Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: June 17 2014
Title: Chapter 4: The Games Begin
That breast scene was awesome, I don't think I have ever scene it explained that way, the pure torment that would actually be felt if someone were really subjected to that. Fantastic job!
Love the overall helplessness you have conveyed of Ash, to be regulated to a game piece, she's completey at their mercy. Can't wait to see what fun they have with her next!
Author's Response: I do like bringing new light to previously poorly-thought-out situations lol :P Benefit of being female and writing about females i guess, we know how much we 'move' lol!
Seems like i'm only writing this for about 3 or 4 people now, no-one else seems to enjoy it, but i guess they can go fuk themselves, i enjoy writing for my friends anyway ;)