Reviewer: Jay Signed
Date: May 25 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Visitor
I think you're a great artist of words and ideas. That said, the thematic theme of this story isn't my cup of tea. It's well written, to be sure, but deals with an entirely different aspect of the GTS fetish than what we're used to seeing from you,
Judging from your previous two stories (really one long, unfinished oddessey, if you will). I'm wondering if this is a diversion from you posting your previous story's conclusion, or an experiement to see if your "fans" truly enjoy you, the author, or just the themes and subject matter previously written about? I guess I'm must pointing out the obvious on this one.
Given that your previous story is entirely, completely, catastrophically, finished, yet you "wait" to post the conclusion, makes me ponder the real purpose behind starting an entirely new story before the posting of a previous story's conclusion (a conclusion that's said to be already finished and done with). Then again, perhaps I'd just like to see the final chapter of your other story! I'd be more understanding if the other story wasn't entirely finished, in need of only being posted. If it wasn't already done, that'd be a different story.
Author's Response: there's no need to accuse me of testing my "fans" as you say. there's zero reason i should have to restrict myself to one genre if i enjoy them both in different ways, and other people enjoy them in different ways as well. see my above response to hear what's up with the story