Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed
Date: October 27 2017
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Red
Hey man, I just read the first 4 chapters of this sotry, and I have to say I love it. I really like the characters and the situation you put them in, with the girl having to fight her dark urges to kill the guy. Mira is super interesting, and Anthony is too. I do kinda agree with the other commenter that things seemed to move from hate to love a little bit quickly, but I think this story has a ton of potential going foward. I hope it's a long one.
Author's Response: Hey there Kanto! thank you for reading and reviewing the story! I'm really glad you liked it! And yeah, I know when transitioning to the actual practical application of the story from the outline it was a little off, but in the grand scheme of things, trust me, it works out and you'll understand why it seemed the way it did! Just like I told MadHatter, stay tuned, all will be explained, and I hope you like where we end up going! Thank you again, friend, for taking the time to give feedback!