Reviewer: timeturner Signed
Date: September 27 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 – The Ring
Having reread the story I understand I misread it in my other review. I think this story is great and it's great to see someone using my universe for their writing. Love how you have established some historical lore as well, even if it strays slightly from what I had planned for the universe.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice words!
Consider it classic fanfiction, notihing is really canon here :)
I was introducing the lore for two reasons: a) to have the story set in Vienna and still have a good size difference, and b) I found the historical implications of the country=size idea very intriguing as it incentivizes nations and people to form cultural unions rather to seek independence.
At any rate, I'm looking forward to a new chapter from you to your original story! ;)