Reviewer: redcars Signed
Date: October 17 2017
Title: Chapter 3: Teleporter Accident
I read your respons but do you really mean what you said? I am a bit speechlech how you cant imagine or think of how dark and unaware fits together? Because... it is the BEST!? I am not really a fan of aware plots, they are actually really boring. What I like though are unaware and half aware half unaware plots, for example some aware person puts the micro people into food or situations where they will die a horrible death by the unaware person. And cruel, dark and sarcastic, of course works the best with unaware. Sadly those are a bit rare to find and you have to do them also "right". Your stories also leck a bot of endings, they always end in a not so dark way. I would really enjoy some cruel dark plots with also endings going beyond the people to die. Maybe do some vore and digestion plots by time, but also some ass "vore". I would like a shrunke brother and friend plot again because those are so awesome. I also liked your futa plots with a futa sister. Maybe make them get put into a tiny vitamine capsular as a prank, by the aware person (friend of brother) and then he gets a phone call and doesnt notice how the unaware sister took her vitamine pills including the unfortunate brother. And then also include of him txting or phoning his siter and she doesnt hear him because of static or thinks its just a stupid joke. The aware friend also would shrink by some accident so he wont help anymore too. That would be really dark.
Author's Response: Damn, gotta admit, those are some good plot lines. I will definitely include them in some upcoming stories. Especially that capsule one where the 'torturer' is unaware of what they're doing to the victim. I'm currently writing a vore story but it is a toddler eating two children. It's not very dark but it does include the victims getting themselves into the situation that ends them.
