It's always such a treat when this story is updated. Looking forward to seeing more - you really left us on a cliffhanger!

This is still, without a doubt, one of the hottest stories on this site. I always hoped we'd see a continuation that saw the obsessive side of Tina's love developed.

By far, one of the hottest stories on here, very surprised it hasn't seen more attention. Would love to see you continue.

I especially like how it takes a different angle on the NWO genre. In the first chapter, men are referred to as slaves, pets, toys and Emily wants to be his owner.

In the latest, Max is 'boyfriend' and 'babe' to Emily, and we see another of the 'younger' giantess generation who even has a husband!

It seems like women actually become more empathetic, and are able to develop healtheir relationships the more they're infused with the virus. It's a very unique take on this archetype that I really appreciate. Plus, there are way too few stories where a giantess and a micro both get even more out of sex at their altered sizes.

Really hoping to see more gentle and sexy scenes!

Loving the story! The gentle domme aspects, physical descriptions, and Allison's growing affection for John are what really sell this for me. The scene where she coos over her milk-drenched brother is aces.

If you're taking unsolicited suggestions (what with the writer's block and all) - I think you've laid the groundwork for one of two compelling arcs. The first - John's growing desperation and ultimate acceptance as the world changes and he's fully dehumanized (which is how 90% of these NWO stories end up panning out and is frankly boring).

And the second (IMO, far superior arc) - an exploration of the growing affection/desire of John's family (especially Allison) for their shrunken man, and how this conflicts with their struggle to maintain familial propriety and status quo.

How I would work this - introduce a "best girl." Someone from John's past or present, someone he trusts and who respects him. Maybe she's resistant to the infection when we first meet her (so you can cash in on a big transformation later). But someone with an easy, eager relationship with our protagonist, who can make Allison jealous and force her to grapple with her growing attachment to her brother. That gives you conflict, an arc, and a final resolution when Allison (or best girl) gives into (or reconciles) her feelings.

And if that sounds like garbage, then don't be afraid to do something bold! If you're not sure what the next day in John's life looks like, maybe hop five years into the future, or examine/introduce a different character altogether.

Hope your writer's block clears up. Looking forward to reading more of this!

Hot damn, this is the best chapter yet. Besides the A+ physical descriptions, the domme aspects are so soft but so insurmountable. I appreciate that the humiliation aspects are primarily from living in his own head, while she simply gives him the powerful choice - suck or starve. Too many stories with these themes go full on infantilization, and I like this unique, knowing approach. The "darling" at the end is a very nice touch, placed where it could as easily be chiding mockery or slip of passion. Minor note tho - are you writing this on a phone? A bit of wonky autocorrect going on.

Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the very positive review! Yes, I'm writing on my phone mostly which leads to many basic spelling and grammar issues, and there's a limit to the number of times I'm willing to proofread (;

Very interesting story! I'm also one of the folks rooting for a happy ending, that by story's end the good girl is the big girl - whether that means judith grows larger or lily comes to see the error of her ways.

In the short term, it might be fun to see some developments that are a little more out there. Maybe Philip gains a superpower, or some change sends wider NWO ripple effects through society?

Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. I will see about implementing Phillip with a superpower or a new world order as best as I possibly can.

This ain't the kinda thing I usually go for, but goddamn! This story is so well done. One thing I've been thinking, since it's been implied they still have vaginas: we've only seen a focus on how much their dicks drive their lust, but is there a reason the pre of a growing futa seems to shrink their 'preferred' lovers? Does this evolution make a mate a biologically ideal size for a full grown futa?

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! That's actually an interesting idea, since no male penis could ever satisfy these women perhaps they're meant to be used in, other ways. I might roll with that and see where it takes me, if you don't mind ;)