An ongoing tale where it will we do not know please be patient we are sure it will be memorable.
Amanda, I was surprised to see 'our' yarn on site so soon! Are we going to do a further chapter together?
Okay, Weary Traveller, I take your point, but the dress code for moslems had long been abandoned because of the change in human relations. Besides, it's all fantasy and not to be taken literally. Poetic license and all that.
Author's Response:
banfield why are you wasting your time with minor details futures are not yet written mans reactions not yet known beliefs will change our world has yet to be created let time dictate its direction not the words of others.
Amanda.
Well, girlfood, it's so good to see you back! I have not read your two recent tales but have saved them to read at my leisure. I hope they're as good as all your previous. I shall return to give my comments. A merry Christmas to you, and a happy New Year!
I've just read "Spy" and found it okay but rather disappointed that it held no sexual flavour. I have to ask you, girlfood, how can a female "taste" a victim by simply swallowing? I saved both your tales and in the first that I have commented on, changed the little men to three inches. One inch is far too tiny unless Suzy devours them in bunches like jelly-babies - or "bears" as known in the U.S. Now I'm going to read your second yarn.
Author's Response: Hell my old friend. I hope you enjoyed this story somewhat. Thank you for the feedback. I shall try to do better next time.
Thank you, Bob, for your reply! Like several other authors on site, you do write thrilling yarns. Some are short and sweet, some rather long-winded but nevertheless exciting, but I do wish that the victims are not reduced to such an impracticable size so that the female can make such delightful use of her diminished victims. Never mind my criticisms, creative or otherwise, it's always a pleasure to see your stories.
May the New Year be fruitful for you, my friend.
Well, girlfood, this was/is a good yarn. It was different because we, the readers, were taken through the process of being both captured, swallowed and digested. Still a pity the chap was so small. Hardly a "snack" but a titbit, a sweet. O well, it's your story. Thanks.
As said, a good yarn. As I read it and eventually reached the end I felt the urge to write a story on those lines but with a difference. That is, more description of the predator, a piece of sexual activity, the victim given an injection that numbs his body, no shrinking and then eaten alive, so, no pain but the terror of witnessing himself being slowly - very slowly - devoured by that gorgeous predator. Obviously not suitable for this gts site, but, in my mind, far more exciting for some.
BTW: I have lost your email address, but I don't suppose you're bothered - like several other erstwhlie contacts.
malfunctioning software won't let me delete this story
A very "sweet" little yarn, but as is my usual manner, I would have the girl eat her little pet as she would a chocolate and not simply swallow the fellow. Rather like one would with a chocolate liqueur. But as I say, it's your story.
Well, timescribe (Peter) my "ideas" are on site if you care to look, but I feel I have done enough, otherwise my yarns may become rather repetitive and less exciting.
Thank you for your reply and wishes.
Beautiful Jamaican girl has her way with tiny people from another civilization.She has various interactions with the people.
My first attempt at writing hoping for good feed back.
Well, chomp chomp, years ago such yarns were eagerly read - especially by me because this one has all the ingredients of exciting scenes. The first was that you chose a lovely-looking black female, and then that she chewed up her victims after playing with them although I was disappointed that she failed to insert them in her intimate orifices. But notwithstanding the lack of those actions, you did write a good yarn, and perhaps you might add those "insertion" scenes in your next work; and may I add that the "tinies" are not so tiny so that the gts will have more sexual satisfaction?
Author's Response: I'll take it into consideration
but I'm not sure about growing the Tinies
Actually, chomp chomp, I meant for the victims not to be shrunk so small. It would be just that little is hardly credible like so many, many stories depict. A male shrunk to say...4, 5, or even 6 inches would be far more exciting for any female giantess, so that she could play, use and abuse. She could hardly have any pleasure with insignificant sized victims. However, if you cannot bring yourself to such scenarios, then so be it and carry on. Thanks for your reply.
Author's Response:
The Tinies aren't shrunken people but are actually a miniaturized race, I may add a size changing device in later installments though.
P.S every giantess has their own preferences, yes? :)
Very well, chomp-chomp, the people in this yarn are miniscule, I'll accept that. If you'd care to read my yarn called "Hundreds an' Thousands" you'll see the victims very small and girls buying them in paper bags and gobbling them up like shrimps; but taken individually, it's more exciting for the readers to visualise the larger sized victims being played with as described in my previous review. Gts's and tiny males can get rather boring when simply swallowing is the only outcome. I still like your choice of a black female and the act of chewing her victim to a pulp. Now that is exciting!
Author's Response: I've already read it, and I must say that I loved it. :)
I have just d/loaded this yarn, Zephyr, to read it at my leisure, and shall give my comments. It's good (and rather thrilling) to have a feminine approach to this kind of subject matter. C.U.L.
Ah, Zephyr, I have just read this exciting yarn and I have to congratulate you for its thrilling depictions of a female's darkest desire! I was especially excited by the act of drenching your little chap with your delicious "sauce" by inserting him into your intimate orifice. Ah, heavenly! Jolly well done. It's a story I shall save and treasure. How I'd love to be your next boyfriend.
I fully agree with DToxic that minute creatures eaten by giantesses is not quite as exciting as females eating fully-grown males. I have written many yarns depicting female cannibals using males for their sexual pleasure as well as food - and the male victims are not minimized whatsoever. If I knew of DToxic's em address I would gladly send him/her such stories.
A tale to tease the mind.
Yet another thoughtful yarn from Amanda whom we all thought had drawn stumps and left the field. Very good story telling apart from the numerous grammatical errors, but not awfully exciting as it could be. Could try harder.
Author's Response:
Oh banfield stop being so critical and enjoy whats been written,i am sorry that i have not added to our little yarn i shall strive to please you at some point inthe future x.
Amanda.
Amanda, altho you say I am critical, I must stress that I am being constructive and helpful as is part of my profession. Jolly good to see you back and that you might construct a story to suit us both. Good luck.
Author's Response:
No insult was intended banfield thank you for your review x.
Amanda.
Tony happened to meet Amanda outside the ladies public toilets: Hello, Amanda, you look please with yourself."
"Yes, I am," she replied, "I've just dumped Simon."
You are persistant banfield i'll give you that but the word DUMPED is something i would never use,its very crude don't you think,i am sad that you have been sharing our personal conversations with other author's it seems you "Agrader" and "Timescribe "are not be trusted.But then you are typical males you are all the same male ego's and all that.
Let this be a warning to other female authors who write and communicate on this forum.
Actually, darling Amanda, I have only passed comments with one other member - Stanley Williams - and nothing derogatory has been passed between us. I do like your stories, and apart from the numerous grammatical errors, your visions are rather exciting. Please forgive that silly joke, but we're all rather silly with our thoughts.
Once again, I deny sharing comments with those two characters you mentioned. Please continue your yarns. I save them all, you know. XXXX
Another yarn from "girlfood," but I have to question again as to other writers.....where does the "taste" come from if the predator simply swallows the victim? As you use the word "eat" which implies the biting, chewing prior to swallowing, you only write that she swallows. So where does the "taste" come from? Do oysters have any discernable taste?