It's truly hard to believe this is your first story, this is amazing! One of the best reads ive had on this site. Its the flow that stands out. I like how you emphasize the size difference whilst showing Lynn's naivety, who at first doesn't fully realize how big of a threat she is for the mortals. It's also quite rare to see a Giga Giantess interact with civilians like it happens here, and you honestly nailed It! Showing the genuine and playful nature of Lynn and highlighting the dissonance between her innocent intentions and the inevitable destruction caused by her.

Also lovely how you go into detail with the destruction moments, which are one of the most important parts as they help considerably in picturing a Goddess this big. Hope to see more emphasis given to stuff like unaware feet crushes and general destruction, because you did It beautifully here.

Great stuff, i repeat, one of the best reads ive had here, i've been browsing this site for like 3 years, and ive created an account now just to make this review. Can't wait to read more from you!

Sorprendente! Sei grande! 

Lynn litterally means no harm, the problem is being miles tall she can't really interact or tell what her slightest movements are doing.  She's only starting to realize just what an overwhelming being she is and she doesn't have contast interaction to reinforce that learning.

Hoping that the realization that 'poor' worlds may make life small stirs in her some pity and further understanding.  Maybe (and likely with lots of trail and error and likely a couple million dead :-( ) she can help the 'little ones' make a better world.  She knows from her time with them that they are as smart as she is (hide and seek), it's just that they are so small as compared to her.

Also hope she becomes the world's sole goddess first by huge and glorious, then by by being huge and kind hearted and finally being giga, generous and godly.

Thank you for a great chapter!

Thank you for continuing this series; I was worried you wrote yourself into a corner and lost interest after my last review. Your user account is what loads whenever I check this website, so seeing an update from you is greatly appreciated.

I like this. It's very different from my style, but it reads very smoothly. I wonder what Lynn will do, given her new situation. You've good at being implicit when describing her beauty. You don't use a lot of words to describe her, but I can get a good picture of what she looks like. My only advice is that you give Lynn some kind of challenge, something she would have difficulty doing at her size. But overall, I really enjoyed this.

Best of luck,

Ace

Really liking this concept so far! Looking forward to seeing where this story goes. :)