Another great chapter!  The indifference Dr. Walker and Laura show Lori's subject is pretty hot, especially so nonchalantly stuffing him in his tic-tac box down her cleavage.

An observation, Becca likes to curl her toes a lot.  Perhaps once she gets used to the tiny in her butt she may ask Dr. Walker about a tiny for between her toes; maybe entraped in a toe ring with a small cage hid on the side/inside. {a possibility I may also use in one of my future stories}

It's nice that Lori is still part of the story.  Hopefully the psych eval will show he's ready for complete insertion. 

A question, since Dr. walker and her assistant Laura as so invested in this project, do they also have tinies?  It would seem by their attitudes they each probably have multiple, long term/permanant participants stuffed between or up their butts.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

What more can I say than "Thank You" for continueing this fantastic story.

If you should make the research facility part of future stories, please let us know what happens to the tiny guy in the pill box and Lori.

This chapter was, like all your previous chapters, incredible in your descriptions {your words paint quite a vivid experience} and personal moral acceptance / personal responsibility of having a tiny man living between Becca's asscheeks.

Some have suggested that Krystal be Becca's choice as a second; but what if Becca demanded Krystal be given her own tiny boy in exchange for long term experimentation/retention of her own tiny?  Kind of a "I want him long term anyway, let's see if I can get Krystal a tiny of her own for doing so".

Dang, that's a lot of tinies, or rather viables.  As to the question anyone mentions regarding where they got all these tiny men, it's a story, and a great story at that.  Men getting shrunk is not an issue, so why the heck would hundreds of thousands or even millions be any more of an issue.  Keep the story going, it's fiction so have fun.  It's not a scientific thesis being presented for the Nobel Prize.

I think that it's funny that Sophia has no idea 94,538 men are now prisoners living in her ass, and Dr. Walker could care less that a few thousand men are living on her toe.  It would be nice if all those tiny viables on Dr. Walker's toe simply fall into her flesh tissue due to their small size and now live in her little toe, RC at 0%.

Thanks for bringing back Lori.  The years that she has had a tiny living between her butt cheeks is a fantastic touch; as well as all those viable men injected to live forever in her asscheeks. 

One area of confusion, has Becca already become a five year participant, as in "5-year Follow-Up"?  Or is Becca calling to become a five year participant?

Nice story.  I hope you can develope it more.  Perhaps Jones and Bethany can cometo an arrangement in which Jones can send some bad people who escaped justice over to Bethany for her to eat, maybe for his viewing pleasure.

Well done.

Thanks for posting the story.

As for praise, there is too little to get a good sense of your story and your writing skills overall.

That said, as for critisism, you moved your story line along so quickly that little to no specific action is conveyed to the reader.

For instance, 4 hours in Danielle's shoe and not a single description of either the smell or the feel of being in there.  Not to forget the sense of oppression and weakness she felt while in there.

What does "Ace opened his hang" mean?

I think you have a great story plot developing; but if I may make a suggestion.  Write your story out OFFLINE.  Read it, then reread it, then reread it again.  Once you feel you have conveyed to a reader who has NO idea what you are saying to begin with, summerize if it's what you wish to convey, then post it.

Regardless of anything, always post what you want us all to read no matter what any of us {especially me} have to say about it.

Kudos, for both your story line and exceptional art work.  Nice vision of a "Brave New World".

I especially like when Madison held Ian upside down with his head between her legs, very sexy.

A good cover story would be Madison displaying a growing knowlege of the finer workings of the Beta work place, as if she is actually being taught by Ian rather than simply using him.

I do have to ask, your pictures of them walking home, how is Ian not stealing peeks up Madison's skirt?

Why would he ever be disgusted or repulsed at the site between her legs.  Isn't that the greatest site on earth?

Can't wait to see her use him as her pony, if he is up for the position.

I realize you have other plans for him, or that she does; but being her well trained dog would be nice.

The way she stood and walked over him was hot.  More scenarios like that would be great.  Stepping down on his head is definitely a terrific power play.

His sudden compliance is understandable, especially if out of fear; but has she broken him already?  A reluctant dog on the end of her leash would be a nice lifestyle for your story to take; but you've done a great job just doing your story as you have been.

Your note at the end states you are not happy with the dialogue of this chapter; I found the dialogue quite appropriate.  He doesn't know what to say to change his situation and she has already decided upon the outcome she wants.  Pretty much how such an uncomfortable conversation would probably go.

I especially like her statement “You know I was looking forward to introducing you around my house the other day”.  Does she have a house full of "servants"?  Are any as small as he is, normal size, or perhaps even smaller than him?  Do they all serve as servants, or are some human furniture such as her seat cushions, foot rests, pets, or possibly wall decorations?

I can only hope she is done playing with him, packs him up, tosses him into her car trunk, takes him back to her house, and gives him the tour of her home while explaining how she is going to transform him into her "personal servant".

Can't wait to see what happens next.  Will she break him, or will he change his mind and see her as the controlling Dominatrix he adores yet has refused to admit / submit to?

I'm glad she found him again, but what will she do with him now that she has?

Some very minor spelling errors, yet still one of the most intrigueing stories being posted.  Please do continue.