Lexi AKA ShrinkGirl goes over her best friends house for a slumber party... but things turn dark when the lights go out...
Not really my cup of tea, but its not bad
Sam has to adjust to living with his girlfriend Rachel after he's been shrunk by accident.
I liked it, i thought it was good, it ended pretty abruptly for me but it wasnt bad. I honestly couldnt stand sam, i thought he was way too mean at times but ive also been in Rachel's shoes, so its a little different for me
Sadly enough I've had to have this conversation before what's somebody for real. Having been in Rachel's position myself , I say you pretty much nailed it on the head as far as what it's like. So thank you your the PTSD lol jk
Sorry about that! But I'm glad you think the story is realistic, that's what I was striving for.
good job, it's nice to see you're still on here. it's been a few years for me. anyway it's a good set up for the scenerio.
eh, it's fine, God willing things will get better soon. any way you might have the insecurities pop up every once in a while. especially with him being isolated when she is at work.
A scientist travels to the future in search of a better world, only to be faced with a big surprise.
Definitely a feminists wet dream lol
Definitely a feminists wet dream lol
Ben volunteers to be a test subject for his mother's shrinking formula, and is shrunk down to ever-smaller sizes over a couple of weeks.
Hey its a great start, it sounds really promising and light hearted.
I hope you'll enjoy it! It will be a very light-hearted and carefree story, about the kind of experience I'd like to have if I were shrunk.
As a giantess, Katy had consumed countless tinies in her lifetime. She never cared when they screamed and cried and begged for their lives, seeing them as no more than food. However that all changed when a certain little girl ended up on her plate
Its kinda cute, but kinda sick too. I know what its like to have a child taken away by some one, so i already dont like the "morther" person. It would make for a good lair revealed story. I
A woman chills out and destresses with the help of her very tiny girlfriend.
Its a really cute story
Your job is simple. Whenever a giantess steps through one of the portals scattered around the town, you are to go and distract the giantess until support arrives. When the support comes, you have to help in different ways, usually by giving advise.
There are a few grammar errors, but it could be a good start.
Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.
Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.
Note: There will be no deaths in this story.
This story is one of the reasons im still on this site its a true gem.
Author's Response:
Aaw, thank you so much!
Again, doing great so far, but i was a little confused with the size difference between them.
Thank you for the follow up review, very much appreciated! Ryan is 1.5 inches tall (3.8 cm) and Lena is 5 foot 7 inches tall (1.7 meters). I have a minifigure from a dnd campaign that I use to see how big Ryan would be compared to something.
Honestly great job. Its well written and doesnt feel forced. I like the chemistry between the two. I cant wait to read more.
Thank you very much, I'm trying to make a story that clicks properly, so I'm glad that seems to be working!
Being sick of covid, Republican 16 year old Lisa orders a box from Russia consisting of shrunken Democrats. Since a lot of businesses are closed amid the virus, she relies on this box to give her a fun day.
What the hell did I just read. Lmao
Prologue
We enter this story just after the events of the original Honey I Shrunk the Kids movie. The kids have been restored to their normal size and the Thompson and Salinski families have feasted on their giant turkey. But past the euphoria of the kids being saved from their plight of being shrunk down to the ¼ inch tall, trouble is brewing for Wayne. Diane is still unsatisfied with their marriage, and Wayne weighs the risk of the size changing technology falling into the wrong hands.
Not my usual story i go for, i am kind of concerned what your gonna do with nick, he's like ten. But the writing overall is good
I'm still waiting for the oat meal cream pie. Those things are good :(
See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.
Welcome back, any way its an intriguing start.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It will get better, trust me.
My first short story about me growing and destroying a building. New to this
Ok not bad for your first go, id definitely suggest breaking it up though into paragraphs. It makes it a lot easier to read. Also a little more depth in the story goes a long way.
18 year old boy named Victor, only a inch tall, is finally allowed to go to high school for senior years, despite the misgivings of his mother and sister. Will he survive for the whole year? Only time will tell.
Not a bad start. A few grammar mistakes, some world building will really help this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback.