Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: May 19 2018
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Incredible story! I do adore the formal dialect the Titans use when speaking which I feel makes them lovely despite the way they treat the humans. It really makes it look like their some form of angels or something that are "guiding" the humans.
Annallya working with Gaelin to free Andrill and the others was both an amazing and touching scene at the end of the chapter. We also got to see a bit more of Gaelin's remarkable skills at work. I do feel like Annallya basically saying if there were male Titans, the world would be doomed because of their egos was a bit harsh and hypocritical of her seeing as she as well as a good deal of Titans have egos that matches their full sizes plus, their here fighting wars with each other seemingly constantly and enslaving humans. Maybe it would be worse if there was male Titan but she wouldn't know that. Not every man has a large ego or are brutes who think of violence, afterall.
Hope to see more. You've definitely got me enraptured in this tale with your outstanding writing and colorful characters.
Author's Response: Hey, thank you for the compliments, and especially in noting the difference in how Titan's speak. I added that little detail to give the Titan's an extra quality that would make them appear superior to humans. I was actually trying to model them after greek/roman style goddesses so that, in all outward appearances they would look and act superior to humans. Inwards, however, you'll find the opposite to be true.
I'm also glad you liked their teamwork in helping the humans escape. As far as Annallya's remarks go, don't worry, she didn't actually mean any of that. She was just ranting and raving out of distress because she was worried for our little protagonists, Gaelin in particular. It's my little way of showing how much she actually cares about him, while staying consistent with her personality. I'll continue to develop that throughout the rest of the story.
Hope to have the next chapter out soon. Till then, thank you so much for reading and commenting