Penname: Darkflame [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: February 29 2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I prefer the loving, playful and more gentle giantess to the evil sadistic ones.
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Buffy by Mr_G Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Buffy is a newly minted GTS-goddess. Margret and friends try to make her into an evil GTS-goddess. But Buffy wants to be  a gentle goddess.
Categories: Violent, Giantess, Gentle, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4288 Read Count: 8636
[Report This] Published: March 31 2008 Updated: March 31 2008
Reviewer: Darkflame Signed
Date: April 01 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice read but you may want to paragraph the writing. its just that it's to crowded into one massie slab. Also add spacing between the full stop and the next sentence. I missed the meaning of some sentences because i didn't spot the end.

Summary:

Knights face the very monster they created


Categories: Adventure, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The Gytha Saga
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2360 Read Count: 6453
[Report This] Published: May 26 2008 Updated: May 26 2008
Reviewer: Darkflame Signed starhalf-star
Date: May 27 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice read but that was only after I unjumbled the mess and deciphered the whole thing by putting it in a word document and turning the body into PARAGRAPHS! Other than the layout the story was done well. Just try and use paragraphing next time.

Summary: A light-hearted story about a goddess who comes to Earth to meet the man she befriended and instead meets his great-grandson.
Categories: Giantess, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1105 Read Count: 13594
[Report This] Published: September 14 2008 Updated: October 13 2008
Reviewer: Darkflame Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Szenario.

Nice start, I look forward to seeing more.The president choking on a biscuit is pretty funny.



Author's Response:

I'm glad to read that - I was fearing this prelude would make readers frown =D It's pretty awkward when you think that some readers might be jerking off to the light-hearted story you are going to write, so this is something of an "Achtung - you won't get aroused from this story!" xD Joking apart, I'll try my best to keep it up - cheers!