Reviewer: SuicidalCyborg Signed
September 24 2015
Chapter 23: Chapter 23
AMAZING story, i read straight from chapter 1 to 23, it was like a book you just couldnt put down! i absolutely love it! all the detail, all the imagination, all the twists and truns, they combine so well! Keep going with this! its just too good! If you are the author, i am proud to say that you are a gift... speaking of gifts... could you "gift " the process of uploading a story or chapter to a seiries, or a story to a story (whatever)... i would really like to expand on this with my own writing, of course, ill be sure to show a sample to you before producing the finished edit, but i just cant leave this story alone! also i have another 2 stories id like to publish on here (as i dont know yet how to publish i might need your help with that) and id really like your advice and critique on how to improve them... One last thing, check out " a chance with a cougar " and one other (when im able to find it, that one is a masterpiece ), im sure youd love to read one... Youre very much like their style of writing, but yours is just much more...creative, thats the word! Now, go be awesome and continue!
P.S. Good luck on your school work! im sure youll get a graduation for your writing skills XD