Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed
Date: August 17 2022
Title: Chapter 4: Enid of the Wilds
Another great chapter, I greatly appreciate the regular and steady updates.
I didn't expect the twist with Enid, its nice to see some different fantasy races and characters. I liked her mischievous and bratty attitude. I'm interested to see how she will factor into the story and the party going forward.
With a foxgirl coming into the story, is there potential to see other fantasy races come into play? I would love to see an orc girl dominate Vann with her sweaty feet.
It was also very endearing to hear Vann's proclamation of him loving being her champion and saying she's perfect. I'm eager to see how that relationship develops as well.
A minor detail, but I also found Chadwicks uncomfortable reaction towards the end with learning how he got Enid to agree to join them to be amusing. He makes a good straight man to all of the silliness with the shrinking and women using Vann.
I always look forward to reading more, great job again.
Author's Response: You might say that it's a standard DnD/Warcraft style fantasy world with a ton of possible races. Not sure if there's room for an orc lady in the plot I've got planned, but I'll see. I did have one in A Diplomatic Mission if that's your thing, along with lots of other monstergirls.
Zenovia and Vann are becoming closer, he's something she hasn't really encountered before, even a femdom goddess has room for infatuation in her heart.
Chadwick is our straight man, the normal player in the magical realm lol. I think of him as someone who genuinely just wants what makes his friends happy, if Vann wants to do what he's doing, then Chadwick will go along with it even if he doesn't necessarily want to see it firsthand.