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The Shrink Act Files by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

An honest employee of the Techilogic Corporation sets out to investigate the new widespread use of the shrink ray, only to uncover darker revelations about the business he’ll soon wish had stayed buried.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45082 Read Count: 114316
[Report This] Published: May 27 2014 Updated: July 10 2014
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

I wonder if Julia will make an appearance.

Author's Response:

Julia herself will not be appearing, though there will be several more connections to that story.

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed
Date: June 21 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Report 3: South Hanenrow University, Interview 3: Shelby Bill

This is like the Avengers. All my favorite villains/heroes coming together.

Author's Response:

Hehe.  Good thing giantesses are always angry.

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 2: Faith

Maybe this Faith women is Brian's daughter

Author's Response:

Maybe! Who knows??

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Report 8: Closing Thoughts and Relevant Notes

I wonder if the people that took june work here.



Author's Response:

;)

The Shrinking Show - Season Two by Benton Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary:

After the success of Season One, the mysterious studio that runs the Shrinking Show commissions a new season with eight new contestants! One again, eight contestants arrive at the set of this secretive reality show, only learning upon arrival that they will be shrunk down bit by bit, taking part in various competitions along the way. When a contestant shrinks to 1/16th of their normal size they are eliminated--usually. Things are a bit more complicated this time around.

Season Two is longer, raunchier, and all-around better than Season One. As it is a new cast of contestants, it is its own story and you do not need to read Season One to understand what is going on, but it wouldn't hurt.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250434 Read Count: 357417
[Report This] Published: July 06 2014 Updated: April 25 2015
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story very much, i hope dale and Marie make up. Marie is my favorite so far, Carla was at the beginning but is starting to drop on my list.

I didn't know the titan stories were deleted from here and put somewhere else either.

Omega: Inheritance by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 127045
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Address

I can see things turning into something like the Salem witch trials. With betas using omegas to punish alphas they may not like or something by lying about things and possible hurting themselves in order to achieve this. Good stuff

Author's Response:

Definitely an unsettling comparison! Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Kai and Tris by WrittenInTheStars Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Kai is one of the thousands worldwide who have shrunk. Kai and Tris must do their best to keep a hold of their normal life, no matter what gets in the way...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58135 Read Count: 181854
[Report This] Published: August 03 2014 Updated: August 10 2014
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed
Date: August 04 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Goodnight - Kai

I see christy possibly getting shrunk at some point



Author's Response: Why Christy ? :0

The Minish by KevinFred342 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Daniel is a Minish, who has lost his way. Trapped in the woods, he stands alone agaisnt the massive beasts of the woods and the powerful elements of nature. Until he is found by a beautiful girl named Ellie, who, after accidentally almost stepping on him, offers Daniel shelter at her home. Daniel now faces a unique challenge; living with the towering Ellie and her fairy companion, Minnie, as they do their best to attempt to help Daniel find his way home.

 

Contains one tiny man (2inch), one tiny mini giantess (8inch), and one tall normal female (5ft 11inch)


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Gentle, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12101 Read Count: 32438
[Report This] Published: August 04 2014 Updated: May 01 2022
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Girl and her Fairy

Liking it so far hope you continue. 

Luna's Ascension by SpookyTaco Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Ascended women, ten to thirteen feet in height, comprise ninety-nine percent of the world’s population. Matriarchal society forces the few remaining men to marry at a young age.

A husband and his unascended wife, a rare combination, struggle to live in this oversized world. She promised she’d never ascend. Can a marriage survive when a promise is unintentionally broken?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Gentle, Growing Woman, Lesbians, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Ascended
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24592 Read Count: 97085
[Report This] Published: September 16 2014 Updated: October 18 2014
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

They seem like a cute family. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Coming soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Regan seems like the mother type while Addi seems like the father type. Can't wait to see more ash/addi interactions. It seems like ash has it made though with all those women wanting his attention.

Author's Response:

Addie is the quiet type. We'll see more of those interactions later.

As for Ash, he may have escaped the frying pan. But did he jump into the fire?

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So ash will have three guardians,  very interesting. So will we get to see how other males are treated in this story? It seems like ash got luck to have regan and addi because they allow him more "freedom" than that of the typical male. You're leaving for a whole week!? I dont know if i can last that long! Haha good story



Author's Response:

Males are rare and guarded, but I imagine we'll see others at some point. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aww poor regan getting ganged up on. Ash and luna should do something nice for her and addi.And that fara lady seems horrible,  i bet it sucks to be Harold.  Stop being a baby and take it like a woman. .haha i see what you did there.  I love this story.



Author's Response:

Yeh, Regan really tries. I agree, a gift would be nice.

As for Fara, she does seem pretty intolerable. Does she represent the typical wife in this world? We're not sure.

Glad you're enjoying the story!

Dad's Shrunken Stripper *Redux* by Da Boss, Marcinballa Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

I got permission so I'm continuing this story under this account.

 

A father goes to the local strip club for a fun night, where the dancers get shrunk for private dances.  He has no idea that he is very close with one of the girls....


Categories: Giantess, Giant, Humiliation, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51919 Read Count: 155259
[Report This] Published: September 25 2020 Updated: February 13 2022
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed
Date: September 20 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story but did one of the chapters get removed? It was one where Ashley's mom finds her after her dad and mom had sex?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!  That chapter was actually moved to my story "Miscellaneous Chapters / Alternate Endings."  That is because my co-writer and I decided to take the story in a direction that didn't match that ending.  

 

Hope this clears everything up! 

Mom's a Sci-Fi Star by Da Boss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Brian Chapman is a college student who's interested in making movies.  He's also a scientific and technological genius who created a shrink ray.

 

When his over-bearing mother, Cynthia, tries to help him with a film to keep him from failing, she insists on being the star of his sci-fi film. 

 

He's got a shrink ray, what could possible go wrong.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Crush, Feet, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39765 Read Count: 141741
[Report This] Published: June 07 2021 Updated: July 12 2023
Reviewer: Moonpie Signed
Date: October 27 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - A Cold Snack

I’m liking this story it’s very fun. I’m hoping Bridgette is still alive and comes into play now that the parents are together again.

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed
Date: December 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Preparing the scene

I liked this story and hope to maybe see a sequel or even just more stories from you.

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