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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: November 29 2012 Title: None

Y U No update moar often?

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 17 2012 Title: None

Start cranking out those chapters faster
We're attached to these character and feel disappointed when we have no clue what's happening or of the story died.
Still a good read

Author's Response: I know. The problem is, I'm not working on one story at a time. The story isn't dead though. You don't have to worry about that. I will complete it. It'll take a while. This will be a fairly long story.

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: October 31 2013 Title: None

You need to update more often, I really like your story but I'm beginning to lose investment in it 



Author's Response: Not sure what to say... Lately, I've been updating every week. This story is a work in progress. Can't stress that enough. I simply don't have the free time to post multiple chapters every week. My job pays the bills, not my hobbies. But I do the best I can. If you want to wait until the story is complete to finish reading it, I won't hold it against you. Fair warning though, you'll be waiting quite a while. This will be a very long story, probably longer than Friends With Benefits.

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: July 01 2013 Title: None

It's not dead right? You're just busy right? 



Author's Response: That is correct. It's not dead. I promise I'm still working on Double Trouble. There will be more, a LOT more. I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can, it won't be a month from now or anything like that, but probably more than a week.

Summary:

Jake is the youngest member of an all girl family, two devious older sisters and an overly protective mother. If he thought his home life was rough before, how bad will things get when he shrinks thanks to a freak accident and is at the mercy of all three of them, each with their own feelings towards him, and with their own method of coping with his new situation.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5293 Read Count: 113651
[Report This] Published: November 12 2012 Updated: April 20 2013
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: November 13 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Keep writing its looking good
Also gravitate torward some of those tags you used
Ex feet

Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 125948
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: December 03 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark

I do like the way you describe the way he's forced to worship his sisters feet, I like all the detail, especially the color and shape of her toes

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing!



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing!

Leverage by DuffyBear Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

When Tanya discovers a secret that could jeporadise her bosses career, she has a few things in mind to keep it between just the two of them.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13885 Read Count: 127425
[Report This] Published: February 17 2013 Updated: August 11 2013
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: February 25 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i thought he liked her feet!!!! I sure do

great story

dontstop



Author's Response:

Glad you like it, I will continue to write don't worry!

Summary:

Matt has moved by himself to the city for his last year of college, looking to have some fun. After settling in to his new apartment, a new neighbor moves in next door. His new neighbor is one that will give him some of the best experiences of his lifetime.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33299 Read Count: 223151
[Report This] Published: February 08 2015 Updated: October 28 2016
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: February 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Getting Settled

Looking forward to more

Summary:

This is a challenge from 789654ar. link:http://www.giantessworld.net/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=251

On the way to her boyfriend Katie finds a strange device. One that can change peoples sizes. She decides to use it on herself and her friends. At first keeping it a secret. Bbut eventually the truth outs with consequences both positive and... negative.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Gentle, Humiliation, Growing Woman, Giant, Legwear, Instant Size Change, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: Size Remote Story
Challenges: Size Remote Story
Challenges: Size Remote Story
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 729 Read Count: 12391
[Report This] Published: April 09 2015 Updated: April 09 2015
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: April 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Find

Feels rushed and hyperactive,  wherever it's going,  it's going in a hurry but can it keep it up the whole story? It will have to either be very short or fall flat.  Also intro is garbage and your charecters have no depth,  just because you choose to write sexual fantasies doesn't mean you shouldn't expand 

Summary:

Ben Cutler is in pursuit of his dream career and he is presented with an opportunity to work with one of the best lawyers in the field. However, her mentorship ends up being more than he was expecting and he finds himself wondering if it was such a great opportuity after all. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43476 Read Count: 121933
[Report This] Published: July 08 2016 Updated: October 26 2022
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: October 21 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Working in Her Shadow

This is always been such a tremendous story that I do hope it continues.



Author's Response:

Slwoly but surely, I'll make it happen lol

Summary:

A young man is introduced to the humiliating world of Chinese foot-slavery.


Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11278 Read Count: 70024
[Report This] Published: May 08 2017 Updated: May 20 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: May 19 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Back Home

You're doing a good job and is love to read more. Keep it up

Summary:

Kyle's life is seemingly perfect: a beautiful wife, a successful career, and good health. But when a mysterious illness causes him to shrink, life becomes a little less perfect. Can he overcome the illness or will he be forever changed?


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22393 Read Count: 137813
[Report This] Published: July 27 2017 Updated: October 18 2021
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: December 08 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Strange Awakening

Please don't give up and keep writing

Summary:

This story is about a game between Mikaela and Mark. Mikaela gives exercises and Mark have to cope with them. Each time Mark fails an exercise, Mikaela shrinks him. Story shows how illiteracy in girlish whims can lead to extremely large problems, a lot of physical work, tired muscles and miserable silent end. 


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9522 Read Count: 30028
[Report This] Published: July 31 2017 Updated: August 02 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Really interesting story and enjoyable, can't wait to find out what happens 

 

Please keep writing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will keep writing it definitely!

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Painting Mikaela's toenails

I like how she is becoming more and more of a cruel goddess. I also love how you juxtaposed his size with her feet and how he's doing more foot labor. 

Very enjoyable. 

Keep writing!!!

Forgetting Amy by Luidgi Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Amy and Catherine were born twins. However, Catherine wanted to get rid of her sister. And she did, thanks to a fortune teller. What follows is a story about confinement, and foot slavery. 

Enough said. 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6094 Read Count: 22985
[Report This] Published: August 07 2017 Updated: August 26 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 11 2017 Title: Forgetting Amy

This is great Keep writing, how much smaller can she get

Summary:

Alex Goldfield was just an average highschooler that lived a rather simple life. Then one day, his sister decides to pay him a visit and stay at his place for a while. There is just two problems with that.

1.He didn't know he had a sister and 2. she is a giant, god-like being

What follows are the interactions that he has with her as he tries to adapt to living with a super-powerful godess

 


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9849 Read Count: 22935
[Report This] Published: August 16 2017 Updated: August 16 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 17 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Arrival pt. 3

You gotta keep going dude

Summary:

An immediate sequel to "Godsis Universe: The Arrival."

Alex Goldfield and his god-like sisiter, Gloria, spend the first night together as reuinted brother and sister. However, it seems like some neighbors are not too pleased with the newcomers.


Categories: Body Part, Destruction, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2183 Read Count: 5048
[Report This] Published: August 17 2017 Updated: August 17 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Guests

Keep going, your writing isn't explicitly smut focused and is really interesting, keep writing. 

Summary:

An inventor looking to get ahead in life accidentally helps create a phenomenon which will rebalance the world of men and women, and in the process, turn him into the perfect slave for his terrifying and beautiful boss Ms. Hoshoku.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25622 Read Count: 151278
[Report This] Published: August 25 2017 Updated: October 04 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 28 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You need to write faster. It's well done



Author's Response:

Thanks. The new chapter is up now.

Summary:

A 16 year old boy shrinks himself after being grounded to sneak out of his house but things take an unexpected turn when his mother catches him and shares him with the family to punish.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25064 Read Count: 161901
[Report This] Published: September 07 2017 Updated: November 11 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: September 10 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray

Why do you write the brother as if he is another sister? You may benefit from making it just a F/m story which will also boost your audience.

 

Otherwise your writing is good and interesting



Author's Response:

???

Not really sure what you mean by that...

I know FM/m and FM/f stories aren't the most popular and that I am limiting my audience and who this appeals to but I wanted to write something different.  If you want to read a F/m story (not tring to sound like a d**k here), this isn't the story for you.  I'm sorry about that.  It will focus mostly on F/m but there still will be some FM/m going forward.

Thank you though for the compliments!

Summary:

A sequel to The First Night

After dealing with the pesky intruders, Gloria heads to bed for the night. When Alex awakens the next morning with Gloria sleeping like a rock, he discovers the real troubles and problems with living with a giantess. When Gloria wakes up, he learns the real dangers as well. 

After an unfortunate accident, Alex releases his frustration on Gloria and confronts her on her unrighteous behavior


Categories: Crush, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4515 Read Count: 5137
[Report This] Published: September 19 2017 Updated: September 19 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: September 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Rocky Foundation

I really like these and I wish you'd write them more often.

 

The other thing is a lot of this revolves around her feet, is he eventually going to find himself attracted to them?

 

Anyway keep up the good work!