I forgot to ask, how to we add our own shorts to this? Do we post them in the comments? Email them to you? I tried finding a way to just add it and I couldn't figure it out.

Love it so far. I think you've done a great job at setting up the rest of the story with this chapter. You said you want to focus a lot on character development. I recommend finding a balance of action, which is mostly what people come to this site for, and character development. If you find a good balance, you'll keep people interested in the plot, which will make for better action scenes, and then the action scenes will keep them wanting more.

Can't wait for more!

Great concept, exquisite writing, fantastic read. Thank you for posting this. I hope to read more from you soon.

Great story so far. I didn't expect the antagonists to be transphobic but that makes sense. My favorite part so far was when the girls were spitting on him, which unfortunately was glossed over pretty quickly, but still well done.

I very.much hope for some more non-feet related stuff soon.

But you're a good enough writer that you've made me hate his family, so I hope for some sort of revenge at the end. Maybe he does something simple like just getting a gun and shooting them, then he goes to jail for murder where more fun can happen in a sequel story.

Anyways, thanks for the content!

Really great story. There was plenty of setup, it didn't feel rushed, and it didn't feel like a slog. Still hoping to see more of Vicky, hopefully a lot more, and hoping to see Michelle continue with her revelation that she could use Mike to basically make giantess content for a while, all the while Mike continues to get messed with by Cindy and Doug. Absolutely fantastic.

Where this story falls off is that the characters started out very believable, but turned into tools for smut fiction all too quickly. I would have liked to see more realistic, reasonable behavior from all of them. We saw how much Cindy loved Mike and supported him, even through the disappointment of his size changing, but she took revenge so nonsensically quickly without even a word to him. From the way she had been written up until that point, I very much expected her to ask him about it first and mostly believe him when he said it was his sister.

I also would have liked to see more emotion from Mike. Through all the betrayal, all the pain, the only thing he ever shows is anger. With all he was going through, I really wanted to see him show genuine sadness and sorrow to his sister about the way she was treating him, and for her to open up a bit to him and feel really sorry for the way she was abusing her own brother.

We're here now though, and I'm not upset about it. What I want to see from the rest of this story is, first, all the things from my first paragraph. Then I'd love to see Mike grow back and seek the death penalty for all of them, if not simply kill them himself, as well as that company clearly abusing human rights to go down. With the way Mike is written, and the utter, inhuman terror they submitted him to out of fucking nowhere, I wouldn't be surprised if he grew back, immediately bought a weapon, and just murdered them all. He gets arrested for murder and sentenced to prison, and from the information made public through the trial, the company gets taken down and the doctors arrested.

Anyways, that's my take. Can't wait for me, no matter what you do with it. It's all good fun. :)

This brings back memories. Way back when the giants and giantesses talking in all caps was fairly normal. Can't say I missed that part haha.


Author's Response:

Ha! I thought the same thing as I uploaded. 

The story doesn't read like it's finished yet, but it says it is. Hope to see more of it.

I'm really loving this so far, I hope you keep it up. One thing that maybe be helpful is, whenever a person starts speaking that wasn't speaking before, it should start on a new line. It makes chapters far easier to read, and this story is good enough that I would love it to be as good as possible. Here's an example:

"Dialogue should start on its own paragraph," I said confidently, "and as long as it's the same person that keeps talking, it can just continue like this."

"However," My boyfriend interjects, "When another person starts speaking, that should end the paragraph and start a new one."

"Even if the entire paragraph is just a single line of dialogue?"

"Indeed."