Penname: bartek21 [Contact] Real name: tom
Member Since: January 19 2011
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Summary:

     Roy is supposed to be on vacation with his best friend Mimi for the summer but upon arriving at her house he is suddenly shrunk to about 3 inches, effectively ending their summer plans. Mimi has always been like an older sister to him. She swears to protect him until the disease wears off. Hiding him from Mimi's family and pretending to be on vacation to fool Roy's parent's. The two try and enjoy the summer together.

     However this proves to be more difficult than they thought once Mimi decides she wants to experiment with Roy in his new miniature form. She has always had a crush on Roy and now he couldn't really say no to any of her curiosities in his new shrunken form.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Breasts, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74878 Read Count: 120049
[Report This] Published: July 23 2018 Updated: January 25 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: July 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up

please, more!
it starts to get interesting
 

 

I'm sorry, my english is bad



Author's Response:

     Thank you! I'll do my best!

 

Also don't worry about it. 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: July 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up

Please more.
great story.
I like how it is described in detail.
roy adventures will  non fatal ?
I like non fatal.

sorry my English is poor.



Author's Response:

     No problem at all Bartek21! There is more story on the way, don't you worry!

Also thank you! I don't like spoiling things so I can't answer questions like that. But I hope you continue to come along for the ride. 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 27 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Small Summer Slip Up

WOW! Great story looking forward to more chapters.
WELCOME BACK. :)
I'm sorry, my English is bad:(



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's good to be back. More chapters will be coming soon, dont you worry.

As well as maybe a new series soon. Still soft vore, of course.

Also dont worry about it, the message you sent was perfectly understandable. : )

Summary:

You end up becoming part of your girlfriend's new toy without her knowing. What happens next isn't up to you.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Object, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7302 Read Count: 74472
[Report This] Published: October 28 2018 Updated: November 03 2018
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: October 29 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Your Girlfriend's Thick New Toy

Please more!
interesting story!



Author's Response:

Just added chapter 2 and more is on the way!

Summary:

A man and teenage girl gain the abilities of their video game personas!


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18905 Read Count: 19060
[Report This] Published: November 16 2018 Updated: December 18 2019
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 17 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Origins

interesting story!
Please more!



Author's Response: Thanks! I have two more stories I’ve written the first chapter for, “Daunting Damsels” and “Aryan Thunder”

Summary:

What would you do if you were stranded in a boarding house with not one, but THREE giantesses?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Lur saga - LoTG
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43074 Read Count: 166676
[Report This] Published: January 05 2019 Updated: May 25 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 07 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Please more

Interesting story!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 12 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Going down II

Great story. Please continue.
I like the description very much. It is amazingly accurate.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Flying With Dad by 5952 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: A young woman smuggles her father onto a plane.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8358 Read Count: 68664
[Report This] Published: May 09 2019 Updated: May 13 2019
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Making Plans

please, more
    I like the detailed description of the story

I'm sorry, my english is bad



Author's Response: There is more to come, thank you for your review!

Summary:

Chemicals are dangerous stuff. But not if you are like Kevin, and you spend every waking hour working with them in the lab, memorizing them all like the back of your hand. Or so he thought until one day he experiments with a new formula he found online and things take a turn for the worse...


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6961 Read Count: 3943
[Report This] Published: November 26 2019 Updated: November 26 2019
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 27 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)
interesting story!
please continue !
I Like!
I'm sorry, my english is bad :(

Summary:

Like any good Master, Fujimaru Ritsuka takes care of his Servants and tries to do what's best for them, even if some of the actions he takes in that pursuit can be... ill-advised.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Fate Timeline #577,394,168
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18713 Read Count: 10733
[Report This] Published: December 12 2019 Updated: December 12 2019
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW !!

Great story!
Please more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.

I am seriously considering writing more stories like this, but this one took me a while to complete lol

Summary:

Daniel and his friends make a deal with their genious friend Rachel.

If they helped her to make some test experiments with her new invention, they can go with her on a trip to the other side of the world...

It's gonna be easy and nothing out of the ordinary right? right?!

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13503 Read Count: 46379
[Report This] Published: December 30 2019 Updated: January 21 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

wow!
interesting story!
please continue !



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I will!

Summary:

When Vincent goes to a small party for his birthday and gets blackout drunk, he awakens to find that his best friend's older sister, Julia, may have a little crush on him.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Legwear, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6560 Read Count: 6320
[Report This] Published: January 15 2020 Updated: January 15 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting story
please continue
please more



Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter 2 is almost done so expect it in a day or two!

Roommate Wanted by 5952 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Paying rent in college can be hard, but Kelly aims to change that. Follow her on her quest to find a new roommate.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8545 Read Count: 44170
[Report This] Published: March 27 2020 Updated: April 11 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

interesting story.
please more.



Author's Response: There's still a few chapters left, thank you for reading!

The Descent by Tidal Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Detailed description of anatomy, digestion, fear and domination. A descent into the human body, with or without escape, how deep will you go until the end? 

You slip into the lyrical identity (the "I"-Person) named Sam. All you wanted was a nice day with a nice woman you came very close to. The idea of leaving your comfort zone into your first diving adventure turns out even more unusual as an sudden flash strikes you. To make matters worse the woman you're dating plays an obscure role you do not understand. Does she help you?                          As always, enjoy reading alone or in company, Cheers.


Major Categories:  Vore, Giantess, Aware, Couples, Mouth Play, Endo, Humiliation, Unwilling, Digestion, Stomach, Intestine, Violent

Minor Categories: Watersports (indirectly), near Crush


**It pays off to read the Chapters again as I already added more details since the publishment. These updates were definitly necessary to pull out the best of the moments. Some detail is also added to follow the story better.


UPCOMING UPADTES ... I finished writing the story! I am currently in a overreading phase and add more details.

Additional and revised content in Old Chapters including: Deeper Charakters, Jana has now the name Rona, Background hints to the anomaly,

+ 5 New Chapters! roughly 20.000 new words!


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

In addition to that, Edgar Allan Poe was a major inspiration and some of his phrases and lines from The Pit and the Pendulum were taken, edited or built in, especially from the Chapter IX.


LAST MAJOR UPDATE 23rd OF JUNE


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples, Crush, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17625 Read Count: 32661
[Report This] Published: May 01 2020 Updated: June 22 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 12 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Anomaly

great story.
please continue.
I like the details in the story.
I'm sorry, my english is bad.



Author's Response:

thank you! move on reading, this is the best opportunity for you to learn more words and the language in general.
It pays off to read the chapters again as the story is not complete, yet, I will update it and add more of your loved details :*

Summary: Past Featured Story

(Paramouth's First Annual "Nommies" Nominee for Best Story: runner up!)

A Hungry vampire and a humble borrower seem like an unlikely pair of friends, but when times are tough and they're both down on their luck, maybe they can find what they need in each other. 

Edit: 8/12/2021 Back with a MASSIVE chapter. Obligatory "a bit late for 8/8." Hope you all enjoy! (Also, wow! almost a year since I began this! That's wild!) 

The tags listed are all included in the story so far. I'll add more tags as I go.

For the record, the violent, tag does not apply to how the main characters interact, but there is violence in the story. The primary G/t relationships in this story are all gentle/non-fatal.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90622 Read Count: 84621
[Report This] Published: August 18 2020 Updated: August 12 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 13 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming

WOW! I really like this chapter. I am very curious what will happen next.
I missed your writing a lot.
Hehe, I guess I'm addicted to this story. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Bartek. As always, I appreciate your enthusiastic feedback both her and on other platforms. <3

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 30 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A Brief Review

Welcome back.I'm glad you're writing again.

I liked this chapter very much.

Please continue this amazing story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bartek! Good to be back! And a welcome back to you as well! It's always a pleasure getting feedback from you. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm already working on the next one slowly but surely!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 09 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

amazing chapters. I am a little jealous of leo because of "getting to know vela very closely :)".
  hehe leo and vela are Jackie's parents;)?
I can't wait for the next chapters. more please.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I'm quite jealous of Leo, too! I'm letting him live out a lot of my favorite fantasies. He's a lucky guy! 

And Leo and Jackie are more like... Jackie's support groups. Lol.

and it's gonna take me a bit on the next chapter. I want it to be good. Thank you for all of your consistent reviews! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 02 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

I am more and more curious what will happen next.
I like the idea of adding a werewolf to the vela and leo adventures.
please continue.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that I've still managed to maintain your interest and curiosity this long! And I thought that the story would benefit from the addition of another lonely straggler/outcast being tossed into the mix. It allows for different dynamics. I'm already working on the next chapter! Thanks for all of your feedback!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 07 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

Incredible chapter. Great idea. I liked it very much. Please continue. I look forward to continuing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And the fun isn't over yet, you won't have to wait long! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

These are amazing chapters. Please continue writing. I like the detailed description.
I can imagine it all what you write.
just WOW!

 My english improve thanks to you? :) ;)



Author's Response:

This review made me smile and then actually laugh out loud. Thank you so much for your continued attention and feedback! And I just love the idea that my pastime is potentially serving you as both a source of entertainment and English practice. 

I'll keep trying to keep my writing as enjoyable and descriptive for you as I have been! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!