This was pretty good! Not too complicated or bogged down with unnecessary things. Professor was cute. I appreciate the narrator was left as unidentified as possible (so in my brain she was a woman and this story is gay as hell~)

About the only thing I can suggest is that you got about 4/5ths the way toward being an x-rated story, so you might as well have gone all the way and made it fully lewd. As aroused as she was getting. Professor might as well just have pleasured herself at the end. 

Excellent ending.

I did forget to leave a review, whups!

Also: Not on that discord. I suspect I would be a total grouch there.

Author's Response:

^^

Impressive stuff. I've been reading this off and on over the past few weeks, and it rarely disappoints. 

There's too many parts to praise. I like how the relationships evolve. I like that all the girls seem to like being huge. Eve and Lilith are fun in a genre where the kinda-omnis tend to be boring. Honestly, I like that Lilith isn't piss-evil for the sake of it, just...not caring about others as much as she ought to. She doesn't feel irredeemable, however much she ought to be.

About the only complaint I can give is the abundance of rooms that grow. It's not really giantess sex when the surroundings are also gigantic, you know? Makes sense in an in-world narrative way, but still takes some impact from the scene.

All in all, excellent work.

Oh look, Slogro did it again.

Excellent work, as always.

Silly slowgro, that's not a cult. It's a secret society! What you got going on there is a collection of like-minded individuals working toward a goal in the shadows.

I suppose you could call it a coven if you wanna play up the witchy stuff.

Also, very nice.Your girlfriend does a good set up.

Not bad, not bad at all. 

Kate's a surprisingly fun personality. I appreciate she is making some effort to minimize carnage, and direct it toward the more deserving.

Honestly, though, I'd say let her get turned on, and let her indulge in it. She deserves a big climax. 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.
To be honest, we're only slightly more than halfway through the story, so any "big climax" will be arriving a little later. I do have one in mind.
That said, I'm not sure that a smutty, erotic rampage is really appropriate for the character or story. Kate's definitely getting off on her power, but she's also a professional who cares about outward appearances.
However, as time goes on, she does seem to be getting less and less concerned about the opinions of the little people...
For what it's worth, I do have a very smutty story that I'm hoping to finish and post on the weekend, so stay tuned. 

This was very cute. 

Kind of disappointed by the return to normalcy ending, but it's not a bad one come to how awful a lot of them get. I might just be a thousand times bitten twice shy there. 

(Also Wayne should have absolutely been a woman, too. Would've made it a million times better)

Very good. 

I kinda wonder if Abigail Prime will find a way to grow herself? But in the meantime, proceed. And maybe let's see some more of the clones reveling in their 'newfound' bigness?

Adequate excuse for the thing to still be powered~

I do sort of like the way they're all kinda bullying largest Abigail.I do think she needs some time to revel in her bigness, though.