Wait, is Furio dead!? Please don't let it be so. Please let it be part of some ruse, and not have him get killed offscreen like this. It's a testament to how long this story has been going on (for years) that you get attached to some of the characters that have been there for years, and while it becomes a little hard to keep track of some of the newer characters, and the characters that come and go, Furio has been there since nearly the beginning. The weird dynamic between the free spirited giant girls and the serious and resourceful old wizard is a recurring highlight of the story. He's the closest thing the girls (or at least Janna) have to a friend, to the point that others amusingly assume that he controls them, and he's the only "tiny" that they respected enough to confide their true origins to. His point of view confusion about earth technology was an amusing highlight. His straight man role and interesting point of view perspective to Janna and Laura's immaturity is a lot of fun, and his knowledge and intelligence make the character a good conduit through which to impart information to the reader to. He's got the interesting position of being the one "tiny" that the girls (or at least Janna) respect enough to really care about.

That's not to say that he's a helpless pet. He seems to be the kind of guy whose knowledge, abilities, and potential, the empire overlooked, until he used his resourcefulness to hand one of the girls their first defeat. And to make it more impressive, once the spell wore off, and Janna realised what happened, she didn't seek revenge, but instead came to respect him. And in Chapter 26 when the girls were rendered helpless by the demon worshipper it was "little" Furio who had to rescue them, and defeat the guy who even they couldn't handle, with a technique that frightened even them, in what had to be the most crowning moment of awesome for a character who isn't Janna or Laura in the story thus far.

A lot of characters have been killed off in this story. I just hope that this interesting, and longtime, stalwart character can get a reprieve and continue to defy the odds.

Thanks for responding and clearing up some of the questions I had.

It seems that since the women in the new society don't poop, and as you pointed out, their fresh pee encourages plant growth, and revitalizes men. It seems there is no need for women's toilets in the new society. Women would probably just pee freely outdoors without shame, and be encouraged to do so. In the country it could be an essential part of farming and forest revitalization, and in the towns and cities it could be a way of keeping the parks and lawns fresh and green. Cities would look much more lush and green. Lower body fashion would probably be just skirts with no underwear to make casual public female urination easier. And due to the revitalizing effect of fresh female urine, men might get peed on daily, start the day off not with a shower from a shower head, but one from a spread overhead vulva to get over the morning soreness and grogginess. Some buildings might even have dedicated peeing ladies in what's left of the bathroom to provide revitalization just in case, and they have to go anyway. This would really elevate the profile of the vulva in society. From being taboo, it's the one thing you can never show in most media, to being unavoidable. After all, it's now responsible for the greenness of the land, therapeutic effects on men, and pussies constantly peeing casually and openly outside.

If women now have digestive systems so powerful they can process most solids into liquids, this could still have some dark implications. You said it's illegal for women to swallow men but I'm sure some have still done it anyway for various reasons. It would be an almost perfect crime. The victim is presumably so thoroughly digested, that their liquid essence is peed onto the vegetation which rapidly absorbs it, leaving behind no body or trace. One other drawback to the lack of an anus, is that the only way for gases from the digestive process to escape would be through the mouth, meaning that the women would presumably be belching rather frequently to make up for the lack of ability to fart.

While you answered most of my questions, the one still left unanswered is how exactly does the new female digestive system work? My guess would be a larger stomach, with stronger acids, and stronger lining, which leads to intestines which act like a closed racetrack, passing food around until it's liquefied enough to pass through the kidneys, bladder, then urethra. I would still like to hear your explanation though.

Maybe include through the story an explanation of how everything works in the new digestive tract, through a medical scenario. Say a chapter where a medical student has his professor show him, and by extension the reader, how the new female digestive tract works by having the 2 men put on protective medical diving suits, and get swallowed along with food by a lovely lady. Maybe, Heather volunteering for the hospital for a little side pay. Since men are so small, surgeons would probably carry out some surgeries manually from within, digestive, gynecological, without needing a scalpel, so a visual field trip into the digestive tract would probably be necessary for med students, and could clear up some anatomical mysteries in the story through a plot scenario. Sorry, but now I got a "magic school bus" style scenario stuck in my head, showing the reader about how anatomy works in this world.

Author's Response:

Such a great response! Thank you for your interest!

"The only thing I know about it is that whatever goes in only comes out brown and fowl smelling so I bet he is really going to suffer in there just like he should after all that he has done to me."

Nice realistic touch remembering that this is a country girl from the 1600's so she doesn't really know how the digestive system works, only knowing the basics of in and out. She seems mean enough that she will enjoy pushing out the brown and smelly partially digested remains of her victims. She would probably enjoy that kind of power of being able to swallow alive (dominate) and poop out (humilate) anyone who pisses her off too much. But she should be wary not to over play her hand since an army from this time can still kill her. Gunpowder and Canons etc. Maybe she'll try to make some allies and prove herself useful like in Gulliver's travels.

Author's Response:

I have been trying my best to stay within the theme of the 1600's so it's good to hear I made some solid realistic touches.

I hope this story keeps going on for a long time. I like that a relatively primitive setting was chosen. If a girl became 200 feet tall in the present, she would very quickly be surrounded by the military and chaperoned off to a guarded location for study, and to be taken care for. Since it's the 1600's she is more invulnerable, but has to fend more for herself and become more wild. Justine is so big and powerful compared to the rest of humanity that even a simple bodily act like her taking a pee is like a mini apocalypse that results in the creation of a "large pond" from the perspective of a regular sized person. Even little things like that are apocalyptic to regular sized people. There's also the logistical needs of her huge body. On a daily basis, she knocks down hundreds of trees, has to drink huge quantities of the water supply, eat a good chunk of a herd of cattle, pee several times, and eventually empty her titanic bowels. She could in a short amount of time, drink away the local water supply, decimate the farming economy, and turn the local woods into a nearly treeless swamp. I like the attention paid to the logisitcs of her presence, and the slowly building dilemma it causes both for her and the rest of the people. It adds realism to the story. And since people spent more time outdoors back then for everyday needs and recreation (fishing, hunting, foraging) and she's 200 feet tall she's going to inevitably have people encounter her wherever she goes, even in the woods. Her presence will get harder and harder to ignore, and with 4 people in her digestive tract, Brad in her stomach, and the first 3 she swallowed alive in her colon, it's only a matter of time before she has to expel them out, and their half digested bodies are discovered. Confirming the population's worst fears about the mysterious giantess. She eats people alive and whole!

Justine seems to be actively making up excuses for herself to eat people. She decides to scare Brad because he stares at her while she's naked. She should be used to people seeing her naked by now, and since she's not going to get any clothes to fit her that's not going to change. And anyone would stare dumbstruck if they were going about another routine day of fishing and suddenly a 200 foot tall giantess walked up to where they were and squatted above them. This was unfair to Brad and Justine must know it. She toys with killing him because he resembles her father in appearance, once again not his fault. Then decides to eat him when she finds out he's an adulterer, giving him a trick question and goading the simpleton into giving the wrong answer, to justify killing him. Granted, he should have been thinking about the potential harm she could do his family but a terrified, confused, and panicked simpleton who had only been fishing a few minutes earlier may not be thinking straight. She didn't seem to know the guy personally so her acting as judge, jury, and executioner was unfair. Deep down she probably knows all this, but she probably just wanted to eat something she didn't have to chew. Since chewing means crunchy, unpleasant, and bad tasting. Eating Brad was a slippery slope on the moral threshold. Although everyone she's eaten so far have committed or have been perceived to committed adultery, and this seems to really set her off. Perhaps personal, or religious reasons for her.

Brad was probably still alive in her stomach when Justine took her long big drink of water at the river. It would be neat to see things from his perspective as Justine's stomach begins to fill up with water. And as he drowns inside her he realizes how small he is when her simply taking a drink is enough to kill him. Ironic since she discovered him by nearly peeing on him, expelling what she drank, and here he is, drowning inside her, in what she just drank.

Switzerland in 1673 would have been split into mostly rural Catholic Cantons and more developed Protestant Cantons, with the feuding superpowers of Bourbon France and Habsburg Germany just across the border. Much later in the story she could potentially play into the power politics of the time, with potential attempts to recruit, study, or use her.

Overall, a realistic story about a giantess trying to get by in a less developed and more rural time and setting, with fewer places to hide, is a great idea and concept for a story, and I hope that this story goes on for a long time.

Author's Response:

I have to say your feedback has been very helpful so I thank you for your input. The logistical challenges Justine faces along with the rest of the town will only increase as time goes on. Tough choices will arise that likely will take both her and the people of the town down path's much darker than anything they could encounter in a nightmare.

Well this thickens the plot. One of the Justine's biggest advantages thus far has been her habit of not leaving any witnesses to her cannibalism, apart from timid Christina. Roger seeing her poop out human remains while swallowing John, and fully intending to warn the town changes things. Roger really shouldn't have any trouble convincing the townsfolk, when Justine leaves evidence behind. All he, the experienced scout, has to do is lead the townsfolk back to the spot where Justine relieved herself and present the evidence. There's no better way to see what she has been eating than to go through her waste, and her waste has the remains of 4 people in it, with evidence they were swallowed whole and alive. The townspeople can't avoid evidence this damning. This would also cause huge anguish for the families of the missing (James, James' girl, Brad) since it would not only confirm their deaths, it would force family and friends to go through the gross, gruesome, and traumatizing task of going through her poop to recover remains for identification and burial. They would also have deep resentment for Justine for the indignity of her literally discarding their people as her crap. Although their resentment towards her would be tempered by their fear of her power, that she can swallow someone whole and alive, have them die inside her, and then perform the indignity of having their bodies come out of her butt encased in a 20 foot log. That kind of fate, and her dominance in being able to do that, should keep the villagers fearfully in check. It would be interesting to see the village's reaction, Mark and Kevin's reaction, and Justine's reaction, to her cannibalistic secret being out in the open. It could force Justine to stop trying to make a good sympathetic impression, and just take over the place.

At Justine's size, not only would she be huge enough to be nearly invincible, her skin thickness would be so great that musket and flintlocks would be nearly useless against her. Muskets and flintlocks simply lacked the piercing power and velocity of modern bullets, soft lead rounds would transfer kinetic energy but would lack piercing ability. Even a very big musket round would probably shatter on impact without piercing her skin. They would also have a very slow rate of fire. This was why bears were considered so dangerous to hunt before modern rifles and bullets, musket tended to only wound them and have them charge. Justine is many times bigger than a bear. Long swords or halberds could maybe pierce her skin, but it would require super strength to drive them in for any depth. It could be like a non venomous spider bite for her. Annoying, but far from life threatening. If she decides to take over the villager's are going to be stuck with her.

Justine showing John her feces, just before swallowing him, is an act of casual, probably unintentional cruelty. She's really driving home the point that he and his mother are, and literally will be, nothing but crap to her. I got to admit that I do feel bad for the character, and Justine should feel bad for what she did to the people she knew (John and Francis). She was the one who cheated and betrayed her promise not to eat him, even after having his mother lick dirt, human blood, and gore off of her. And in hindsight John is probably telling the truth about not seriously expecting to kill Justine with their puny weapons, and that they were just trying to drive her off. She's probably right about him never being able to forgive her if she kills his mother, but she still has time to throw them up if her conscience nags enough at her. Since now everyone will be thinking of her as a monster, a showing of mercy could go a long way in showing otherwise. Time in her stomach would be punishment enough for the 7 in it, and they could warn others just how unpleasant it is in there, and the futility in opposing Justine.

Considering the devastation, from the point of view of a regular sized person like Roger, that Justine causes running into the woods to pee and poop, knocking down so many trees along the way back and forth, and that she has to pee several times a day, poop once every day or two days, and drink and eat an equivalent amount, that even if she manages to take over the town, the locals are going to have to put up with sanitation and supply problems with her. It could get annoying if she's drinking the available water supply, and all they're left with is the same water, after it passes through her "second hand." Although on the bright side, they would never have to worry about another town fire, since Justine could just pee on it. It seems that she might eventually have to go along with another better funded group that would be better suited to sustaining her, which is where I guess the Holy Roman Empire comes in.

Roger and how the Germans/Austrians play along into the story will be very interesting. She would certainly be of immense interest to them, but probably not enough to provoke a war, at least not one that was already ongoing. In 1673 France and England would have been carving up Holland, while Spain and the Holy Roman Empire would have been trying to defend it in the Franco-Dutch War. It's interesting how Roger seems to think that she's a weapon, but doesn't have a clue how this came to be. He would probably be left to assume sorcery or alchemy. His superiors and court intellectuals would probably disagree that the French would have the capability to make someone like her, and the debate between them and their reasons for how she came to be would be amusing, sorcery, divine intervention, supernatural curse, alchemy, "accident of the universe," or her being from a "slumbering race of giants” etc. If they come for her in the future of the story, she might just go with them in exchange for food and protection. If they decide to use her in their military they would most likely use her sparingly as a form of psychological warfare, they would probably try to mostly study her, or maybe she could catch the attention of a prince with fetish interests in her.

Overall, a pivotal chapter, with her secret coming out, this opens the door for many immediate term, near term, and far term storylines. A giantess in an alternate universe's 1600's is one of the better story ideas on this site, and considering how much storyline potential there always is in this world, and your detailed descriptive narrative, this story is an ongoing site highlight that I really hope goes on for a long time.

Author's Response:

Thank you again for your very detailed input and reviews. I expect life will be making things harder to update the story often, but I hope interest in the story stays and that I can keep it going for quite some time as I have really come to like the idea of people from this place and time having to deal with a giantess.

Nothing wrong with a long chapter, the more detail the better. A reflective chapter focused on those affected by Justine's actions and their surviving loved ones would have to be set a little bit in the past since Justine seems to be getting ready to take over the town herself. Probably set some time after the disappearances of some of the locals and the discovery of their bodies in Justine's waste in the woods, but before the start of this chapter.

Justine doesn't seem to know that the majority of the townspeople know about her cannibalism, even though the towns people have since discovered the bodies of those she swallowed in her waste, and this probably will cause her to underestimate just how scared the people are of her and how they have good reason to be scared. After all, they don't want to be in her next bowel movement. Mark himself seems to be a bit clueless about what the rest of the town already knows. Even after swallowing Marvin, Douglas's grandson, and pooping out the bodies of five people nearby, Justine seems to naively think that she and Douglas are on good terms, and that he can, and would be willing to help her with alchemy. Not that Douglas could help her anyway, since alchemy doesn't work anyway, and if it did he wouldn't be dying of what seems to be cancer, known as a "wasting disease" at the time. After that as of yet unnamed 13 year old girl in chapter 20 saw Justine expelling her waste in the woods, including her log with the 5 bodies in it, she no doubt went about alerting all the others in the out of town farming community, and now that out of town farming community also has proof of Justine's cannibalism too. Justine doesn't seem to know that her own digestive system reveals her misdeeds, and that if she swallows someone her butt will give away this secret. At her size her droppings are about the length of small houses and reveal exactly what, (and who) she has been eating. And considering her size, and this being an era when any country person could track much smaller creatures by what they left behind, there's no way for Justine to not leave behind logs without them being noticed, and with evidence, if she continues eating people. Justine doesn't seem to have thought about this. Although if she does make peace with a community of regular sized people they could very easily check what she has eaten to make sure she hasn't eaten people recently, maybe even make this a condition of her staying to give the people reassurance.

Some of the people affected in Justine's town would include: 1. The townspeople who would have to go through the gruesome and unpleasant task of digging the bodies out of Justine's waste. 2. The town doctor who would have to write a medical report based on the examination of the bodies of Justine's victims, with the knowledge that he's writing the first report on the aftermath of the whole consumption of living human's. 3. The grief and trauma of the victim's families who would have to identify the bodies, come to terms with their missing kin turning up dead, and their bad deaths and undignified disposal, they were swallowed alive and expelled with her literal shit, and how that would make them feel towards Justine. This would be the families of Brad, James, and his girlfriend. Justine's father's body would go unclaimed. 4. The families of the squashed watchmen struggling to make identifications. 5. The surviving watchman, the one who was swallowed and thrown up with John, struggling to come to terms. 6. John working towards summoning up the courage to ask Justine where he can retrieve his mother's body for burial. Knowing that if Justine didn't have any feelings for him he would be dead too and in the same log, and how that makes him feel about Justine. 7. The priest, or whoever is in charge, planning to rally a mob with torches, burning oils, and pitchforks, commoners couldn't afford much else, when Justine arrives. 8. The families of those still missing, the 3 watchmen and the hunter who Justine digested along with Francis, perhaps still holding up hope, sinking into grief and anger, or even working up the courage to ask Justine after she takes over the town to ask where they can retrieve the bodies.

People in the farming community outside of Justine's town would be affected too. The 13 year old girl who saw Justine expel the remains of those other 5 victims, has by now alerted that community to the giant log with the bodies in it and probably caused a panic there too. Douglas, who Justine tried to befriend would be hit hard with this information, with Marvin missing. His family would put 2 and 2 together and deduce (correctly) that Justine probably ate Marvin too. And while Douglas will probably try to convince himself that Justine wouldn't do that to him and his family, his family might blame him for naively bringing in a monster. Russel on the other hand would be feeling vindicated, and he and his family would be taking great pleasure in antagonizing Douglas and his family, causing even more anxiety and grief. After all, from Russel's point of view Douglas tried to befriend a monster to fight his battle for him, therefore he deserves to lose a grandson to said people eating monster. That and for being stupid enough to try and befriend a monster, "it's in her nature to consume and kill." Justine would be really hurt if she heard that, but Russel would be right since she did swallow Marvin, and unless a Mandela effect made him invulnerable, he's dead and he's dead because Douglas trusted her. Justine seems to be trying to make amends for her actions but she seems to think this will be easy. What if she tries to visit Douglas again, to atone or ask for magical help, especially if Marvin is still in her digestive tract. Douglas' family would probably give her an angry reaction, point out that Russel was right, and maybe even demand that Justine immediately release Marvin right there. Justine probably would be hurt, but she'd probably know that she did betray Douglas and his family's trust. The father of the mentally challenged boy, that Justine swallowed would also be someone in the farming community that Justine affected, trying to console his man child son from his nightmares about being in the belly of the "lady monster", while dealing with his own bad memories of being swallowed by Justine and knowing that it was only her mercy that saved them from a gruesome fate that he now knows she subjected others to. On the plus side, Justine didn't cause any harm or hard feelings during her brief trip to the lead knight's town, aside from the shock caused by her size and nudity. Good job on the character motivation on the lead knight and why he was so stubborn, he wanted to prove that he and trained heavily armored cavalry weren't in inevitable decline.

Mark seems to be developing a fetish for Justine's massive body and her bodies capabilities. Being fascinated by her putting out a small house fire by spitting on it, staring at her vulva, having dreams about her, being fascinated by her dominating the knights, being turned on by her carrying him, being amazed at how much water she can gulp down to fill her stomach, even wondering about any fish being inadvertently consumed. Justine seems to have noticed and found this amusing, letting Mark play with her hair. It would be interesting if Mark's curiosity about the human body and subconscious desire to be dominated, could cause him to eventually ask Justine if she would swallow him, with a lantern, on an empty stomach, and throw him up quickly of course, so he could be the first to see what no one else has seen well before.

Lewis's mother has been alive in Justine's stomach for quite some time, and gone through quite a lot. She survived having Justine's stomach partially fill up with water, when she drank, had several chewed cows fall on top of her when Justine ate, then was finally finished off when her stomach completely filled up with water when Justine drank again. It would be interesting to get things from her perspective. All in all, it takes a while for Justine's human victims to die, it makes sense since the acid isn't that fast acting or corrosive, and they are more likely to die from suffocation first.

Justine taking over the town like Mark suggests she should, runs into the challenges of disarming the mob with its fires and pitchforks and disarming them quickly without killing them, or seriously hurting them. And scaring the people enough to make them realize fighting her is pointless, without scaring them so badly that they flee into the woods. For Justine to disarm the mob quickly without killing or hurting them, the easiest way for her to do this is simply to pee on them. Modern day riots are put down with water hoses, and Justine finished this chapter by drinking a huge amount of water. Being knocked over by a huge amount of hot, slightly smelly, liquid being shot out of female plumbing, would quickly and pretty safely disarm the crowd and put out any fire they can bring, as well as really dampening their enthusiasm, machismo, and humiliating them. Driving home how easily she can disarm them with even a simple everyday act, and how pointless it is to pick fights with her. This anticlimactic confrontation between Justine and the mob would work really well with the perspectives from Justine, the mob itself, and maybe even Mark.

Nice job on the last 2 chapters. It was good to see Justine stand up for herself without becoming stupidly aggressive. Rather than just kill them all she found a less lethal way to disarm them, humiliate them, express her dominance, and assert herself. It would be a pretty funny point of view from someone from the mob, leaving their home with bravado and swagger to join the others in killing the "giant witch" formerly known as Justine, only to return to their family dazed, completely drenched, and reeking of urine, and having to explain exactly how Justine effortlessly defeated them all. Father Wesley tried to shame Justine on her "unladylike" behaviour but as a perpetually naked giantess who is tired of always being attacked Justine doesn't care anymore, and has taken on a more unashamed and assertive streak. Piss her off and she pisses on you, give her shit and well... It will be interesting to see how a more assertive Justine goes about laying down her dominance and rule over the town. It's something to look forward to. Still even the more assertive Justine has her limits, she's still pragmatic enough not to kill Father Wesley. Good call on not killing him off, even though he's not the most likeable character, realistically due to the important position he is in, he's one of the few characters that not even Justine can kill without some very negative consequences. I'm sure that he will have to mellow out anyways, after how all anyone could do was just watch as Justine publicly swallowed him, and spending time in her stomach to think things through. Besides his return to the community after being publicly swallowed is a good demonstration of mercy to the community.

When she was going to punish Christina, and later Aria (who is a criminal) I expected her to sentence them into servitude. She has no one to pick all the cattle bones stick in her teeth, wipe her when she relieves herself, or clean other hard to reach places. Things she can't practically do due to her size. I suspect Justine, who now rules the town, will probably sentence those caught misbehaving in the town to time in "community service," which of course, means servicing her.

Justine may have taken over this town, but what about the surrounding areas. When she wandered to a neighbouring farming community, she swallowed the man and his son (whom she threw up), got involved in the feud between Russel and Douglas, ate Russel's livestock and humiliated him, pooped out the remains of 5 people (including John and Amanda's mother), then ate Marvin in the night. How did the rest of the community react when they found Justine's waste with the 5 people in it, does Douglas' family blame Justine for Marvin's disappearance, and does Russel try to cause trouble and delight in Douglas' missing grandson. She also briefly visited that knight's town, but she didn't cause any trouble there.

Bertram's plan was completely stupid. With the title "An Unwitting inside tour" I was expecting Bertram to maybe have a clever plan to go with his brave plan to go through Justine's insides. Maybe, he had a large airtight casket with a window and just enough air inside to maybe get him through his tour through Justine. Or maybe a freak physical occurrence rendered him nearly invulnerable. Then you realize he's a dumb 13 year old with more courage than brains and that he has no real plan. He seriously thought that he could just enter Justine's stomach in the night to rescue his mother who was swallowed in the morning and simply cut his way out of Justine's innards with a little dagger, when long swords and spears have very little effect on her. He's a sad and sympathetic character but not a very smart one, and despite his bravery he will have accomplished nothing, and whoever is tasked with body retrieval will simply be recovering his and his mother's remains from Justine's waste the next time she moves her bowels. A lot of these characters are undeniably courageous, but bravery only goes so far in this story. Bertram, the guy in the mob who still continued to attack, the knights, all knew they were outmatched but still continued only to lose even more. Brave, sympathetic, but stupid. There are very good and detailed long descriptions of her victim's succumbing to her stomach in this chapter. Some previous victims like Brad and Francis drowned, but poor Bertram and Aria have to suffer through slow digestion.

Justine may be trying to moderate herself and take a more assertive attitude. Asserting herself and taking over the town rather than continuing with constant, one sided, skirmishes. She has more self control, and is more pragmatic, sparing Father Wesley when she realized she had to. Yet, she still has 4 people (Marvin, Lewis' mother, Bertram, and Aria) among the cattle parts in her intestines waiting to her to unload. And she still has killed people out of past grudges, like Lewis' mother and Aria. It will be very interesting to see her as the overseer of the town. And to see how she can try to make amends with character's like John and Amanda, maybe tell them where they can retrieve their mother's remains. Looking forward to see how things will develop in this well detailed and epic length story.

Author's Response:

I am sure Justine will be finding ways to subject people to "community service" shortly to punish them as she tries harder not to kill people out of guilt, remorse and fear of rejection by Mark/Kevin. Not even to mention how irritating being a giantess with no clothing, shelter or tools to use can be. That and I get the feeling Justine is starting to enjoy the power her size project's upon her fellow smaller weaker human beings.

Interesting scenario, a feral, uncivilized wild woman giantess causing trouble for a small kingdom.

Just a bit of a inconsistency about Talitha's size. It's said she's 100 feet but in the first chapter she swallows 30 people whole, to do this she would have to be a lot bigger, at about 100 feet a giantess would only be able to swallow one person at a time, it would be like swallowing a skinny pickle. Maybe Talitha is bigger?

Jack causing Talitha to panic when he goes into her anus is funny, but I don't know why Talitha didn't just use her anal muscles to fart him out or squeeze him out like a turd instead of panicking.

I can pretty much guess that the poison isn't going to kill her just badly irritate her digestive system, adding to Talitha's misery.

It seems that her skin is too thick for sword or arrows to have much effect, so that leaves her insides as her vulnerability. Maybe Charon can cast an invulnerability spell on Jack, and trick Talitha into swallowing him. With her soft insides under the threat of Jack and his dagger as he stays and passes through her digestive tract, Talitha can be forced to submit under the pain and threat of having her insides cut as long as Jack stays inside her going through her.

Author's Response:

Ah, yes. Now that you mentioned it, 30people in her mouth didn't make sense... I will edit and change that part of the story. ( Do excuse my inexperience as this is my first time writing a giantess story )... but thank you for putting this to my attention kind sir :)

Good cliffhanger as things start to fall apart for the heroes. Talitha's giantess flatulence acts as a reminder to Jack of the boys still in her digestive tract, and the fact that he will likely soon to joining them. At her size there's no no way he can outrun Talitha, hopefully Charon can pass him some sort of protective amulet or something before he's swallowed, to protect him and the others from the heat, pressure, gases, and acids as they travel through Talitha's innards. Jack seems to be going from hero to Jonah, traveling through the giantess' innards as punishment for his overconfidence, a trip into Talitha's digestive tract could humble the hero. Talitha could maybe make a getaway with the with Jack and the others in her digestive tract, and maybe Mason or the princess in a "king Kong" like scenario with the good guys thinking she's won.

Interesting scenario. A "civilized" giantess selling "protection" from wild giantess attacks while abusing her employees. What I can't help but wonder about is the social contract in the world of the story. It's implied that giantesses are very rare but those that live among regular sized humans get a lot of accomadations, special walking lanes, giant sized furniture and devices etc.

I can't help but think of how this world works so, my theory is that giantesses have been a social ruling class for as long as they've been around, like a nobility. The regular sized people have always premptively been prevented from forming much of a military or weaponry by their giantess overlords, and any "peasant revolts" have been dealt with extremely harshly. With rebels and their families being subjected to live swallowings, slow crushings, and other cruel and humilating executions, with the crushed, mutilated, and even excreted remains being put up as public warnings against rebellion.  With a exploding regular sized population and new technology, no weaponry or military though, the social contract changes a little. Giantesses are given huge monetary allowances by cities big enough to accomadate them, which they can use to pay for the massive construction costs of furniture big enough for them, buildings big enough for them, and food big enough for them, Naomi's sandwhich must have involved the sacrifice of a lot of wheat and turkeys. A lot of money must also go into her clothes. Some things might be too logistically difficult like enough water and a plumbing system large enough to accomdate giantesses so they probably bathe in the sea and relieve themselves in designated areas. Cars and planes are probably logistically unavailable too, but at their size and speed they don't really need them. To discourage killings and destruction, any deaths and damages costs come out of the giantesses allowance, while some rich neighbourhoods and towns pay off giantesses to avoid them altogether. To make even more money some giantesses have high paying extra jobs for extra income probably using their huge size as an advantage. Giantess firewomen, construction workers, carpenters, and tailors for other giantesses would probably be in demand. Likewise, there might be some wild giantesses who reject the allowance system and live off the land as naked, but not unintelligent savages, occasionally rampaging and eating humans. The kind that Naomi sells insurance against, and is considering bribing. Insurance also probably covers "accidents" with "civilized" giantesses too.

Naomi kills those who annoy her but it's stated that she seldom does this since she doesn't like to pay for damages and funeral expenses. Since giantesses effectively run the show she can pass off blatant murders as "accidents" but she seems to still have to give the courtesy of pretending her murders are "accidents." In hindsight it's a bit strange that Mr. Stevens' family didn't have giantess insurance, since Naomi would probably demand that all her employees have it, and considering how dangerous she can be, it would be pragmatic for them to have it. Considering that funeral costs are automatically included in death fines this means that someone has the unenviable task of retrieving the bodies of those killed in giantess "accidents." Soon Naomi will be obligated to release the shriveled bodies of Sandra McLaughlin and the others she swallowed while coming up with laughable excuses for their "accidental ingestions" probably claiming that her lawyers somehow got mixed up in her sandwhich without her knowing. Naomi's letter to Sandra McLaughlin's family is going to be fun, with her coming up with a scenario where she "accidently" and "unknowingly" ingested her employee of 7 years and didn't realize it until it was too late. Expresses deepest "sympathies" "regrets" and "sadness" and how her longtime employee will be missed blah blah, and how a closed casket funeral is recommended for the retrieved body, and how "generous" their giantess insurance is and how wise they are to have it.

In addition to selling insurance Naomi should also consider selling safety products. For example, a life support suit similar to a deep sea diving suit, with enough air and protection to pass through a giantess' digestive tract, and strong enough to survive light crushing. Wild giantesses could be instructed to play dumb, and give enough time for those who have survival suits to put them on before swallowing them, or pretending to try to crush them, thus having the survival suits credited with people's survival. Naomi could test the suit design herself before putting them for sale, seeing how much crushing pressure they can take, and making sure that an employee wearing one can make it through her alive after being swallowed by her. Another idea is she could sell "giantess proof reinforcing" of homes. So her company could sell expensive structural reinforcement for homes, however not strong enough to prevent the destruction of the place if a giantess is really serious. The homes could carry home security badges and logos from her company, and Naomi could simply instruct the rampaging wild giantesses to avoid crushing the homes that carry her companies "crushing proof reinforcement" logo. Her company could also have a body retrieval service. A team sent in to recover strewn about bodies, crushed bodies, and even the excreted bodies of the swallowed, or those who were wearing survival suits and need to be picked up alive. Since she's briding the wild giantesses they could agree beforehand on a spots for them to excrete those they swallowed for pickup. Her teams sent in to effected areas can document the destruction caused by wild giantesses, with gruesome footage, and interview survivors who no doubt will credit their survivals, and/or their homes survivals, to Naomi's company safety products. All of this "documentary footage" by retrieval and damage assesment teams could be used as a scare campaign to drum up sales for giantess insurance and safety products.

As for William's reward. Maybe she could present herself naked, and accomadate any request of his for a night. Regular sized human and giantess interactions like that might be fantasized about but rarely realized so this would be a rare treat.

Author's Response:

I've always loved this comment. I can't beleive I've never responded to it. You lay out an interesting take on things. Some of them are right on with what I'm thinking and will manifest as the story progresses. Some other things I hadn't thought of, but I am definitely going to look for ways to incorporate them into the story. Thanks for reading and thank you for your input! I especially like the house reinforcement and the body retreival ideas.