Reviewer: GTStation Signed
Date: January 29 2023
Title: Chapter 24: Bonding
You are finally back, that's so cool, this story is one of my favorites!
Overall really cool chapter and a great way to return, I wonder what retconning the deaths of Carmen and Sophia will do for the story, but I'm interested.
Natalie is as delightfully devilish as ever, with way too much luck on her side, everything always goes right for her, but that's okay cause she's cool.
I think Aubreigh is way too far gone now, she saw a person being murdered in cold blood entirely because of her mother and got wet, no matter how much she tries to deny it, she's just like her mother.
The chapter was fun, and the giantesses scenes were great, especially the pedicure, Andrew in Aubreigh flip flops, and the worker getting killed by Brittney, I loved those.
The story is engaging as ever, I really want to see what's next, and I hope both Natalie and Aubreigh get the death penalty they so obviously deserve :) (even though this story seems to be heading to a much darker and gloomier ending, but I'm still believing)
Author's Response: Thanks man. As for the death retcon, when I reread it, it just seemed too sudden and out of the blue. I want to slowly build up to any deaths that there might be. Maybe they will die in the future, or not. I don't know yet. But for now, they will be involved in the shenanigans moving forward.
I know, things are way too easy for Natalie. I love it though. It's almost funny to me to write it that way.
I agree that Aubreigh is evil, but doesn't realize it yet. However, she is still different from her mom because Natalie does it for power and fun, she doesn't get turned on by it like Aubreigh does. (Unless, of course, you count the insertion scenes.)
I still don't know what will happen to Aubreigh and Natalie, honestly. I don't even want to think about the ending yet. I will dislike either way I go. I want them to get what they deserve, while at the same time, wanting them to win. So I won't even be able to please myself with whatever ending I write. So, for now, I'm just going to play around in the story with various situation and scenarios that have popped into my head during my hiatus.
I'm glad you like the story! Thanks for your comment!