Penname: Intention [Contact] Real name: I Prefer Not to Tell
Member Since: January 21 2013
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A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 692126
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
Reviewer: Intention Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

It's been fun reading through this series. The first two were great starters, showing how Carly and Jack grew their relationship of hate and malice toward each other. The trials Jack was put through were very nice and helped further explain Carly's feelings toward her 'big' brother. It was then nice to see how she developed 5 years later, and how Jack developed too over those long years of entrapment. While the ending was not the one i would have chose, it was still a satisfying ending to such a great series. But apparently your making a spin off, so i'll keep my eye out for that.



Author's Response:

thanks for the rating/review; it's always fun to hear new thoughts since this was finished quite a while ago.  i'm glad you liked the progression of the characters.  it is still the end of the main series, in that it's the last one that's going to follow the "Carly plays with Jack" format of the others, but there will indeed be a 5th one that shows new kinds of challenges arising after the 3rd story

Real Love? by Defright Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

Luke is in his early twenties yet he has not had a girlfriend. One day though something happens to reveal his real love, but is it?


Categories: Giantess, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21370 Read Count: 116422
[Report This] Published: December 24 2012 Updated: March 15 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 22 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Relationship Issues

I have been following this story for some time now. I am in between on torture and gentle so don't expect me to be swooning over this. First things first.

Criticisms. You have a good plot line, but some parts are hard to understand due to choppy grammar, placement of words, and lack of conjunctions, commas, etc. It can feel awkward in places to read because it's hard to undertand what the characters are saying.

Compliments. You have a good story line going on here. A typical love story, so it seems, and then a deep betrayal by his love. Now his trust may never be restored and he may never love her again. It's a good story and I feel that you are really good at bringing out the gentle side of the giantess. I foresee some cruelness too so good job.

All in all, I think Defright, that you are an aspiring author and only time can tell if you are going to be a great one.

Petals by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A young woman copes with a break-up.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1064 Read Count: 5590
[Report This] Published: January 22 2013 Updated: January 22 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 22 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A great story Tinyone. I love how you manage to make each cruel story different. I see no other author compare to you with cruelty. 



Author's Response:

That's a very nice thing to say! I pride myself somewhat on my cruel creativity. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Bonaparte Session by edexdexx Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Leala Bonaparte takes it upon herself to teach a select group of students a lesson they will never forget . .or perhaps never live.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11955 Read Count: 60986
[Report This] Published: January 22 2013 Updated: April 07 2015
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 22 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Group Assembly

I like your 'Friend or Foe' stories, but this is a nice distraction from them. It's nice to get away from a long time story and just think up fun ideas in another story. I am looking forward to the session.

Subordinate by covetous Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Tyler explores his feelings and a new way of life with his boss, Nicole.


Categories: Butt, Feet, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16200 Read Count: 84736
[Report This] Published: January 23 2013 Updated: April 22 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I must say, being your first story this is very enticing. I myself am fond of slow character building before any actual shrinking occurs. I see tons of new stories uploaded a day, but this is the most promising out of all. I can't wait to see where you are taking this with the giantess scenario. I am definitely going to keep tabs on this story.



Author's Response:

Really makes it a lot easier for me to write when I know people are waiting for more.. thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You certainly know how to build up a relationship early on. Since you know how to do this, could you take a look at my story and leave an honest opinion on it? You don't have to but I would very much like feedback from another author so experienced at this.

The Decrement of Tom by wildcatman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 128]
Summary:

A slow shrinking story, about a man who has nothing left to lose.


Categories: Violent, Couples , Entrapment, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Gentle, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106905 Read Count: 337521
[Report This] Published: January 25 2013 Updated: August 31 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 The Powder

I must say, you're writing style is unique. It's a good story so far, with background buildup of the characters. I just noticed some random capitalization in places. Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you like it,  I don't edit my work very good, I just kinda free write as it comes off the top of my head.  So, yeah, I do get a Cap., here and there,... Oh, well,  I keep trying to improve....

A Mother's Shrinking Situation by TheDARGX Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

A mother gets shrunk and is at the mercy of her family.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3940 Read Count: 59656
[Report This] Published: January 25 2013 Updated: September 10 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The 2 Inch Tall Mom

Very well written for a first chapter. I'm not going to say for a first start because it apparently is on Writing.Com. Even though the background history is sparse, I don't think you need it at all for a story like this. I'm not usually the person who jumps into the 'meat' of the story, but you do it nicely. I await chapter 2.



Author's Response: I'm the writer from Writing.com so this is my story, just wanna share it with everybody on here. Chapter 2 is coming later tonight!

Reviewer: Intention Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The 2 Inch Tall Mom

This is my last review for this story since I almost never review a story more than once. I just wanted to say something I forgot to mention in my first review. I like the fact that each chapter is short. You don't need to explain a big, long concept in each chapter but instead, a short one where the reader gets all the satisfaction out of it.

It's what I call "Short, Sweet, and to the Point."

And you get a rating from me, also pretty rare.

Shrunk! by Superdude9 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Your long time friend is about to move several hundred miles away from you, and it looks as if you missed your chance to tie the knot with her. By a twist of fate, you shrink and fall into her purse, and are unawarely taken with her when she moves! Things only get worse when she finds you, doesn't recognize you, and has plans for your new life...

DISCLAIMER:

All publically recognized characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17137 Read Count: 53723
[Report This] Published: January 26 2013 Updated: January 29 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm going to give you my review. This is indeed a really good story for your first time. Mine wasn't nearly as good as this (I wrote it 4 years ago, give me credit.) I like the idea of her not recognizing him, and I also await the inevitable discovery of her when she sees it's him. My thing I have ti give you is that the 'beginner's element' is shown a lot in here, Not a bad thing, but it shows that you're using the standard fetish stuff. Mix it up! I like the back story you built up between the two though. That's what I look for in most stories. Keep it up.



Author's Response: Oh believe me...I definately plan on mixing it up...you'll see...(Evil laughter)

A Summer To Remember by emufossum13 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Tonya, Josh, and Tony were going seperate ways for the first time ever. Before going off to their different schools that fall, they wanted to make sure to have the most eventful summer ever. However, for Josh and Tony, that eventful summer was going to be much more than they bargained for.

 

--WARNING!! PLEASE READ!!--

This story contains material that is extremely inappropriate for kids. If you are a kid, don't read this story. Otherwise, it is a graphic story, so just to warn you.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4237 Read Count: 95987
[Report This] Published: January 31 2013 Updated: May 28 2013
Reviewer: Intention Signed
Date: January 31 2013 Title: Chapter 1: An Introduction

A satisfyingly simple start to a story. Since you have established a back story between the characters, I don't have much criticism for this. Keep the chapters short and to the pojnt like you have been and this will be a fine, enticing tale.

Expecting more to come.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.