Reviewer: kongoboy Signed
Date: July 12 2016
Title: Chapter 1: My Tiny Classmate
Hey Adeline, Another great story! really enjoyed the realistic elements to this one, and the out of no where surpise that Dave got swallowed up by an unaware Becca! I was wondering do you think you could expand on this one, By having an alternate ending, in where Becca actually does cough him up and then Days later Adie begins fantasizing about what it was like for Becca to have a living breathing boy inside her stomach, and decides she wants to find out herself, and then Dave gets swallowed for good this time?
Author's Response: That is an interesting twist. Part of the story could be Dave telling the girls what it was like being swallowed alive. I will definately conside that. I don't think Adie would just willingly swallow Dave for the fun of it but she just might if he got her angry. In the heat of the moment we sometimes do things we regret later.