Reviewer: cxwaves Signed 
Date: January 29 2017
Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1
Absolutely in love with this..!
I'd actually pay you to write more of this; especially if you do requests
Comment:
Some ideas I had:
She starts making money by taking requests and really rubs it under his nose. She buys stuff to torture him, humiliate him sndwastes it on stupid things and costumes, streaming equipment etc.
Sees a report on how bad waterboarding is on TV and wants to try it (mean thing you cant pass out during water boarding, she might mock him for that)
She breaks some of his bones, ties and gags him up and 'plays' with the broken bones or any other form of hard physical punishment. She uses smelling salts to get him back when he passes out and mocks him for not being able to escape her.
She starts a weekly contest where her fans have to submit mean torture ideas and she picks the "worst"
She has gaming show like elements, like a wheel of torture
Twisted reality stuff: she has all the luck in the world, while her victim is superunlucky; example: he manages to escaper her and hide, but then he has to sneeze and instantly gets found etc.
Author's Response: As it stands, my life is pretty busy and it'll be a while between chapters. If I were making money off of this, I certainly could pump out equal quality chapters at a much faster rate, because I could spend more time on it. I'd also be willing to do commissions. If you really would pay, I'll set up an account for it so that I can start spending more time on writing.
OTherwise, I'll still do it, but it'll be some time before I get to all of that.
