Penname: vgiv [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A teenaged girl with a tragic and haunted past begins to experience startling visions and starts manifesting unusual abilities feeling something dark stirring deep within her...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45958 Read Count: 277937
[Report This] Published: August 11 2015 Updated: June 20 2016
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: October 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty sure the doctor was that man Anna had shrunk. The one with cancer who helped her father. Possibly.

The story is far from the darkest I've seen, TomSpeedy. Other viewers may either have been busy, or me personally, have been dedicated to our own stories. I've been following this story but haven't gotten around to reviewing each chapter just yet.



Author's Response:

The doctor was the one who treated her when she was recovered from her father. Thanks for sharing your insight. I concur while darker for me this is far from some other stories here. Glad you are still enjoying

Summary:

After a raid destroys her home, a young mech pilot is captured by a fleet of Colossi. Unfortunately for her, they've plans beyond killing her.


Categories: Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Sci-Fi, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18108 Read Count: 34469
[Report This] Published: May 18 2016 Updated: December 12 2016
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Problem with Ejector Seats

This is fantastic, as always. I'm dying to see just how Elana deals with being a Colussus. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Problem with Ejector Seats

An endless array of nightmares could traumatize her as much as Krieg ever could. Is this purely psychological, on her personal fears, or caused by whatever is in the vat, I wonder.

Summary:

Originally titled 'The Demise of Daryl Dobbs', the story is about a man who is stringing three girls along at the same time. When they find out, all hell breaks loose.


Categories: Scat, Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15664 Read Count: 96871
[Report This] Published: May 21 2016 Updated: June 09 2016
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 24 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice chapter.

Forgive me if this seems out of place, but do you have plans on continuing Anna's Awakening? I loved where it was going.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the inquiry, yes I do have plans in the very near future to add to Anna’s Awakening plus I am also reworking Bang Your Head. I haven't abandoned the other stories though I sometimes get ahead of myself. 

Uptown Girl by Nostory Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Set after the events of The Escape Redux, Jessica Chen is no longer living on the island she called home for ten years but with her rich billionaire friend Jack who agreed to house the giantess for the time being. She doesn't expect it to be trouble but when you throw a two hundred foot giantess into the mix, trouble is the least to expect.

 

  As if things could not get any worse, Jessica must contend with Jack's girlfriend Caitlin, a woman who cannot stand the sight of Jessica and believes the latter has an ulterior motive. Which is false, Jessica wouldn't have anything up her sleeve? Or does she? 

Tune in to find out how our beloved sassy giantess gets out of this one!

Also, I had help from both vgiv who helped me with the outline and general idea of where the story and series as would go. Finally, a big thank you to versusterminus7 for providing a second opinion on the story itself!


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: The Escape
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44290 Read Count: 84125
[Report This] Published: June 04 2016 Updated: February 16 2018
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?

I'm with versusterminus7. I've seen so many versions of this, so many different trials, not to mention I saw the original draft months ago it feels. Those were excellent as usual from you, don't get me wrong, but this seemed... more refined? Kind of like the difference in sweetness between sugarcane and the refined powder. Equally sweet, but one is more pleasing to the palette.

I look forward to future chapters!

Seeing as how you've finally submitted this, I suppose it's about time for me to post something...



Author's Response:

Yeah you have, you saw version 1 when she was more of a dick, you've seen into the future of this series. Thanks for the help with this prologue and of course the fact checking about American things. Its partly because of you that this is more refined. 

You could post something related to Intersizables, that would help ;)

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?

It’s so nice to see an update to this story. I do love how well Jessica takes the mishap, and how absolutely, positively angry it makes Caitlin that Jack was trying to, or, was going to try and help Jessica out.

I imagine that the cameramen lucky enough to catch a pic at the perfect time are going to think very carefully about what they do with their prize. I for one would keep it safe and private. A little memento from a meeting with such a amazing giantess.

Eva has that motherly kind of affection for Jessica. It’s subtle, yes, but it’s there. She clearly sees Jessica as more than just something she can profit off of, although the revenue is undoubtedly a welcome side benefit of such a relationship. And if Jessica is getting some much needed work experience in then all the better!

Fantastic chapter as always, look forward to seeing what you intend next!

Author's Response:

If that cameraman showed that picture around ,he might find an angry giantess at his front door. Thanks for the review as always! 

Summary:

This story follows Allie as she enters the Tiny Adult Film industry. Along the way she is forced to make some diffcult moral decisions.

 

 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Giant, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Odor, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14489 Read Count: 116951
[Report This] Published: July 10 2016 Updated: August 02 2018
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A star is born

Very strong intro. I did not see the twist coming whatsoever, which is always a plus in my book.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the kind words!

Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146327 Read Count: 910512
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2017 Title: Chapter 30: A Candle in the Wind

The build up of your stories are easily the best parts of them. Lovin this.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I think there is definitely a correlation to the build up portion of my stories as it is my favorite part to write. That and innuendo laden dialogue between someone who knows something and someone who has no clue.

Summary:

One young mage's quest for revenge turns into her worst nightmare at the hands of a cruel knighterrant. 

Commission for Socalmosquito (i don't know his/her gtsworld handle)

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24143 Read Count: 45564
[Report This] Published: October 29 2016 Updated: April 17 2017
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: December 11 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Been looking for ideas to pitch for our Christmas dinner. Probably going to suggest this recipe. (I don't know how to cook). Do you have any dessert ideas? We've had cake mixed with ice cream and rum for two years. Just nothing with mint. Mint belongs in a colgate tube. 

Gywne sounds a lot like Gywn from DS1. That boss fight was hard, but I think Litea has it worse at the moment.



Author's Response: Hey man! Sorry for the late response. For holidays I would suggest a warm alcoholic drink (mulled wine/glögg, both super easy to make), and something sweet. There's this wonderful and horribly unhealthy thing called chockladrulltorta (chocolate roll cake) that I have a recipe of, email me and I'd be more than happy to give it to you! Thanks for reading! And while yes, Gwyne is like old Lord Gwyn, she might be more akin to his daughter, gwynevere :) although, both Gwyne and Gwyn could be overcome by using calculated, repetitive actions (roll, dodge, hit, roll, dodge, hit, FUCK ESTUS ESTUS *You Died* vs rest, pull, scooch, rest, pull, scooch) That game held no more hardship after Ornstein and Smough. I felt like a goddamn Greek hero after that fight.

Summary:

People are always most prideful before the fall.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5773 Read Count: 8701
[Report This] Published: December 11 2016 Updated: December 11 2016
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was incredibly satisfying. The overall aloofness of Rea made her far more entertaining than the more commonly seen sarcasm. Fantastic work as always. Glad your back.



Author's Response:

Yeah she was definitely the most fun aspect to write in the story. My thanks for the review!

Summary:

A tiny girl born from a flower sets out into the Old West to save her family farm. Her journeys bring her to the local dance hall and the towering ladies who work there. A fantasy western loosely inspired by Thumbelina.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34918 Read Count: 128953
[Report This] Published: January 02 2017 Updated: June 11 2017
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How have I not seen this masterpiece in progress before? This is easily the most adorable, light hearted story I've read on this site that simultaneously has a intriguing plot. Instant favorite, instant 10.

Summary:

With the Collector base blow to hell, Commander Shepard goes down to fix a damaged EDI. He soon finds out he's made a small mistake.

1/8/2017 I'll be adding tags and changing the rating as the story goes.


I no longer have an desire to add to this story. It is being marked as completed. Be warned it is not finished.


Categories: Adventure, Fantasy, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2276 Read Count: 16402
[Report This] Published: January 08 2017 Updated: April 23 2017
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2017 Title: Chapter 1: EDI in need of repairs

Always loved Mass Effect, I'm glad to see a story for it on this site. Keep up with it, I am eager to see the next chapter.

Summary:

A prince trades his freedom to become a giantess' pet in order to avoid an arranged marraige.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69086 Read Count: 341686
[Report This] Published: January 14 2017 Updated: December 21 2018
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to swallow a innocent doctor and his assistant for showing concern to a patient. Either the girl Eric was betrothed to was a monster, or his father is an even bigger monster than Tor.



Author's Response:

Tor sounds rather hypocritical, doesn't she? Just remember the other half of that quote. As for who the bigger monster is, keep reading to find out! Thank you for your review. I'm flattered you took the time.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Considering the leader of the guys sent to apprehend Eric had a brand on his face, but was still scared to the point he'd face an Elder, he must be Satan incarnate for Eric to become a pet rather than risk his father's wrath. That or the girl he was supposed to marry preferred to keep the toilet seat down or something unspeakably horrible like that.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to break another Elder's nose because that Elder was a tad childish. Then calls HIM petty. Tor really is a monster...

I'm really interested to learn more of the lore of this story. Not enough stories have a medieval/fantasy setting. Way too many high school stories. I'm guilty of that but still, keep writing please.



Author's Response: She isn't exactly the best representative of her race, is she? But I suppose all of us are guilty of that at one point or another. Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to kidnap a doctor from his family and belligerently demand his service... presumably with out the monetary compensation required to not only pay for the business he is losing by not being where he is supposed to be, the cost of repairing two crippled legs, and the trauma his children most likely will never recover from. 

Loved the chapter.

How tall is Idiot? Is he a huge draft horse that even Tor finds large? Or a pony since giant horses are already giant enough?

Oh! And I forgot.

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to desire to murder her own kin, even the one who clearly isn't at fault. I love this trend...



Author's Response:

She seems like such a contradiction, doesn't she? Just remember the other half of that statement. "but our anger is fierce when roused." Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It means quite a lot to me. <3

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"My people are peaceful." An Elder attempts to devour an entire camp of humans, tries to run, and fails miserably. And despite what would have been mass murder, aforementioned Elder is allowed to go loose.

Well this time is wasn't Tor. But I am hoping that every single one of my reviews begins the same way. 

Eric: "My dad only cares about himself! He wanted to arrange a marriage for me!"

Doctor: "I wanna arrange a marriage between you and this girl."

Eric: "I don't care about her personality, I'll IMMEDIATELY state how hot she is like a lecher!"

Doctor: "So why do you like arranged marriages?"

Eric: "Because I'd have no independence!"

Doctor: "... Arent you a slave?"

Eric: "I'm a pet! I have no independence, rights, or ability to stop my master from wanton acts of murder and violence."

Doctor: "..."



Author's Response: I always look forward to your reviews, just because they crack me up and summarize character thoughts/actions in a way that I may not see when looking at the story. Thanks for your thoughts!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: February 05 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's supposed to be "do you hate", sorry.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to reveal that the greatest possible threat to a couple of humans is not starvation, plague, or bandits, but instead Elders, who are "used" to eating humans, and refuses the prospect of defending them. Not only are Elders not peaceful, they are active, willing threats to human life.

I like how Eric's only issue with the arranged marriage is that he'd have no choice in the matter, but he himself is only concerned with the physical appearance of women, as well as is host to a personality so vile, a peasant whom he has helped rejects him.

Eric confuses me. He seems to help people or demand Tor help people but seems indifferent to their plight whilst he does so. He didn't do much for the Doctor or assistant she literally tortured to death for verbally offending her, he didn't do much beyond suggest Tor do something once when the prospect of the family dying is very real... i feel like thats intentional. It illustrates how Eric as a prince is blind to the importance of people's lives.



Author's Response: In Eric's defense, he was very "sheltered" and influenced by his father. That will come up in the next chapter or two. He tries, but just can't quite connect with problems that are not his own. Thank you so much for your review and continued support! It means a lot. :)

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to brutally execute several people, who in their defense had no choice in the matter as they would have been killed either way by Fletcher. Not that Tor cared to actually ask before committing another mass murder. 

People are okay with becoming pets? Stockholm syndrome is confusing. 

I wonder why eating peope seems to be Elders preferred method of execution. I mean, humans developed many methods of execution designed to bring about death quickly and painlessly. The guillotine, the shortened hangmans noose, the curved headman's ax. Mostly because it isn't in human nature to want to torture someone to death. If someone has to die, let it be quick. Elders seem to have a penchant for both mass slaughter and mass pain. A rather brutal race. 

But I cannot wait to see how Tor deals with her brothers. 



Author's Response:

Well, eating people is Tor's preferred method of execution. Not necessarily all Elders. And if you do some research on being put to death by boats, Fletcher makes Tor look saintly. Frankly, he makes her look like a saint period. His character will be explored in upcoming chapters. He's not a nice guy. At all.

As for Tor dealing with her brothers, that's coming soon! Thanks for reviewing! I always look forward to your thoughts on a chapter. :)