Well, Doorknob, (strange title) I have already started on the third chapter of my revision. It's given the main title and recognition of your authorship, and the heading for this part is:- The Day of Reckoning.  Perhaps you may not acknowledge or wish to see what I've written, but you have my address so I shall leave it to you to decide.  I would like to say that it's not often I have the pleasure of enhancing a story on this site, but yours has inspired me.

Although it's a pleasure for any writer to receive reviews/comments, it's also a pleasure to receive a reply.

Yes, iki, it was rather short. That was because doorknob sent it in haste rather than await the whole piece. As for the lack of and content of my revised version, I must confess that I find the "fairy-tale" aspect of mirrors and shadows becoming rather tedious. I refer, of course, to the shrinking of victims etc. In my profile I state that I prefer the act of cannibalism with fully-grown male victims - the cannibals being female; and long, rambling yarns do tend to tire me.    Everyone to their own, my friend.   As for the sexual content, aren't all these stories relating to sex?

Wel, doorknob, I found this 3-part yarn extremely interesting and well-written. Could not fault it except that it doesn't really excite one. I would have put more detail in the description of the female characters - the three girls and the staff of the Exhibition. As well, I always find it hard to accept the minimised victims at only one inch. Such a morsal could hardly be felt by the diner as it descends down her gullet, let alone "fill" her stomach.  However, as you have said, and I, 'everyone to their own.'    Don't let my remarks discourage you. In time, perhaps you'll improve and take heed of what I say. 

Hello Mr Tiny. What a surprise to see your comment on a strory so far back!  Many thanks.  As you have noticed, I haven't written much more recently for this particular site, but have done for two others which I doubt whether you'd be interested in. Both sites cater for the similar scenarios as Gtsworld but not tiny males. As explained in my bio, I much prefer the prey (male) to be fully-sized, but I still love the thought of being shrunk and inserted in either depositories...three actually....which you can guess. Just imagine you given the choice...which one would you choose?

Hello again, Seilaze. I copied that yarn into my docs and read the whole piece again. I was rather disappointed that it did not contain much re: the "member" projecting from her loins. What was written was stimulating and the best I have read on that subject - especially the penultimate paragraph.

However, altho well written, I'd like to point out that the word "drug" is incorrect. The right word is DRAGGED, it being the past tense of the verb DRAG. Also, there is no such word as "stomp." and the correct word is STAMP.

My REMARKS ARE PURELY CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, thus being helpful, not hurtful.

Well Bob, I have just read your yarn and found it very good and entertaining. I did think at first that Penny's daughter might find the escapee and gobble him up, but that of course, would be "far too shocking" esp for the American society.They wouldn't stomach that. LOL.  Anyway,because I haven't read anything for quite a while, I found this fresh yarn quite stimulating. I still imagine in my fantasies what part of the female's anotomy I would be part of after being swallowed - just as you mentioned awhile back in one of your excellent works.   I shall send you an email directly.   Many thanks for your stories, my old friend.   T

I have just read (and amended a little of...) the two parts of your story. I am not a lover of gigantic females...too fairy-story-like for me, ergo, I am, for my pleasure, changing the scenario to make it more realistic. The females, and girls alike, shall be 10 feet tall, and the males shall become a staple diet.

I cannot accept that many readers can get excited by such colossal girls. Well, there are those few that are... those who have given their comments. 

                       Realistically yours....A.B.  U.K. 

I am about to read this two-part ltlle yarn because I am attracted to the size of the "brother" which I have always recommended larger-sized victims (as well as full-sized) so I shall post my comment when read. I'd like to commend you for not taking umbrage at the spelling comment made by the previous critic, just as I used to with Amanda Jones...an erstwhile writer of excellent stories.

Until then, please forge ahead with the 3rd part of your yarn.  

O dear, rather disappointing, Mazerunner. Sister Ann has a good, refreshing age (13) but producing milk...and a virgin?  No-no. As one other reviewer has mentioned...she's using too much adult words, and I suspect that you will describe her boobs far too extravagantly instead of like: sweet buds of May with tiny pink nipples.  I'm sorry to be so critical (although your spelling has improved) and I do hope that, as you grow older, you will pen more stories and be more explicit and imaginative.  Remember this: Females have blonde hair, males are blond. Do you see the difference?

I cannot find the yarn. It seems to be pretty good?