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I'm a macrophile who only likes gentle giants and giantesses. I only like consensual fantasies featuring adult characters, and don't like anything involving pain, abuse, humiliation, bodily harm, death, femdom or BDSM.
Im here only as a reader. I'm not an author.
A smart university strudent makes the best mistake of his life.
I loved the first 7 chapters, and I'm straight. The 8th was good as well, but perhaps you could separate it into its own story?
Thanks for the tip. I've been writing now in coiledfist.net the last two years because oft some homophobic responses Herr, and habe totally forgoten about this story Herr. You are right, that with the Sandra should become its own story. Thanks for reading it all!!! I wish you a nice Christmas time!!! LG aus Berlin
The official sequel to "Who's Really the Bigger Person Here?"
It's been about a year since the events of the last story have taken place. Amy, Ben, Mark, and Johnny reunite for a summer all to themselves. The town is more tolerant of Amy, the military hasn't returned, and things are looking up.
That is until a few new visitors come to town. Who are they and what are their intentions? All of that can be summed up in one statement . . . . . shit happens.
Great read so far, looking forward to what comes next!
unfortunately I don't know when this one is going to be continued. I have ideas for it, just like when I first started it, but they're not coming together as well as I thought. Then I ended up doing other stories. Now I don't know when I'll come back to this. But I'm happy you enjoyed this one and it's prequel
Take your time, do what makes you happy.
ATTENTION ANYONE who is a fan of fantasy stories (like LotR and Wheel of Time) please CHECK THIS STORY OUT! This is my attempt at a fantasy story, since it's is my favorite of the genres.
Titans, a race of giant women who are capable of shrinking down to human size, hold dominance over the majority of the world. The humans that live under them, who are not pets, try to scrape by as unnoticed as possible. Until one Titan sees something that leads her to believe humans are not the animals she was raised to think they are, and that Titans may be the true beasts. But what is to be done about this? Can she hope to stand against an empire of warriors and slavers? Perhaps with some help from a fellow outcast of the world, she can.
I've noticed lately that a lot of the best story-telling, in books or even in song, has a lot to do with what the author/lyricist doesn't put in. I think thats yet another seemingly ongoing sign of your skill as a wordsmith. You sure you don't do this professionally? If you don't its fine, I'm just saying you could make real $ with your skills.
Welcome, thanks for the good read ^^
Very true. War doesn't determine who is right, only who is left. (I don't remember the author of the quote)
how true that is. And thank you for reading and commenting so often on my story
Ok, guess I got the wrong impression.
it's like the Whistler said at the end of his story. The people don't win by waging wars. They win by living.
Wow, uh, the ending was kind of abrupt, no offense intended. There seems to be a lot of loose ends left un-tied, i.e. the future of the Titans, Annallya's mother is still out there, The Titans who invaded Thylara barely had any introduction or backstory fleshed out, it just seemed to happen so fast, and Andrill seems to have completely disapppeared from the story (I completely forgot he even existed, I had to go back to chapter 1 to remember his name). I mean I understand why Annallya loves Gaelin, but didn't Andrill love her too?
All in all it just seems very rushed, and certain plot points seemed to have been built up only to have lot of questions un-answered.
Allow me to tie those up:
-Annallya already speculated on the future of Titans as she watched her city burn. If you were wondering about whether or not they'd face a literal trial and judgment at the hands of humans, that was never the intended ending. Everyone picked up on one line and assumed that the story would end with all of the Titans standing trial before the humans. This isn't a story where the humans come out on top and Titans learn to accept them. This is a story about escape and survival. Frankly, the humans are lucky enough to be alive at the moment. There's no way they're heading back there to try their hand at revenge.
-the fight between Annallya and her mother was meant to be a form of closure. She wasn't needed for anything else. Without a city to provide humans for, there's no more point in having her as an antagonist.
-no they didn't have much backstory but they had build up going all the way back to chapter 13 and continuing from there. They're more of a plot device, so there was only so much needed to make them relevant in the story.
-no Andrill never loved Annallya. He cared about her because she became his friend in a Titan environment. They never had any interaction that built up any romantic feelings between the two. Plus he was kept away from her through most of the story.
That's a fair point, I guess I'm just curious because it hasn't been explicitedly stated that someone has performed a spell, or that there are other traditionally magic beings such as fae or witches/warlocks etc.
You've kept this story excellently realistic, considering the nature of macrophilia, which is quite an accomplishment IMHO, its been very believable. Your writing, realistic or fantastical, is quite a pleasure to read.
that's true. As you've seen before, I like to keep a few things vague for when I want something to pop up later. Thank you very much for the compliment on my writing. I can't tell you what it means to know that my story has been a pleasure to read
I'd like to know more about Gaelin's sword, you've mentioned thats its embued with magics to make it indestructable, yet there has been no other mention of sorcerery in this story that I can recall. Is magic real in this universe or is it just spiritualism, mysticism and myth like in real life's medeival times?
Magic in this world is real, as Gaelin's sword has cut through things that it shouldn't be able to. The reason you haven't seen more of it is because mages in this world are the only ones who can wield it. No one is sure if mages are still alive.
Then again, who says you haven't seen more magic in this story?
No problem at all, just being honest.
Great chapter. I think it illustrates how NOT to become bigoted. Also, Nefferel seems like she could help change the future, either directly or indirectly, now that she has heard the human's side of the story.
I hope that's what it illustrates, that's at least what I was aiming for. Glad to hear that I pulled it off alright. Thanks for the comment my friend
The "Titan"'s continued hipocrisy is not very surprising to me, given that the nature of their actions is itself, full of faulty logic and dangerously misguided ideals.
On a hopeful note, I would love to see Annallya meet her father, if he is indeed alive, and not traumatized beyond recognition by his enslavement, and if he so pleases.
I await the "Titan"'s judgment by trial with baited breath.
You know, I thought the same thing after I wrote those lines about her having a father. Oddly enough it wasn't something I had considered before. The idea has potential.
Also, there won't be a judgment by trial
I figured there would be no trial, that was just me hoping that the humans would take the moral high road and that the Queen/other Titan's would be humbled by humanity in a poetic and merciful way.
My idea being based on the quote "to err is human, to forgive divine".
I remembered the previous chapters. I do hope something very appropriate happens to the Titans, not an execution, that would only solidify their beliefs in human savagery, perhaps a trial by jury.
I remembered the previous chapters. I do hope something very appropriate happens to the Titans, not an execution, that would only solidify their beliefs in human savagery, perhaps a trial by jury, sentencing, Annalyia's mother to live as a human perhaps.
I won't allude to whether or not anything happens to the Titans. But I'm thankful you like my story enough to remember it, and comment. I'll go get started on Chapter 17
Your descriptions are very well done. I'm curious as to how you seem to be so insightful about swordsmanship and other fighting styles. Are you in the service? Do you practice any IRL? I ask because I realize that most of the best author's stories/books/novels contain at least some part of themselves, their experience, it makes their writing more believable and authentic, more sincere.
haha, no I'm not in the service, and I haven't had the time to seriously study martial arts, though after I'm done school I hope to. I guess I've just got a vivid imagination for action scenes, and I'm just good at describing it. Plus I suppose it also comes from reading authors who are much better at that than me. But I take it as a compliment that you thought it was well written enough for it to mean I was experienced in combat.
No problem. Its a good read.
You are, and it does ^^.
Thanks for the feed back. Appreciate it
