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Bio:
You would think your mother would trie to save you..
But she has other plans with you..
Categories: Giantess, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1002 Read Count: 32752
Date: June 21 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It was very short, you just kept going 'then this happened'.
There wasn't nearly enough description
Overall i still enjoyed it though, just think it could've been much better.
While at college Christine found some experimental formulas, when her visits her after Christine gets out of college she have a few surprises for her.
Categories: Giantess, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3325 Read Count: 14885
Date: June 21 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I agree with v00d002001, Kim should have resisted the whole time.
Other than that, awesome story
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3035 Read Count: 21096
Date: June 16 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
After such a build up, i was expecting more description of Barry in Mandy's mothers stomach. Instead of just blacking out almost straight away.
Everything else was very good though
Anna goes searching for a prey --- and finds one.
Categories: Giantess, Butt, Insertion, Violent, Vore, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3092 Read Count: 28583
Date: December 20 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Prey
The plot is all well and good
and everything that happens is written clearly
overall very good
but some parts of this seems more like a report than a story
i think you need to ease up on the thesaurus :)
Author's Response: Well, Sil (excuse abreviation), I must thank you for your comment. I am rather puzzled how you came across this particular yarn. Was it the test piece or the story proper? Now why should I ease up on the thesaurus...is it the wording? I'd love to know because I do not use the thesaurus.
Date: December 21 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Prey
The thesaurus thing was just an expression
i meant that i think you're being to formal,
and you're using a lot of big words i don't think are necessary.
Might just be me, but i think it just needs to be a bit simpler
(Sil is fine by the way)
Author's Response: Well, Sil, it's because I am a formal type. That's due to my job I was going to say 'profession' but I shall use the simpler word as you suggest. Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed my yarns. I do not write much nowadays but I do still imagine exciting scenes and have the notion of writing them for this site. However, as my description says: I much prefer such scenes with fully-grown subjects which are more realistic. What say you, my friend?
Date: December 21 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Prey
I say fair enough
Age of shrinker/captor, etc - around 16-40
Age of shrinkee - around 15-20
Author's Response: Ah, yes, Sil; perfect ages. I still dream of being diminished to 4" plus and being used and abused - especially by a 14 plus girl. It's a pity I cannot send you some of my yarns that are not on site. I'm sure you'd like them. Did I not send you my email address?
Categories: Violent, Giantess, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 12857
Date: October 29 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
One thing bothers me about this. He shrinks when he's scared, but the smaller he gets the scarier everything would be.
So once he starts shrinking, he'd wouldn't stop until he died.
Still enjoyed it though
Author's Response:
I think there's a size cap on him. Thanks
Categories: Entrapment, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1851 Read Count: 9126
Date: December 23 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: There are No Monsters
I didn't really like that type of vore
Although the way it was written was very poetic and more than made up for it
Author's Response: Everyone to their own, Sil. One cannot please everyone all the time. As you would say yourself, I simply enjoy writing and sharing my yarns with others.
Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Goddess Sarah
Challenges: Goddess Sarah
Challenges: Goddess Sarah
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14724 Read Count: 68756
Date: October 12 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This story was amazing.
Everything that happened was really well written, and very detailed.
I wouldnt change one thing about this, its perfect.
Categories: Adult 30-39, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 734 Read Count: 11641
Date: November 27 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Plot
Pretty good for how simple it is
Wouldn't have minded more description about sliding down her throat, or maybe about being in her stomach.
Still enjoyed it though
Author's Response:
I decided to stop at the stomach because I'd rather not go into detail about the rest of the digestive process. I guess that's because of my taste in vore, y'know.
Thanks for reviewing :)
This story was written simply for my own pleasure but I thought I may as well share it with you lot! It is a gentle story with no forced actions, everything is consensual.
I apologise if it isn't everyones (or anyones!) cup of tea, but as I say, it's just my own story of my own personal fantasy.
Categories: Butt, Gentle, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4812 Read Count: 52692
Date: November 27 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part One - Introduction
I would've him to not want it as much as he did, or maybe regret it a bit
but i still enjoyed it
very good
Categories: Adult 30-39, Butt, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21045 Read Count: 178172
Date: September 09 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Daydreaming
This is missing an 'inside the stomach' paragraph.
Also i think Brianna should've had a bigger role after he'd shrunk
Other than that, this story was spectacular.
I am in love with that teacher, i really want to be her student.
There's always a little romantic tension between a boy and a girl who are only friends, but this girl takes her desire to be with her friend a little too far.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1388 Read Count: 9047
Date: September 03 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I disagree with the other commenters, not much longer and you would've just been repeating yourself.
Two things i would change though.
1. she was a bit casual about the whole thing. She's killing her best friend, i think she'd be a bit more emotional.
2. He accepted his fate a bit too quickly for me
A young woman recalls the memory of her first victim.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5299 Read Count: 9192
Date: July 15 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
One thing i would change about this is that she pulled Bobby's arms off before putting him inside her
but i loved how it was written as if she was talking to me, with things like 'sorry i'm getting off track' etc
A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 692127
Date: May 25 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
There are a few things about this I didn't like.
Somethimes the description can be a bit too detailed, It was dragging on a bit. (I had to skip quite a few paragraphs in quite a few chapters)
I think five years was a bit too big a gap, I think anyone would'vr given up long before that.
I would've loved a bit of insertion (not including Sophie, that wasn't described enough for me) , especially by Jenny and especially in her ass.
All in all though, this was a top class story and I'd love to see more of it.
Author's Response:
glad you liked it. in response to the critiques:
I get what you mean about the description, that just happens to be one of my favorite parts of stories, so I use a lot of it.
He did kind of give up; it wasn't until about midway through the story where he decides to fight back again, but regardless I just wanted Carly to be an adult so readers were less uncomfortable.
I'm not really a big fan of insertion and don't think I could write it very well, so that's why there was just sort of a hint of it in there.
James is tiny, Laura is his caretaker and friend. They make a deal and James ends up getting more than he bargained for.
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2806 Read Count: 11529
Date: September 03 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Shoot
I hope you made a mistake when you put yes for completed
I'd like to see more of this
and the ending seemed a bit rushed