Reviewer: WhydoIhave Signed
Date: December 21 2020
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hey Darien Fawkes, your story has finally made me decide to make an account on this website so I can leave a review. The world building in this story was great and its surprising since its on a giantess fanfiction website. The characters in this story acts like how they supposed to and are very realistic each having a sense of back story making it amazing to follow them throughout the story. The twist was something I almost expected, but didn't see until the chapter before. Anyways this is such a great story, with a well written plot, and amazing depth with the characters. I do hope you continue this story and make it into some sort of series. Maybe continue with Annallya's story what happens after, or writing what happened to someome? (The bandit group, the family Annallya ran into, or the titan Gaelin met in prison) Anyways hopefully you see this, and continue writing this story since this is one of the best stories on this website. Seriously this could be a book with how well written this story was.
Author's Response: First off, sorry for how long it's taken me to give a response. I haven't been on the site much these days. Second, that's one of the highest honors I've ever been give. Someone making an account just to give a review on one of my stories, so I can't thank you enough. I especially want to thank you for saying it could be a book, because that's all I've ever wanted to do is write one. I'm sorry to say that I can't make any promises on writing a sequel. I want to, but I can't commit to it unless I have the ideas necessary to make it better than this one. Realistically, compared to a lot of the other stories on this site I've read, I don't think it's all that special or grand or exciting, but it's without a doubt the best thing I've personally ever created. So I don't want to make any promises to anyone unless I have the material to make something at least as good as this.
But thank you for liking it so much. That really means a lot.