count: 18459
[Report This] Published: December 21 2016 Updated: December 21 2016
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: December 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Susie

I think the dialogue of the sisters should vary a bit more, and the 18 year old having sweets forbidden seems odd, as does all of them using their feet at one point to hide him. I don't think many people like to eat floor food. It's a bit cookie cuttery, 3 different paths to the same event is a cool idea though, and it's an interesting premise.

Reality Shift 1 by oxa749 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Marlin realizes that his dominance and dignity has become vulnerable as reality shifts, slowly shrinking him down in size, while his wife Aava gains size on him. As this change happens, the world around him shifts as if this change has never happened, and this was always the case, and only he realizes that a shift occured. He is constantly humiliated as reality slowly shifts to let his wife overpower hi and completely engulf him.

 

Slow shrinking story.


Categories: Giantess, Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3002 Read Count: 13342
[Report This] Published: December 26 2016 Updated: June 07 2017
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: December 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good slow shrinking start that eschews the need for an explanation and explores the characters relationship together and makes the husband unlikeable.



Author's Response:

I love actual feedback like this. Thank you! 

Summary: A lonely step mother punishes her step son for destroying a computer.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1506 Read Count: 4956
[Report This] Published: December 26 2016 Updated: December 26 2016
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: December 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A quik and interesting set up. The mom should embaress her son by playing video games better than he does impressing his friends while crushing him with each kill.

Summary:

A story of a boy named percy who has a good life with nothing out of the ordinary ...until today when a girls desires begin to become his new reality.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13094 Read Count: 46190
[Report This] Published: December 27 2016 Updated: November 19 2017
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: December 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Kidnapped

I like the dart rather than a ray, but the shrinking scene itself lacks good scale, but the quaking is a good detail. The trees are described as colossal but there's no mention of the doorknob being above him just farther away so I don't know what size he is during the capture scene. I think the first chapter should include a description of what the girl is wearing even if it's just a schoolgirl unifom they come in different colors. The missing persons report and cellphone are both great details, though the second chapter has alot more detail, inluding the brand of the bag and it's movements. Exciting so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review! i had previously wrote the first chapter with a lot more detail on the shrinking, i had objects that had been dropped by Percy that ended up surrounding him at his new size. however for whatever reason, when i posted the chapter it failed. so i lost all the text. currently i write on a different platform in order to fix this problem, but got a tad frustrated and lazy with the first chapter as a result! Hoping i improve in future chapters :)

David Shrunk by mv22 Rated: X [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

David is a high school junior that was just going through the motions, before a freak accident changes his entire world.


Categories: Mouth Play, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Legwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3575 Read Count: 10609
[Report This] Published: December 28 2016 Updated: December 30 2016
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: December 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Happening

What is Olivia wearing around her leg area, and what color are the flats? Shouldn't that be noticed before the nail color? Also here did his clothes go? I liked how quickly you got to the shrinking but it needs more details.



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I went back and added a couple minor details to provide more of a description as you suggested.

Summary:

A guy shrinks and becomes a Toy for a day...


Categories: Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 581 Read Count: 4947
[Report This] Published: November 21 2017 Updated: November 21 2017
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: November 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not alot of detail, good progression though. I hope you don't mind, I wrote the first half my own version.

Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed
Date: November 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wouldn't say my version is 11/10 as you did, the description isn't much better. I don't know what authors here write good physical descriptions or how to describe the curves of body parts and what they would look like at that size. I'm glad I could help you with writing some but I'm not having much fun doing writing these, so I think I will quit.